STREET DANCES - Part 67 THE END
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Re: STREET DANCES - Part 67 THE END
Woow, I'm speechless.. This is so great part, I love it!!
I just wanna mooooore!!
I just wanna mooooore!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Thanks girls
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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I love this story
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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I know that he won't talk with her for two years.. Stupid bastard!
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I will be good today and I will post another part
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Part 61
Monika took Mikel to his bedroom. He laid down and started to kiss Monika.
- You hate me. Monika said.
- You are wrong. I love you. Mikel said.
- Then how is Manuela?
- She is my sister.
- Sister? Monika asked.
- Yes. Come on kiss me. I wanna have you. He said.
Monika started to kiss him and he answered the same and then happened what they wanted. Mikel hugged her.
- I love you Monika.
- I love you too. She said.
They fall asleep. In the morning Monika woke up first. Mikel opened his eyes.
- What a hell are you doing here? Oh my head. He said.
- Yesterday you called to me and asked to come. When I was here you started to kiss me and we made love. Monika said.
- I don’t remember anything. Please dress up and leave me. I don’t wanna see you. It was our goodbye. He said.
Mikel was cold. Monika dressed up.
- I didn’t thought that you will use me. She said.
- Please leave.
Down her cheek ran a tear and she left.
- Oh God what I have done? Mikel said.
He putted a pillow on his head. London. I came back to my apartment. I wasn’t crying more, because I didn’t have more tears. I called to Sabine and she came.
- What’s happened Manu? Why you came back? She asked.
- I wanted to run away from everything the most from Ony. I said.
- What’s happened?
- My father and brother are alive. Half a year I danced in group where my brother is singing. Ony saw our passports and he thought that I married with Mikel. He didn’t wanted to listen to me. I said.
- That’s horrible. How he could do that?
- I don’t wanna talk about him. How is mum? I asked.
- She is very good. She divorced with my dad. You can come back to live with us. Sabine said.
- Sure. I said.
Evening in London. In the airport landed plane from Madrid. Ony sat into taxi and drove the address he had. There he didn’t found me. The guardian said to him that I went back to live to my mum and that I will never come back here. For Ony luck guardian had my mum address, because I left it that he would bring my things. Ony asked that address and drove there. Me and Sabine where sitting in living room when we heard a doorbell. I looked though the window.
- Oh my God it’s Ony. I said.
- What he is doing here? Sabine asked.
- Please open the door and tell too him that I am not here and I will never be here.
She went.
- Can I talk with Manuela? Ony asked.
- She is not here and she will never be here. Please don’t search her. Sabine said.
Ony started to shout my name.
- She is not here. Isn’t that clear? She asked and closed the doors.
Ony understood that everything between them is finished. So he came back to Madrid. Passed two years.
Monika took Mikel to his bedroom. He laid down and started to kiss Monika.
- You hate me. Monika said.
- You are wrong. I love you. Mikel said.
- Then how is Manuela?
- She is my sister.
- Sister? Monika asked.
- Yes. Come on kiss me. I wanna have you. He said.
Monika started to kiss him and he answered the same and then happened what they wanted. Mikel hugged her.
- I love you Monika.
- I love you too. She said.
They fall asleep. In the morning Monika woke up first. Mikel opened his eyes.
- What a hell are you doing here? Oh my head. He said.
- Yesterday you called to me and asked to come. When I was here you started to kiss me and we made love. Monika said.
- I don’t remember anything. Please dress up and leave me. I don’t wanna see you. It was our goodbye. He said.
Mikel was cold. Monika dressed up.
- I didn’t thought that you will use me. She said.
- Please leave.
Down her cheek ran a tear and she left.
- Oh God what I have done? Mikel said.
He putted a pillow on his head. London. I came back to my apartment. I wasn’t crying more, because I didn’t have more tears. I called to Sabine and she came.
- What’s happened Manu? Why you came back? She asked.
- I wanted to run away from everything the most from Ony. I said.
- What’s happened?
- My father and brother are alive. Half a year I danced in group where my brother is singing. Ony saw our passports and he thought that I married with Mikel. He didn’t wanted to listen to me. I said.
- That’s horrible. How he could do that?
- I don’t wanna talk about him. How is mum? I asked.
- She is very good. She divorced with my dad. You can come back to live with us. Sabine said.
- Sure. I said.
Evening in London. In the airport landed plane from Madrid. Ony sat into taxi and drove the address he had. There he didn’t found me. The guardian said to him that I went back to live to my mum and that I will never come back here. For Ony luck guardian had my mum address, because I left it that he would bring my things. Ony asked that address and drove there. Me and Sabine where sitting in living room when we heard a doorbell. I looked though the window.
- Oh my God it’s Ony. I said.
- What he is doing here? Sabine asked.
- Please open the door and tell too him that I am not here and I will never be here.
She went.
- Can I talk with Manuela? Ony asked.
- She is not here and she will never be here. Please don’t search her. Sabine said.
Ony started to shout my name.
- She is not here. Isn’t that clear? She asked and closed the doors.
Ony understood that everything between them is finished. So he came back to Madrid. Passed two years.
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Thanks sis
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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You can't bloody stop here! I wanna know how it will end! Will Ony and Manuela be together? And Mikel and Monika? And will Mikel FINALLY act normal?
Re: STREET DANCES - Part 67 THE END
There is left 5 maybe 6 parts and I won't post them all today No way Jose and I stopped in good place Passed two years..... Will Manuela and Ony be together and Will Mikel forgive to Monika????? Thats the questions
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What will happen?? What will happen?? I WANNA KNOOOOOOW!!
Laura, pleaseeee, post more!!
Laura, pleaseeee, post more!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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~Mar~ wrote: Not in a good place
Why not?
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Coz now I can't sleep good coz I won't know if they will ever meet again
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oohhhh poor Ony...
and 2 years is so much time....
and 2 years is so much time....
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Poor Onyyyy....*snif* *snif*
And sis, all the girls are right, you can't just stop here and not post more Me wanna more, and I want it todaaaaayyyyyyyyy
And sis, all the girls are right, you can't just stop here and not post more Me wanna more, and I want it todaaaaayyyyyyyyy
Re: STREET DANCES - Part 67 THE END
Sorry no time today......
Maybe day after today
Maybe day after today
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Part 62
In London I opened my dance school. Monika was still dancing with D’Nash. In those two years Mikel haven’t talked with Monika at all. He wasn’t the same Mikel that she loved. That day was different from others in England. Sun was shinning and there where no clouds in sky. It was tea time. How I missed English tea with milk. I heard that phone was ringing so I stood up and went to answer.
- Hello Manuela Hennet Sotomayor is listening. I said.
- Hey darling. I am so happy that it’s you. It was dad.
- Hey dad. I missed you so much and Mikel too. I sad.
- We missed you too and it seems that you forgot us. He said.
- No dad I haven’t, just I have my own dance school so you know….
- Here we are going to have Mikel birthday party and you have to come.
- I’d love to, but I can’t. I said.
- Why? Do you still love that guy? Dad asked.
- You are talking about Ony? No, I don’t.
- So what’s the problem darling?
- Ok, ok I will come, because it’s my brother’s birthday, but I will come not alone with Sabine.
- Yeah sure, because she is Mikel sister too, just not that real as you. He said.
We ended our conversation. My minds were messed up again. I remembered Ony. Well…..to tell the truth I haven’t forgot him, because I still loved him. One year he was writing to me letters, but then he stopped maybe he don’t love me anymore. So me and Sabine flow to the Tenerife. Mother will come too. She wanna see her son and of course dad. I think that they still love each other, but they are not talking about it loud. At the airport we took taxi and it drove us to the dad’s house. When I was standing near the doors I was shaking. Sabine saw it, so she knocked. Remember to me latter that I have to kill her for that. I wasn’t ready when Mikel opened the doors.
- I can’t believe in my eyes. It’s you. He said. His face was like he saw an alien.
- Happy birthday bro. I said and hugged him.
- It’s the best present for me. Finally you are back. Mikel said.
- Well I am not alone. You have another sister. She is not that real as me, but still sister. Come Sabine. I said.
She came to us and Mikel hugged her.
- I was alone and now we are three. He said and smiled.
We went to the living room. There were lot’s of guests. Dad introduced me to all. I saw Monika, Javi and Basty so I decided to say hello to them. And then I saw Ony. I was standing in one place and just looking at him. Ony saw me too. His heart started to beat like crazy. He still loved me. Suddenly I felt that I need some fresh air, so I went to the garden. After few minutes I felt somebody’s hand on my shoulder. I turned and there was Ony.
- Can I have a word with you? He asked.
- Sure, why not? I asked and tried to be cold.
- Have you got my letters? Ony asked.
- Yes. I haven’t read them, just throw away. I said.
I lied to him, because all his letters I have read about 10 maybe more times and I had them with me.
- I am sorry, that I haven’t listened you. He said.
- I forgive you, because it won’t change anything.
I stood up and Ony grabbed my hand.
- I love you. He said and kissed me.
I answered to him the same. After two years finally I felt the taste of his lips. Throught my body ran shivers.
- I love you too. I whispered and a tear rolled down my cheek.
Ony hugged me. I felt how his heart was beating. He still loved me.
- I am sorry that I haven’t listened you. I was promised to do that. He said.
I didn’t said anything, I just was listening his heart.
In London I opened my dance school. Monika was still dancing with D’Nash. In those two years Mikel haven’t talked with Monika at all. He wasn’t the same Mikel that she loved. That day was different from others in England. Sun was shinning and there where no clouds in sky. It was tea time. How I missed English tea with milk. I heard that phone was ringing so I stood up and went to answer.
- Hello Manuela Hennet Sotomayor is listening. I said.
- Hey darling. I am so happy that it’s you. It was dad.
- Hey dad. I missed you so much and Mikel too. I sad.
- We missed you too and it seems that you forgot us. He said.
- No dad I haven’t, just I have my own dance school so you know….
- Here we are going to have Mikel birthday party and you have to come.
- I’d love to, but I can’t. I said.
- Why? Do you still love that guy? Dad asked.
- You are talking about Ony? No, I don’t.
- So what’s the problem darling?
- Ok, ok I will come, because it’s my brother’s birthday, but I will come not alone with Sabine.
- Yeah sure, because she is Mikel sister too, just not that real as you. He said.
We ended our conversation. My minds were messed up again. I remembered Ony. Well…..to tell the truth I haven’t forgot him, because I still loved him. One year he was writing to me letters, but then he stopped maybe he don’t love me anymore. So me and Sabine flow to the Tenerife. Mother will come too. She wanna see her son and of course dad. I think that they still love each other, but they are not talking about it loud. At the airport we took taxi and it drove us to the dad’s house. When I was standing near the doors I was shaking. Sabine saw it, so she knocked. Remember to me latter that I have to kill her for that. I wasn’t ready when Mikel opened the doors.
- I can’t believe in my eyes. It’s you. He said. His face was like he saw an alien.
- Happy birthday bro. I said and hugged him.
- It’s the best present for me. Finally you are back. Mikel said.
- Well I am not alone. You have another sister. She is not that real as me, but still sister. Come Sabine. I said.
She came to us and Mikel hugged her.
- I was alone and now we are three. He said and smiled.
We went to the living room. There were lot’s of guests. Dad introduced me to all. I saw Monika, Javi and Basty so I decided to say hello to them. And then I saw Ony. I was standing in one place and just looking at him. Ony saw me too. His heart started to beat like crazy. He still loved me. Suddenly I felt that I need some fresh air, so I went to the garden. After few minutes I felt somebody’s hand on my shoulder. I turned and there was Ony.
- Can I have a word with you? He asked.
- Sure, why not? I asked and tried to be cold.
- Have you got my letters? Ony asked.
- Yes. I haven’t read them, just throw away. I said.
I lied to him, because all his letters I have read about 10 maybe more times and I had them with me.
- I am sorry, that I haven’t listened you. He said.
- I forgive you, because it won’t change anything.
I stood up and Ony grabbed my hand.
- I love you. He said and kissed me.
I answered to him the same. After two years finally I felt the taste of his lips. Throught my body ran shivers.
- I love you too. I whispered and a tear rolled down my cheek.
Ony hugged me. I felt how his heart was beating. He still loved me.
- I am sorry that I haven’t listened you. I was promised to do that. He said.
I didn’t said anything, I just was listening his heart.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Thank you
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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