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Promise - Part 27 THE END

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Post  Sergo Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:06 pm

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Post  Laura Wed Apr 16, 2008 3:36 pm

Part 21


I waked up in the morning, Basty wasn’t sleeping.
- Hey my little angel.
- Morning.
- You know you look very beautiful when you are sleeping.
- Am I?
- Yeah. Can you promise to me one thing?
- What?
- That you won’t leave me.
- I promise and I think that you have to promise the same.
- Well….. I will think about it.
- What?
- I am just joking. I promise that I won’t leave you.
- I think that we have to get up and go to eat breakfast.
- No I don’t want.
- But we have, today we are going back to Madrid.
- Yeah. I know.
After two hours we were going back to Madrid.
- Oh finally home. Said Mikel. Are you boys going to stay in my home?
- Yeah. Said Basty.
- Me too. Said Javi.
- And you Ony? Asked Mikel.
- Sure.
I went to my room to put my things. Then somebody knocked my doors.
- Yeah come in. I said.
- Laura, I want to talk with you. Said Ony.
- Yeah, sure.
- I wanted to apologize what happened yesterday.
- Everything is ok. I forgot it. So forget it too.
- I will try.
- That’s all what you wanted to say?
- Yeah.
- Ok then you can go.
Ony went out. I felt a bit bad that I was rude with him. Again somebody knocked on my door.
- Can I come in? Asked Basty.
- Yeah.
- Mikel have a good idea.
- Really? What?
- Well in the end of august you are going to leave.
- Yeah.
- So he thought that you can stay and go to the university here.
- Mmmmh.
- Have you passed your exams?
- Yeah of course.
- So what do you think?
- Well it would be great, but how my family.
- We will talk with them.
- And what about documents?
- Well Mikel will get them. You have to choose what are you going to study and other Documents University will get from your school.
- Ok. I will think what I want to be when I grew up. I said and started to laugh.
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Post  Sergo Wed Apr 16, 2008 4:22 pm

Be nicer to Ony. WTF

Yay she's moving to Spain Razz
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Post  Monikute Wed Apr 16, 2008 5:19 pm

Razz Razz Oh..poor Ony.... Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes (but he's poor just for now....I want more Laughing Laughing )

Zinai ka turiu omeny laura Laughing
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Post  Prisca Wed Apr 16, 2008 9:21 pm

poor ony Neutral Neutral

Razz Razz Razz

ohh and she is staying in spain Razz Razz
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:10 pm

Monikute wrote:Razz Razz Oh..poor Ony.... Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes (but he's poor just for now....I want more Laughing Laughing )

Zinai ka turiu omeny laura Laughing

Ammmm, mmmmh neturiu žalio suptatimo apie ka tu Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Prisca Thu Apr 17, 2008 4:14 pm

more?? Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:03 pm

Part 22


- I have to call to my mother. I said.
- Yeah. Said Basty.
I took my mobile phone and call to my mother.
- Hello. Said mother.
- Hi. This is Spain calling. I said.
- Nice to hear it. So how are you?
- Really good. Mum I wanted to tell you something.
- Yeah I am listening.
- I have decided where to study.
- Really? Where?
- In Spain.
- Oh, ok. It’s your choice.
- Thanks mum that you understand me.
- Not at all. I got to go we have quests.
- Ok then. Bye.
- Bye.
- So, what your mother have told? Asked Basty.
- It’s my choice.
- That’s wonderful.
- Yeah. So Mikel got those papers.
- Yes.
- Ok. Let’s go to them.
We went down. Tina was filling the papers.
- Where are papers for me? I asked.
- Here. Said Mikel.
- Thanks.
- I will send it to the university and then we will have to wait three weeks to know the answer. Said Mikel.
- Yeah. Of course. Said Tina.
I went to the kitchen to have some juices. Ony came too.
- It’s nice to hear that you are staying in Spain. Said Ony.
- Mmmmmh.
- Do you really love Basty?
- Why are you asking this?
- Well I want to know.
- Yeah, I love him.
- Didn’t our kiss mentioned anything for you?
- It was just a mistake. You were drunk and ……
- I can’t believe that do don’t care about my feelings.
- Your feelings?
- Yeah.
- Ony I am sorry, but I don’t wanna talk about it.
I turned to go, but Ony grabbed my hand.
- Let me go Ony.
- If you really don’t care say it into my eyes.
- Yeah. Why not?
- Ok then I am waiting.
I looked into his eyes. They were brown and so deep.
- Ony I ……..
- I am listening.
- I……. can’t say it. Please let me go.
- As I thought. It mentioned something for you.
- Ony…….
- Ok go.
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Post  Prisca Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:08 pm

her mum was nice Razz Razz

what the hell was that with ony Shocked Shocked
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:14 pm

Prisca wrote:her mum was nice Razz Razz

what the hell was that with ony Shocked Shocked
what you don't understand? Rolling Eyes Smile
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Post  girl1035 Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:19 pm

Ony. Shocked Holy crap. More!!!
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Post  Prisca Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:39 pm

Lauriukas199 wrote:
Prisca wrote:her mum was nice Razz Razz

what the hell was that with ony Shocked Shocked
what you don't understand? Rolling Eyes Smile

i understood... but that wasn't suppost to happen Laughing Laughing
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:41 pm

Prisca wrote:
Lauriukas199 wrote:
Prisca wrote:her mum was nice Razz Razz

what the hell was that with ony Shocked Shocked
what you don't understand? Rolling Eyes Smile

i understood... but that wasn't suppost to happen Laughing Laughing
Why? Shocked Rolling Eyes
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Post  Prisca Thu Apr 17, 2008 6:45 pm

because it's a bad situation Laughing Laughing
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Post  Sergo Thu Apr 17, 2008 7:22 pm

Ony kissed her when he was drunk and she pushed him away... Then he asks her if the kiss meant nothing and she doesn't care about his feelings? Suspect
WTF Suspect
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Post  Monikute Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:13 pm

Laura......pirma...Tu zinai ka turiu omeny..juk Ony bus su ja ir nebus toks vargsas Rolling Eyes
Anyway...great part!!!! And she....she likes Ony....I know IT!!! Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:28 pm

Sergo wrote:Ony kissed her when he was drunk and she pushed him away... Then he asks her if the kiss meant nothing and she doesn't care about his feelings? Suspect
WTF Suspect
Well he wanted to kiss her , but when he wasn't drunk he didn't have enough brave to do it Laughing Laughing Twisted Evil
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:32 pm

Monikute wrote:Laura......pirma...Tu zinai ka turiu omeny..juk Ony bus su ja ir nebus toks vargsas Rolling Eyes
Anyway...great part!!!! And she....she likes Ony....I know IT!!! Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
Sssssshhhh tik ne taip garsiai....... Laughing Laughing
Well if you know it, maybe it's true...... Laughing Razz
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Post  Monikute Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:33 pm

Razz Razz Razz I knew it!!! So..MORE
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:03 pm

Part 23


Three weeks past really fast. Today we will have answers from university and today Karla is coming back.
- The mail. Yelled Mikel.
- Finally. I said.
- Here this one is for Tina, this is for me, this one for me too, for me.
- As I can see there is no mail for me. I said.
- Nope. There is one. Here.
- Thanks.
- Aren’t you going to open it? Asked Basty.
- Well, I am.
I opened the letter and started to read.
- So? Asked Basty.
- I am reading. I said.
- I am staying here. Said Tina. And you Laura?
- Well……. I…….
- Come on don’t ignore us.
- Me too. I said and started to laugh.
Then Basty kissed me. I looked at Ony he looked happy too. Then we heard door bell. It was Karla. Finally she is back. Me and Tina ran to the door. We wanted to hug her, because we missed her a lot. Tina opened the door.
- Hi girls. Said Karla.
- Hi. Said Tina and wanted to hug her, but Karla didn’t wanted to do that.
- Oh, please. I don’t need that.
- What’s happened to you?
- Well nothing. Said Karla.
- But you are different.
- Maybe you didn’t know me well. Hi to all. I am very tired. We will talk later.
- Ok. Maybe then you will be in better mod.
- Yeah, yeah.
- What’s happened to her? Asked Mikel.
- I want to know the same. I said.
- I think that she changed for Mauricio.
- Mauricio? Who is he? Asked Mikel.
- Her boyfriend? I said.
- Oh.
- Laura, let’s go to the beach. Said Basty.
- Ok. Let’s go. It’s very beautiful day.
- We are going. See you later.
- Ok.
- Basty the beach is in the other side. I said.
- I know.
- So, why we are going here?
- You will see.
- What have you planned?
- You are very curious.
- I know. I smiled.
- Here we came.
- A restaurant?
- Yeah. We are going to be here alone.
- Alone? It’s so romantic.
- Yeah. I love you Laura.
- I love you too. I said and kissed him.
When I closed my eyes I remembered my kiss with Ony.
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Post  Monikute Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:06 pm

Kiss....with Ony!!! That's true...she likes him Razz Razz Razz Razz Razz hahahahha Rolling Eyes Laughing Laughing :lol


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Post  Sergo Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:07 pm

she remembered ony? disgust
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Post  Monikute Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:08 pm

Sergo wrote:she remembered ony? disgust

I think she loves Ony...not Basty Rolling Eyes
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:25 pm

I didn't wanted to post part 24, because there only left 4 parts.And I posted only because Monika pleased very nice Smile Wink


Part 24


That evening with Basty was wonderful. When we get back to home everyone was sleeping. When I waked up Basty was already gone to the studio. When I went out of room I saw Tina.
- What is that smell? Asked Tina.
- It seems that someone is smoking.
- Whom?
- I don’t know. Let’s go to look.
- Karla you are smoking? Asked Tina.
- Yeah. Said Karla.
- When you have started? I asked.
- When I met Mauricio.
- But you can’t smoke you are sick. I said.
- What do you know?
- What happened with you? Asked Tina.
- Nothing. Said Karla.
- I am going to shop. Said Tina. Maybe you need something.
- No thanks.
- Today I am going to party. Said Karla.
- To what party?
- Mauricio is having one.
- Oh it sounds interesting. Maybe you wanna that I would go with you?
- No I don’t wanna. Oh Mauricio came. He wrote me a message. I am going.
- Ok. Bye.
- Bye.
After an hour Tina came back.
- Where is Karla?
- Well she went to the party.
- Oh.
- I think that your phone is ringing.
- Yeah. Mikel is calling.
- What he has said? I asked.
- They asked if we want to come to the studio.
- Oh, ok let’s go.
- Sure.
We went to the studio. We were there until 10 p.m. When we came back Karla wasn’t at home.
- I think that something has happened to her. Said Mikel.
- Maybe not. You know those parties. We have to wait. Said Javi.
I fall asleep. Suddenly I heard phone ringing. Mikel answered it. I opened my eyes.
- Who is calling? I asked.
- It’s from hospital. Said Mikel.
- What’s happened? Asked Javi.
- There was an accident. Their car crashed and her boyfriend died, but she is still alive.
- We have to go to hospital. Said Tina.
- Yeah. Let’s go.
We went to the hospital. Mikel found a doctor.
- How is she? Asked Mikel.
- I am really sorry….
- No, that’s impossible she can’t be…..
- I am sorry, but your cousin died. We found in her blood drugs and alcohol.
Everyone was in shock. I started to cry, Basty hugged me. I couldn’t believed that I have lost one of my best friends. She will never be with us again.
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Post  Sergo Thu Apr 17, 2008 9:31 pm

HOLY SHIT MOTHER OF GOD Shocked Shocked Shocked Shocked
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