Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
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Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
See, you'll learn fast xD I'm already working on it, but my mind won't let me continue..
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
because i'm good
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~Mar~ wrote:I was already waiting for this one I dunno when
Why you don't know?
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My mind doesn't let me write now Tomorrow I continue the beginning
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~Mar~ wrote:My mind doesn't let me write now Tomorrow I continue the beginning
Mar this word is ABOLISH!!!!!!! Read in Street dances page 28. Me and Pris abolished it
Can't wait for part 10
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oh yeah the rule
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Wasn't the rule that you couldn't say Tomorrow as an answer on the question When? And I didn't said that Ok.. I'll continue when I CAN continue.. Is that better? xD But what will be my punishment?
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DAAVEE Stupid guy!!
Great part!!
And when more??
Great part!!
And when more??
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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~Mar~ wrote:Wasn't the rule that you couldn't say Tomorrow as an answer on the question When? And I didn't said that Ok.. I'll continue when I CAN continue.. Is that better? xD But what will be my punishment?
It's a bit better
And the punishment........
I have to talk with Pris where is she???????
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Hmm, maybe she flew to moon and she takes care of Mikel's clothes
Okay, I'm bored...
Okay, I'm bored...
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Good one
I hope that she will come back soon
I hope that she will come back soon
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To the moon xD I'm afraid for my punishment I don't think it will be nice for me
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Well we will see it soon
Pris where are you????????
Pris where are you????????
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Finally I found Pris and we talked
And your punishment is..................to post new part and now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
And your punishment is..................to post new part and now!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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You two are evil minded Better finsih it then Give me some time to finish it, ok?
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You have to post it until ....... let me think....... 21:00
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i'm glad that you accepted the punishment
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And here it is..
Capítulo 10
It was far past midnight when we came back. Kevin had dropped Raúl at Drover’s Run. They had been talking about what happened at the bar and came with a plan. Everybody got out of the car and walked to the door. The lights were off, just like Kevin had thought. Quietly I unlocked the door. Kevin and I were the only ones who weren’t tipsy. ‘Be quiet!’ Kate said. ‘Stevie get of my foot!’ Tess muttered. I sighed and finally they managed to walk inside without hurting each other. Dave and Lynn were sleeping. And soon the others too, except Kevin and I. We walked to my room and I took my suitcases. ‘I don’t give a damn about what Lynn would think tomorrow, I can’t stay here any longer.’ Kevin nodded. I took my clothes and pushed them in the suitcase. Also my CDs, pictures, make-up and books disappeared in it. ‘Don’t forget Mikel’s CD.’ Kevin pointed at the radio. Quick I took it out of it and putted it in my shoulder bag. I also had putted some clean clothes in it and other stuff I might needed that night. Kevin would bring me to Wilgul. Raúl lived there together with Alex and Nick. And tomorrow I would go back to say goodbye and leave. ‘Do you want to tell the police about this?’ I looked at him. ‘I.. I don’t know.. Probably he will deny it, say that it was my own fault, that I wanted it.. It’s useless to tell them about this.. The only thing I can and will do is don’t give up fighting. This won’t get me down. He won’t win this.’ My voice was strong. Kevin nodded. ‘You know, I pick these up tomorrow.. I’m too tired to drag them down..’ I sighed and took my shoulder bag. ‘Good. Come, I’ll bring you to Drover's. I’m sure Alex and Nick know about this by now..’ We walked downstairs and got into his car. It was almost 2AM when we arrived at the house. The lights were still on. Kevin stopped the car and I got out. Together we walked to the door and I knocked on it. Soon the door opened and Alex stood in the doorway. ‘Ah, you must be Maria. Come in.’ Kevin followed me inside the house. Nick and Raúl were sitting in the livingroom. ‘Sorry to ask this mate, but why is she staying here tonight? I only know that there was a problem..’ Nick turned his face to Raúl. ‘Because someone was very nice and thought he deserved something from me.. That’s why.. And I’m not telling more details, it’s painful enough for me..’ The guys looked at me. Kevin noticed the twinkle in my eyes, the same as back then with the game where I kicked his ass. ‘Come, I’ll show you the way to the bedroom. If you want you can lock it, but we won’t do a thing.’ Raúl smiled and led me to the bedroom. ‘Normally it’s mine, but I’ll sleep in the livingroom tonight. I hope you can get some sleep tonight..’ He opened the door and I sat down on the bed. I kicked the heels of and laid down on my back, staring at the ceiling. Raúl wanted to close the door. I got up and walked to him. ‘Raúl? Thanks..’ I gave him a hug and closed the door. ‘De nada chica.’ He smiled and I locked the door. I still don’t know why, I knew that the boys wouldn’t try to hurt me in the way Dave did. Quick I got my pj’s on and crawled into the bed. I just sat under the blanket, waiting. I didn’t closed my eyes that night. I was scared. Scared for the dia-show I would see when I would close my eyes. I just sat on Raúl’s bed, reading one of my fave books. Soon the sun began to rise. The bed stood across the window so the sun shined right on my face. I looked at the alarm-clock. 5.00. I hadn’t slept all night and was tired as hell. I started to think what time it would be in Miami. Soon I felt a headache coming up and quit thinking. I rubbed over my forehead. Soon I heard someone knocking on my door. I came out of bed and unlocked the door. Raúl stood in front of me. ‘Buenos días! How did you sleep?’ he smiled cheery. ‘I haven’t slept at all, and now I’m tired as hell…’ ‘I’m sure you’ll get some sleep in the plane. Come, get dressed.’ And he closed the door again. Quick I putted my clothes on. I didn’t want to take a shower. A jeans and an old T-shirt. I had changed my shoes last night for sneakers and took them with me downstairs. In silence we ate breakfast and then it was time to go. On our way to Wilgul I called to Miami. ‘Hello? Sorry that I call you that late, I didn’t knew what time it was.. I’m Rosa Maria Piñero Camacho. Yes, the girl for the room.. Why I call now? Uhmm.. Something happened and I had to leave earlier. Is that okay? Good. Thanks a lot ma’am. Yes, I’ll fly today to Miami. No, last minute.. Okay, yes I’ll see you at the airport. Okay. Yes. Bye!’ And I hung up. We just arrived at the farm and I got out. Lynn came walking outside. ‘Why weren’t you here last night? And why are your suitcases packed?’ I sighed. This was going to be hard. ‘Hello Lynn, nice to see you too..’ We walked into the house and sat down in the sitting room. ‘Why is your stuff packed and why weren’t you here?’ Lynn asked again. Kevin was sitting next to me and held my hand. ‘I’m going to Miami today.. And I slept at Drover’s last night.’ Lynn looked at me with disbelieve. ‘Huh? But.. Why?’ ‘Because.. because something.. Happened and I can’t stay here any longer.. I’m sorry Lynn.’ Lynn still looked with disbelieve at me. I got up to get my stuff. Kevin helped me with the suitcases. ‘So.. This is it then.. Good luck in America sis.’ Lynn gave me a hug. ‘Thanks Lynn. I’ll miss ya..’ I hugged her back. Next were Stevie, Tess and Charlotte. Dave stuck his arms out and pulled me against himself for a hug. I just let him. ‘You can run, but you can’t hide.. I know how to find you in Miami.. This isn’t our last meeting.’ He whispered in my ear and laughed softly. ‘Yes, I’ll miss you too Dave..’ Quick I released him and went to the next one. ‘I’ll miss you, hero.. Good luck and take care.’ Kevin smiled and hugged me tight. ‘Yes, I will. Don’t worry mate.’ I smiled brave even after Dave’s words.. They scared me. Raúl would bring me to the airport. He took two of my suitcases and brought them to the car. ‘Bye!’ I waved and got into the car. Quick Raúl took off to Melbourne. I sighed. ‘What’s up?’ ‘Nothin’..’ “but something tells me that it will change into something soon.." I added in my mind. We arrived at Melbourne airport. Quick we brought my stuff inside and I bought a ticket to Miami. Not much later Australia was a dot below me and I was surrounded by clouds.
Capítulo 10
It was far past midnight when we came back. Kevin had dropped Raúl at Drover’s Run. They had been talking about what happened at the bar and came with a plan. Everybody got out of the car and walked to the door. The lights were off, just like Kevin had thought. Quietly I unlocked the door. Kevin and I were the only ones who weren’t tipsy. ‘Be quiet!’ Kate said. ‘Stevie get of my foot!’ Tess muttered. I sighed and finally they managed to walk inside without hurting each other. Dave and Lynn were sleeping. And soon the others too, except Kevin and I. We walked to my room and I took my suitcases. ‘I don’t give a damn about what Lynn would think tomorrow, I can’t stay here any longer.’ Kevin nodded. I took my clothes and pushed them in the suitcase. Also my CDs, pictures, make-up and books disappeared in it. ‘Don’t forget Mikel’s CD.’ Kevin pointed at the radio. Quick I took it out of it and putted it in my shoulder bag. I also had putted some clean clothes in it and other stuff I might needed that night. Kevin would bring me to Wilgul. Raúl lived there together with Alex and Nick. And tomorrow I would go back to say goodbye and leave. ‘Do you want to tell the police about this?’ I looked at him. ‘I.. I don’t know.. Probably he will deny it, say that it was my own fault, that I wanted it.. It’s useless to tell them about this.. The only thing I can and will do is don’t give up fighting. This won’t get me down. He won’t win this.’ My voice was strong. Kevin nodded. ‘You know, I pick these up tomorrow.. I’m too tired to drag them down..’ I sighed and took my shoulder bag. ‘Good. Come, I’ll bring you to Drover's. I’m sure Alex and Nick know about this by now..’ We walked downstairs and got into his car. It was almost 2AM when we arrived at the house. The lights were still on. Kevin stopped the car and I got out. Together we walked to the door and I knocked on it. Soon the door opened and Alex stood in the doorway. ‘Ah, you must be Maria. Come in.’ Kevin followed me inside the house. Nick and Raúl were sitting in the livingroom. ‘Sorry to ask this mate, but why is she staying here tonight? I only know that there was a problem..’ Nick turned his face to Raúl. ‘Because someone was very nice and thought he deserved something from me.. That’s why.. And I’m not telling more details, it’s painful enough for me..’ The guys looked at me. Kevin noticed the twinkle in my eyes, the same as back then with the game where I kicked his ass. ‘Come, I’ll show you the way to the bedroom. If you want you can lock it, but we won’t do a thing.’ Raúl smiled and led me to the bedroom. ‘Normally it’s mine, but I’ll sleep in the livingroom tonight. I hope you can get some sleep tonight..’ He opened the door and I sat down on the bed. I kicked the heels of and laid down on my back, staring at the ceiling. Raúl wanted to close the door. I got up and walked to him. ‘Raúl? Thanks..’ I gave him a hug and closed the door. ‘De nada chica.’ He smiled and I locked the door. I still don’t know why, I knew that the boys wouldn’t try to hurt me in the way Dave did. Quick I got my pj’s on and crawled into the bed. I just sat under the blanket, waiting. I didn’t closed my eyes that night. I was scared. Scared for the dia-show I would see when I would close my eyes. I just sat on Raúl’s bed, reading one of my fave books. Soon the sun began to rise. The bed stood across the window so the sun shined right on my face. I looked at the alarm-clock. 5.00. I hadn’t slept all night and was tired as hell. I started to think what time it would be in Miami. Soon I felt a headache coming up and quit thinking. I rubbed over my forehead. Soon I heard someone knocking on my door. I came out of bed and unlocked the door. Raúl stood in front of me. ‘Buenos días! How did you sleep?’ he smiled cheery. ‘I haven’t slept at all, and now I’m tired as hell…’ ‘I’m sure you’ll get some sleep in the plane. Come, get dressed.’ And he closed the door again. Quick I putted my clothes on. I didn’t want to take a shower. A jeans and an old T-shirt. I had changed my shoes last night for sneakers and took them with me downstairs. In silence we ate breakfast and then it was time to go. On our way to Wilgul I called to Miami. ‘Hello? Sorry that I call you that late, I didn’t knew what time it was.. I’m Rosa Maria Piñero Camacho. Yes, the girl for the room.. Why I call now? Uhmm.. Something happened and I had to leave earlier. Is that okay? Good. Thanks a lot ma’am. Yes, I’ll fly today to Miami. No, last minute.. Okay, yes I’ll see you at the airport. Okay. Yes. Bye!’ And I hung up. We just arrived at the farm and I got out. Lynn came walking outside. ‘Why weren’t you here last night? And why are your suitcases packed?’ I sighed. This was going to be hard. ‘Hello Lynn, nice to see you too..’ We walked into the house and sat down in the sitting room. ‘Why is your stuff packed and why weren’t you here?’ Lynn asked again. Kevin was sitting next to me and held my hand. ‘I’m going to Miami today.. And I slept at Drover’s last night.’ Lynn looked at me with disbelieve. ‘Huh? But.. Why?’ ‘Because.. because something.. Happened and I can’t stay here any longer.. I’m sorry Lynn.’ Lynn still looked with disbelieve at me. I got up to get my stuff. Kevin helped me with the suitcases. ‘So.. This is it then.. Good luck in America sis.’ Lynn gave me a hug. ‘Thanks Lynn. I’ll miss ya..’ I hugged her back. Next were Stevie, Tess and Charlotte. Dave stuck his arms out and pulled me against himself for a hug. I just let him. ‘You can run, but you can’t hide.. I know how to find you in Miami.. This isn’t our last meeting.’ He whispered in my ear and laughed softly. ‘Yes, I’ll miss you too Dave..’ Quick I released him and went to the next one. ‘I’ll miss you, hero.. Good luck and take care.’ Kevin smiled and hugged me tight. ‘Yes, I will. Don’t worry mate.’ I smiled brave even after Dave’s words.. They scared me. Raúl would bring me to the airport. He took two of my suitcases and brought them to the car. ‘Bye!’ I waved and got into the car. Quick Raúl took off to Melbourne. I sighed. ‘What’s up?’ ‘Nothin’..’ “but something tells me that it will change into something soon.." I added in my mind. We arrived at Melbourne airport. Quick we brought my stuff inside and I bought a ticket to Miami. Not much later Australia was a dot below me and I was surrounded by clouds.
Last edited by ~Mar~ on Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:04 pm; edited 3 times in total
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
~Mar~ wrote:Next time I want something else for punishment
you will have it
and...
that dave
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I don't like Dave...
But great part :D
But great part :D
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Prisca wrote:~Mar~ wrote:Next time I want something else for punishment
you will have it
and...
that dave
What will I have?
Re: Destiny (Cont. of The end? ) Part 26 THE END...
i will not reveal now
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