Promise - Part 27 THE END
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Re: Promise - Part 27 THE END
He likes heeer
Why was she crying? Is she that bad?
Why was she crying? Is she that bad?
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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ooh.. i hope she isn't bad...
basty likes her
basty likes her
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Now she is not bad, but.......
She is crying, because she don't wanna leave her friends alone
She is crying, because she don't wanna leave her friends alone
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Someone is falling in love (Basty)
Great part I wan't more!
Great part I wan't more!
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Basty + Laura =....
Nice!
Nice!
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Part 14
- So, what he told?
- He asked what we have planned for today. I said that nothing, so they are coming here and then they will show town for us.
- Oh it sounds good.
- Yeah. So tell me what have you talked with Mikel yesterday?
- Nothing interesting. We just were dancing.
- You lie.
- I don’t.
- So how is he for you when you saw him in reality?
- Well… I fall in love with him that’s for sure. Said Tina and started to laugh.
- Oh, yeah.
- I think that someone has come.
- Maybe it’s Mikel.
- Hi girls! I am back. Said Mikel.
- Hey. I said.
- How is Karla? Asked Tina.
- A bit sad, but good.
- Do you want coffee or tea? I asked
- Coffee please. Said Mikel.
- Ok. I will make. I said.
- So, why she is going to the doctor. Asked Tina.
- Well she is going, because her medicine from asthma it’s too weak for her and they don’t help her anymore.
- Oh. Poor Karla. Said Tina.
- Don’t worry she will be in good hands.
- I hope. Here is your coffee. I said.
- Thanks.
- I am going to open the door. I said.
- For whom? Asked Mikel.
- For boys they have come. I saw them through the window.
- Oh, ok.
- Hello!
- Oh, hi! Said guys and came in.
- Hi Mikel, Tina!
- Hi!
- So, Mikel where is your cousin? Asked Javi.
- She went to my sister.
- Than it means that today we won’t meet her?
- No you won’t
- Are you ready? Asked Basty.
- Yeah we are. Said Tina.
- Where are you going? Asked Mikel.
- Well we are going to show town to the girls.
- Oh that’s good idea, but wait for me. I am going too.
- Ok.
We went out. The weather was really good.
- It’s very hot. Said Tina.
- Well you are at Spain. Said Ony and smiled.
- Look there is a cafe let’s go to eat ice creams. Said Javi.
- Ok, let’s go.
We have just sit when five girls come to us and started to ask boys autographs.
- So, what he told?
- He asked what we have planned for today. I said that nothing, so they are coming here and then they will show town for us.
- Oh it sounds good.
- Yeah. So tell me what have you talked with Mikel yesterday?
- Nothing interesting. We just were dancing.
- You lie.
- I don’t.
- So how is he for you when you saw him in reality?
- Well… I fall in love with him that’s for sure. Said Tina and started to laugh.
- Oh, yeah.
- I think that someone has come.
- Maybe it’s Mikel.
- Hi girls! I am back. Said Mikel.
- Hey. I said.
- How is Karla? Asked Tina.
- A bit sad, but good.
- Do you want coffee or tea? I asked
- Coffee please. Said Mikel.
- Ok. I will make. I said.
- So, why she is going to the doctor. Asked Tina.
- Well she is going, because her medicine from asthma it’s too weak for her and they don’t help her anymore.
- Oh. Poor Karla. Said Tina.
- Don’t worry she will be in good hands.
- I hope. Here is your coffee. I said.
- Thanks.
- I am going to open the door. I said.
- For whom? Asked Mikel.
- For boys they have come. I saw them through the window.
- Oh, ok.
- Hello!
- Oh, hi! Said guys and came in.
- Hi Mikel, Tina!
- Hi!
- So, Mikel where is your cousin? Asked Javi.
- She went to my sister.
- Than it means that today we won’t meet her?
- No you won’t
- Are you ready? Asked Basty.
- Yeah we are. Said Tina.
- Where are you going? Asked Mikel.
- Well we are going to show town to the girls.
- Oh that’s good idea, but wait for me. I am going too.
- Ok.
We went out. The weather was really good.
- It’s very hot. Said Tina.
- Well you are at Spain. Said Ony and smiled.
- Look there is a cafe let’s go to eat ice creams. Said Javi.
- Ok, let’s go.
We have just sit when five girls come to us and started to ask boys autographs.
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Oh, those fans
It's good, I wan't more
It's good, I wan't more
gabrielle- Number of posts : 198
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Good, she's not that bad
I want the next part
I want the next part
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Really?
Next part maybe today, but a bit later.
Next part maybe today, but a bit later.
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- It’s very hot. Said Tina.
- Well you are at Spain. Said Ony and smiled.
ony is so intelligent
i'm glad that it isn't nothing very bad
- Well you are at Spain. Said Ony and smiled.
ony is so intelligent
i'm glad that it isn't nothing very bad
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Yap, really
And faster, because I wan't read more
And faster, because I wan't read more
gabrielle- Number of posts : 198
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Here goes more!
Part 15
- We are sorry that you have to wait. Said Mikel.
- You don’t have to apologize you are famous.
The ice creams were really delicious. We went out of the cafe and again some girls wanted their autographs and photos with them.
- Again fans. Said Tina.
- Yeah. Said Mikel.
- You know let’s go home and in the evening let’s go to the beach to watch sunset. Said Ony.
- Yeah I agree. I said.
At home boys showed to us all videos from their concerts and then we watched tv.
- It’s almost 6 let’s go to the beach. Said Ony.
We went to the beach there was a bit cold. I started to shake.
- It’s cold for you? Asked Basty.
- Yeah a bit.
- So here take my jacket.
- No, thanks.
- Come on take it.
- Ok, ok.
- I know that it’s too big for you, but it won’t be cold for you.
- Thank you Basty.
I put on his jacket and smelled his perfume.
- Mmmmh your perfume.
- What?
- I like them. I said.
Then I went ant sat down on the sand. Basty came too.
- It’s very beautiful evening. Said Basty.
- Yeah it is.
- Have someone told for you that your eyes are very beautiful?
- Well no.
- Then it means that I am first.
- Oh yeah you are. I said and smiled.
- Do you believe in love from the first sight?
- Actually no, but I think that it could be.
- I didn’t believed it, but now I do. He said.
- That’s nice.
Basty turned to me, put his hand on my cheek and bend.
- So what are you doing here alone? Asked Ony.
- What do you want? Asked Basty.
- Just asking.
- But not in time. Said Basty.
- Ok, ok I am going.
- What ever now you can stay here, because you ruined everything.
- Ruined? What?
- I am sorry Laura. I got to go. I remembered that I have to do one thing.
- Yeah ok. Bye!
- Bye!
- What’s happened to him? Asked Ony.
- I don’t know.
- Is this his jacket?
- Yeah he forgot it.
Part 15
- We are sorry that you have to wait. Said Mikel.
- You don’t have to apologize you are famous.
The ice creams were really delicious. We went out of the cafe and again some girls wanted their autographs and photos with them.
- Again fans. Said Tina.
- Yeah. Said Mikel.
- You know let’s go home and in the evening let’s go to the beach to watch sunset. Said Ony.
- Yeah I agree. I said.
At home boys showed to us all videos from their concerts and then we watched tv.
- It’s almost 6 let’s go to the beach. Said Ony.
We went to the beach there was a bit cold. I started to shake.
- It’s cold for you? Asked Basty.
- Yeah a bit.
- So here take my jacket.
- No, thanks.
- Come on take it.
- Ok, ok.
- I know that it’s too big for you, but it won’t be cold for you.
- Thank you Basty.
I put on his jacket and smelled his perfume.
- Mmmmh your perfume.
- What?
- I like them. I said.
Then I went ant sat down on the sand. Basty came too.
- It’s very beautiful evening. Said Basty.
- Yeah it is.
- Have someone told for you that your eyes are very beautiful?
- Well no.
- Then it means that I am first.
- Oh yeah you are. I said and smiled.
- Do you believe in love from the first sight?
- Actually no, but I think that it could be.
- I didn’t believed it, but now I do. He said.
- That’s nice.
Basty turned to me, put his hand on my cheek and bend.
- So what are you doing here alone? Asked Ony.
- What do you want? Asked Basty.
- Just asking.
- But not in time. Said Basty.
- Ok, ok I am going.
- What ever now you can stay here, because you ruined everything.
- Ruined? What?
- I am sorry Laura. I got to go. I remembered that I have to do one thing.
- Yeah ok. Bye!
- Bye!
- What’s happened to him? Asked Ony.
- I don’t know.
- Is this his jacket?
- Yeah he forgot it.
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blonde ony.. blonde.. always appears in the wrong time
but why he left?? that was strange
but why he left?? that was strange
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Ony...good boy anyway...He is Ony...and he must apear in the wrong time(joke) anyway,great part..more
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Hahaha Poor Ony
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Monikute wrote:Ony...good boy anyway...He is Ony...and he must apear in the wrong time(joke) anyway,great part..more
we have to change that attitude
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Part 16
Three days passed. I didn’t saw Basty and Karla didn’t called like she promised. I felt so lonely, but I don’t know why. Maybe tomorrow everything will be alright. I was sleeping when I felt that someone is touching my hand. I opened my eyes and I saw….. Basty.
- Morning! My little angel. He said.
- Morning! It sounds strange.
- Why?
- Because only my mother called me like this.
- Well from today you will be mine little angel too. He smiled. And happy birthday!
- Thanks.
- De nada.
- Basty, why did you left Monday?
- Because Ony came and ruined everything.
- Just for that?
- Yeah.
Basty took my hand.
- Do you remember when I asked you do you believe in love at first sight and you said that no….
- Yeah I remember and I remember that you told that you also didn’t believed, but now you do.
- Yeah.
- So as I can see you are not free like a taxi anymore.
- Well…. I don’t know.
- You don’t know?
- I haven’t asked her to be my girlfriend.
- What are you waiting?
- So, do you want?
- Sorry. What?
- Do you want to be my girlfriend?
- Is this some kind of joke?
- No. I am not joking. That girl is you.
- That’s impossible. I have just arrived.
- It’s love at first sight. Smiled Basty.
Then he bend and kissed me. His lips was very soft. But like everytime someone have to ruin everything. Now it was my mobile phone, someone was calling.
- Hello!
- Happy birthday to you…… Started to sing Karla.
- Woow. Thanks. I didn’t knew that your voice is so good.
- Stop laughing from me.
- So how are you?
- Much better. Thanks for asking.
- When you are coming back?
- After two maybe three weeks.
- Why so long?
- Because I like here very much and……
- And what?
- I met here one boy. He is from Madrid, but now he is having holidays here and after three weeks he is going back to Madrid.
- Why you didn’t say so? What is his name?
- He is Mauricio. Oh, Manuela is calling me for breakfast. I will call you tomorrow. Ok?
- Yeah. I will wait. Bye!
- Bye!
- So, what is your answer Laura? Asked Basty.
Three days passed. I didn’t saw Basty and Karla didn’t called like she promised. I felt so lonely, but I don’t know why. Maybe tomorrow everything will be alright. I was sleeping when I felt that someone is touching my hand. I opened my eyes and I saw….. Basty.
- Morning! My little angel. He said.
- Morning! It sounds strange.
- Why?
- Because only my mother called me like this.
- Well from today you will be mine little angel too. He smiled. And happy birthday!
- Thanks.
- De nada.
- Basty, why did you left Monday?
- Because Ony came and ruined everything.
- Just for that?
- Yeah.
Basty took my hand.
- Do you remember when I asked you do you believe in love at first sight and you said that no….
- Yeah I remember and I remember that you told that you also didn’t believed, but now you do.
- Yeah.
- So as I can see you are not free like a taxi anymore.
- Well…. I don’t know.
- You don’t know?
- I haven’t asked her to be my girlfriend.
- What are you waiting?
- So, do you want?
- Sorry. What?
- Do you want to be my girlfriend?
- Is this some kind of joke?
- No. I am not joking. That girl is you.
- That’s impossible. I have just arrived.
- It’s love at first sight. Smiled Basty.
Then he bend and kissed me. His lips was very soft. But like everytime someone have to ruin everything. Now it was my mobile phone, someone was calling.
- Hello!
- Happy birthday to you…… Started to sing Karla.
- Woow. Thanks. I didn’t knew that your voice is so good.
- Stop laughing from me.
- So how are you?
- Much better. Thanks for asking.
- When you are coming back?
- After two maybe three weeks.
- Why so long?
- Because I like here very much and……
- And what?
- I met here one boy. He is from Madrid, but now he is having holidays here and after three weeks he is going back to Madrid.
- Why you didn’t say so? What is his name?
- He is Mauricio. Oh, Manuela is calling me for breakfast. I will call you tomorrow. Ok?
- Yeah. I will wait. Bye!
- Bye!
- So, what is your answer Laura? Asked Basty.
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What is her answer?
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i hope she says yes
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SHE WILL SAY YES
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Part 17
- Yeah I want. I said and kissed him.
- Now dress up and come to the living room.
- Ok.
Basty left my room. Am I dreaming? I dressed up and went to the living room. There were a lot of balloons and cake. Boys started so sing happy birthday.
- Well thanks!
- There is our present for you. Said Mikel and showed big box.
- What is it?
- Look.
I opened the box and there was D’Nash albums, posters with them autographs and tickets to them concerts.
- Woow! Thanks!
- Not at all.
- This is a present from me. I know it’s not that good as them present. Said Tina.
I took her bag there was T-shirt. On those T-shirt was written BEST FRIENDS FOREVER and on the back FRIEND NUMBER 1.
- Oh come on. Your present is very sweet. Let me hug you.
- Are we going to get a cake today? Asked Ony.
- Yes Sure. I said.
- What are you going to drink? Asked Tina.
- Juice. Said Basty.
- No! Champagne! Said Javi and Ony.
- Champagne in the evening. Have you forgot that today we are having a concert? Asked Mikel.
- We are just joking!
- When we are leaving? Asked Tina.
- At 12 o’clock. Said Basty.
- Ok. Come Tina to the kitchen to take plates.
- I am coming.
- Karla has called.
- Really? What she has told?
- That she is good and she found there a boy.
- A boy?
- Yeah. He is from Madrid, but now he is having holidays there.
- What’s his name?
- Mauricio.
- Mmmmh. When she is coming back?
- After two maybe three weeks.
- Why so long?
- Because she wants to be with Mauricio.
- Oh I get it.
- She told that she will call tomorrow and tell more.
- Oh ok.
- I take plates and you take juices.
- Ok.
- Just don’t drop it.
- I will try. Said Tina and started to laugh.
- Yeah I want. I said and kissed him.
- Now dress up and come to the living room.
- Ok.
Basty left my room. Am I dreaming? I dressed up and went to the living room. There were a lot of balloons and cake. Boys started so sing happy birthday.
- Well thanks!
- There is our present for you. Said Mikel and showed big box.
- What is it?
- Look.
I opened the box and there was D’Nash albums, posters with them autographs and tickets to them concerts.
- Woow! Thanks!
- Not at all.
- This is a present from me. I know it’s not that good as them present. Said Tina.
I took her bag there was T-shirt. On those T-shirt was written BEST FRIENDS FOREVER and on the back FRIEND NUMBER 1.
- Oh come on. Your present is very sweet. Let me hug you.
- Are we going to get a cake today? Asked Ony.
- Yes Sure. I said.
- What are you going to drink? Asked Tina.
- Juice. Said Basty.
- No! Champagne! Said Javi and Ony.
- Champagne in the evening. Have you forgot that today we are having a concert? Asked Mikel.
- We are just joking!
- When we are leaving? Asked Tina.
- At 12 o’clock. Said Basty.
- Ok. Come Tina to the kitchen to take plates.
- I am coming.
- Karla has called.
- Really? What she has told?
- That she is good and she found there a boy.
- A boy?
- Yeah. He is from Madrid, but now he is having holidays there.
- What’s his name?
- Mauricio.
- Mmmmh. When she is coming back?
- After two maybe three weeks.
- Why so long?
- Because she wants to be with Mauricio.
- Oh I get it.
- She told that she will call tomorrow and tell more.
- Oh ok.
- I take plates and you take juices.
- Ok.
- Just don’t drop it.
- I will try. Said Tina and started to laugh.
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