*Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end

What does he say then? And who he is?

I dunno, I only heard the voice
But I do know one finnish dude Mark Levengood

That gay!

Who is he??

Anyway...
I loved the part!! And chocolate... Yummy

la_nette wrote:Who is he??

Anyway...
I loved the part!! And chocolate... Yummy

This gay guy: http://fi.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mark_Levengood

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Okay... I haven't heard about him...

I know he's gay
And the weird thing is... I often see him at my church
He's a catholic too

But I didn't think many homosexuals were catholic because... Well y'know.

Sergo wrote:I know he's gay
And the weird thing is... I often see him at my church
He's a catholic too

But I didn't think many homosexuals were catholic because... Well y'know.

You see him there? Well, good that he is there and not here!
He even has 2 adopted kids and... so on...

Ok... it's time to post the last part... I hope you like it...

Part 39

Soon we were at home. I gave the rest of the ice-cream to Javi.
- What? You don't like it anymore? he asked.
- Well, I think you want some anyway, I grinned.
He licked the ice-cream and at the same time I remembered the first time we ate ice-cream together. I pressed the ice-cream against his face.
He raised his face and looked at me.
- What the hell you think you're doing? he asked.
- Teasing you, I grinned.
- Well, that is clear for sure, he said and licked his upper lip.
- No, let me...., I whispered and stepped close to him.
I licked his chin and then his cheek.
- Mmm... chocolate ice-cream..., I grinned and licked his left cheek now.
- Susana... you're crazy, Javi said grinning and I saw he liked this very much.
I licked the rest of the ice-cream from his face and then I licked his lips.
We looked at each others eyes.
- That was great. Wanna do it again? Javi whispered.
- You bet, I whispered back.
- Great..., he said and kissed me very passionately.
Then he lifted me in his arms and carried to the shower. He put the water on and soon we were wet through. We kissed and then slowly started undressing each others.
Everything was fine now. We had forgotten the bad things and now we were living in the present moment... and loving each others.

Later in our bedroom when we were just laying in each others' arms, Javi talked to me.
- You know, this what we experienced, was the worst thing in my whole life... but I survived... we survived... and you taught me so much. I still can't believe you didn't leave me. I mean... I'm like crap, I'm not worth you, I lied to you, I cheated... and you forgave me. I didn't believe in angels before, but now I do. You MUST be an angel! Even if you were feeling hurt and you were angry, you still were with me and helped me through the hard times. I don't understand, how you were able to do it. I think I wouldn't have been so strong, he said and held me strongly.
- Well... it wasn't easy. I really was broken, but when I saw how much it hurt you, how much you were afraid that I'll leave you, I understood that you had to love me. We all do mistakes. What if you are never forgiven... Life can be cruel sometimes, but I can choose what to do. You deserved another chance, because you didn't have sex with her, you knew you were doing wrong... and you regretted it... and you also understood how much you hurt me. You're not a bad guy. Sometimes we are just too weak for temptations, I replied.
- That is true, Javi said and caressed my hair, - I have one thing now I just can't resist.
I looked at him.
- Really? What's that? I asked.
- Chocolate! he grinned.
I rolled my eyes and sighed.
- I should have known..., I laughed.
Javi was laughing too.
- No, wait, wait.., he grinned, - I just remembered there's another thing too!
- And that is... chocolate ice-cream? I suggested.
- No..., he smiled, but got serious then, - It's... you, he said looking at me in the eyes and pressing his lips against mine.
- Mmm... I thought you'd never say that, I was teasing him.
- Well, I can't tease you endlessly, he smiled and touched lightly my nose with his finger.
Then he kissed me again.
- Do you know what I'd like to have now? I asked with a seductive voice.
- Tell me, he grinned like he was reading my thoughts.
- A box of chocolate hearts, I replied and saw a surprise on his face.
Then he started to laugh. How I loved to hear his laugh. I had missed it a lot and now Javi was like before, laughing, joking, teasing me. I was happy, we were happy and our marriage would be strong, we both knew it.

So, this was my story. According to Javi I'm a real angel. Well, I remember Basty mentioned it as well, so maybe I am. Why I shouldn't believe, you know, Javi finally learned to tell the truth, so why would he lie about this. Did we learn anything from this? Well, maybe we all should think twice, before we do anything, because if you screw it up, you might not get another chance. You might not be as lucky as Javi was...

THE END

I love happy ends...

ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. you made my day. wonderful story. and thx for the happy end.

Did we learn anything from this? Are you teacher, Minna??

I loved this story!! And the end.. It was lovely!! <3

Perfect ending

Meloved this story from begining till the end Muchas gracias Minna

Lovely ending
Now we have read both ways of this story and what can I say? I loved them both
You are really wonderfull writer Minna!!!! I hope that in the future we will get more stories from you
Thanks Minna for this amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Laura wrote:Lovely ending
Now we have read both ways of this story and what can I say? I loved them both
You are really wonderfull writer Minna!!!! I hope that in the future we will get more stories from you
Thanks Minna for this amazing story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope that too!!

Awww.... thanks girls!!! I'm glad you liked this! This version was longer than I originally planned, you know, I told that I changed the end. Originally this ended like the first story; Susana died, but suddenly I thought that I don't want this kind of end and decided to change it, and then it became longer and longer...

Did we learn anything from this? Are you teacher, Minna??
Nope, I'm not!!

I can't promise more stories, because at the moment I don't have any idea for a story But writing is fun and who knows, maybe I'll get new ideas

Thank you for reading this story!!!

awwwwww..... a happy-cute-super-goregeous-fantastic end


i lovedddd.... this was a great story

Thanks, Pris! I liked this word: a happy-cute-super-goregeous-fantastic end

Ah, finally read those missed parts!
How lovely ending
Thanks for this another version too, it was great!

Tattista! Glad to hear it!

Mindex wrote:

Sergo wrote:I know he's gay
And the weird thing is... I often see him at my church
He's a catholic too

But I didn't think many homosexuals were catholic because... Well y'know.

You see him there? Well, good that he is there and not here!
He even has 2 adopted kids and... so on...

I see him and his boyfriend there My church has loads of celebrities though I mean swedish ones

btw the ending I LOOOOOVE HAPPY ENDINGS

BEST ENDING EVER THANKS FOR WRITING THIS STORY MINNAAA

Mindex wrote: Thanks, Pris! I liked this word: a happy-cute-super-goregeous-fantastic end

Mindex wrote: (Here's the song Javi was singing https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=REp5Q9rJN50&feature=related )

I heard that song today from the radio.. First I didn't remember why the song was so familiar but then I remembered that I listened it yesterday.. This story came in my mind right away.. Though I think I would prefer the Javi's version of that song..

Sergo, tusen tack! Thanx for reading!

Heli, yeah, me too! Javi would sing it sooo much better!