*Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
not again please. you scared me with the end.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Registration date : 2007-11-27
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Please, don't let it happen!!!
I will hit you. No really.
Don't...
Wtf, I sound creepy.
But I'm serious.
Now I want more!
I will hit you. No really.
Don't...
Wtf, I sound creepy.
But I'm serious.
Now I want more!
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
My feelings were right.. Poor Susana.. Bad Javi.. Stupid Sonia..
Don't let it end again like this..
Don't let it end again like this..
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Nooo Why he did this??
I need moreee!!
I need moreee!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
I'm not saying anything You'll see it tomorrow
Yeah, Imke, I really laughed when I read your comment!
Yeah, Imke, I really laughed when I read your comment!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
Location : Finland
Registration date : 2007-11-16
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Tomorrow we'll see!
Mweh now I can make a plan if you let that thing happen what I think you will do.
If you won't you'll make me a very happy girl!
.... I'm scared of myself. xD
Mweh now I can make a plan if you let that thing happen what I think you will do.
If you won't you'll make me a very happy girl!
.... I'm scared of myself. xD
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Haha! But I've already written that part and I'm not going to change anything anymore...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Registration date : 2007-11-16
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
Age : 32
Location : Sweden
Registration date : 2007-11-08
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Oh no
Don't say that it's going to happen again
Great part's
Waiting for tomorrow
Don't say that it's going to happen again
Great part's
Waiting for tomorrow
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
Age : 31
Location : Lithuania
Registration date : 2008-02-16
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Mindex wrote:Haha! But I've already written that part and I'm not going to change anything anymore...
I just hope for you that you're lucky.
Tic tac tic tac tic tac.
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
x Imke x wrote:Mindex wrote:Haha! But I've already written that part and I'm not going to change anything anymore...
I just hope for you that you're lucky.
Tic tac tic tac tic tac.
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
omg. I hope it isn't happening again..
Great part!
Great part!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
Age : 32
Location : Finland
Registration date : 2007-11-18
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
It's time to post more...
Part 21
Suddenly I stopped. A car drove fast by in front of me! If I had just run, the car would have driven over me. I stood still gasping and shaking tears in my eyes.
Javi reached me. He was gasping too.
- Susana..., he sobbed and hugged me tightly and buried his face into my neck.
I couldn't say a word. I was crying... feeling betrayed and scared.
Finally Javi released me and looked at me.
- I'm... I'm sorry, he said quietly, swallowing his tears, - I got so scared, I almost lost you..., he whispered.
I still didn't speak to him. He made me to go with him. I didn't care about anything. Somehow I wished that the car would have driven over me...
We walked home. Or was it my home anymore...
Javi made me to sit and sat next to me.
- I want to tell you something, he said quietly and swallowed.
I was expecting the worst... he is in love with Sonia and wants to divorce...
- What you just saw... it's not what it looked like.
- Yea sure..., I replied indifferently.
- No, let me speak now... I mean I kissed her, that is true, but it was the first time. I've never done that before...
- And I should believe..., I sighed and rolled my eyes.
- Sonia has had difficult times. Her brother died in a car accident and she has been really down for a long time. I thought maybe it would cheer her up if I just... I just... acted a bit friendlier... I mean... now I've really seen it myself that she is.. is... in love with me and... she respects my marriage and everything, but...
- Do you want to divorce? I asked. My heart was so heavy.
- No! I love you! he exclaimed and grabbed on my hands and looked at me, - I want to be with you!
- Then why are you with her? You have to love her somehow... I don't understand why you act like that.
- Like what? he was confused.
- Well, if you're not going to be with her then why you kiss her and give her hopes for nothing? I got almost angry. - Do you think it would cheer her up if you kiss her and then tell that you don't want more? Goddammit, she LOVES you! She wants all or nothing! I yelled and was ready to leave. I already rushed to the door, but Javi caught me.
- Let me go! I yelled.
But Javi was stronger. He had a strong hold of me and I couldn't go anywhere.
- Stop! Calm down now..., he said, - I don't wanna fight with you.
I tried to get free from his hold and fought back and in the end we fell on the floor. I was trying to get rid of him, but couldn't. Finally he made me to lie on my back and he straddled on my belly holding my wrists and keeping my hands against the floor.
- You're not going anywhere, he said calmly, - We have to talk this thing through first.
- There's nothing to talk about! I was angry, - Get off me!!
- Now you listen!! Javi raised his voice too.
I made a face.
- Sonia is ONLY a friend. I admit I acted stupid way, but I can talk to her and make things right, ok? And YOU!! he grinned, - You are so damn sexy, when you get mad that I wanna take you right here, he looked at me with passion in his eyes.
- Oh, no..., I made a face again, - I'm so NOT having any sex with you! I said and tried to fight myself free again, but I had no chance to escape.
- My little angel is NOT going anywhere, Javi whispered to my ear and then he kissed and licked my neck, - and..., he continued, - we'll not have sex, we'll make love, he whispered to my other ear and kissed my neck and licked the other side as well.
- Let me go..., I said angrily.
Imke... am I lucky??
Part 21
Suddenly I stopped. A car drove fast by in front of me! If I had just run, the car would have driven over me. I stood still gasping and shaking tears in my eyes.
Javi reached me. He was gasping too.
- Susana..., he sobbed and hugged me tightly and buried his face into my neck.
I couldn't say a word. I was crying... feeling betrayed and scared.
Finally Javi released me and looked at me.
- I'm... I'm sorry, he said quietly, swallowing his tears, - I got so scared, I almost lost you..., he whispered.
I still didn't speak to him. He made me to go with him. I didn't care about anything. Somehow I wished that the car would have driven over me...
We walked home. Or was it my home anymore...
Javi made me to sit and sat next to me.
- I want to tell you something, he said quietly and swallowed.
I was expecting the worst... he is in love with Sonia and wants to divorce...
- What you just saw... it's not what it looked like.
- Yea sure..., I replied indifferently.
- No, let me speak now... I mean I kissed her, that is true, but it was the first time. I've never done that before...
- And I should believe..., I sighed and rolled my eyes.
- Sonia has had difficult times. Her brother died in a car accident and she has been really down for a long time. I thought maybe it would cheer her up if I just... I just... acted a bit friendlier... I mean... now I've really seen it myself that she is.. is... in love with me and... she respects my marriage and everything, but...
- Do you want to divorce? I asked. My heart was so heavy.
- No! I love you! he exclaimed and grabbed on my hands and looked at me, - I want to be with you!
- Then why are you with her? You have to love her somehow... I don't understand why you act like that.
- Like what? he was confused.
- Well, if you're not going to be with her then why you kiss her and give her hopes for nothing? I got almost angry. - Do you think it would cheer her up if you kiss her and then tell that you don't want more? Goddammit, she LOVES you! She wants all or nothing! I yelled and was ready to leave. I already rushed to the door, but Javi caught me.
- Let me go! I yelled.
But Javi was stronger. He had a strong hold of me and I couldn't go anywhere.
- Stop! Calm down now..., he said, - I don't wanna fight with you.
I tried to get free from his hold and fought back and in the end we fell on the floor. I was trying to get rid of him, but couldn't. Finally he made me to lie on my back and he straddled on my belly holding my wrists and keeping my hands against the floor.
- You're not going anywhere, he said calmly, - We have to talk this thing through first.
- There's nothing to talk about! I was angry, - Get off me!!
- Now you listen!! Javi raised his voice too.
I made a face.
- Sonia is ONLY a friend. I admit I acted stupid way, but I can talk to her and make things right, ok? And YOU!! he grinned, - You are so damn sexy, when you get mad that I wanna take you right here, he looked at me with passion in his eyes.
- Oh, no..., I made a face again, - I'm so NOT having any sex with you! I said and tried to fight myself free again, but I had no chance to escape.
- My little angel is NOT going anywhere, Javi whispered to my ear and then he kissed and licked my neck, - and..., he continued, - we'll not have sex, we'll make love, he whispered to my other ear and kissed my neck and licked the other side as well.
- Let me go..., I said angrily.
Imke... am I lucky??
Last edited by Mindex on Fri Jul 18, 2008 7:13 pm; edited 1 time in total
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Mhahah... First fighting and then having a sex..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Location : Finland
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Shuu... no accident... but heartbroken...
Heli wrote:Mhahah... First fighting and then having a sex..
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Heli wrote:Mhahah... First fighting and then having a sex..
Hehe... but are you sure about it?
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
I'm not sure, I'm Heli..
But at least it seemed so. And Javi seemed to be sure about that too...
But at least it seemed so. And Javi seemed to be sure about that too...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Heli wrote:I'm not sure, I'm Heli..
But at least it seemed so. And Javi seemed to be sure about that too...
Smartass!!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Oh man, you gotta love Javi!
And yes, Minna, you are lucky! For a while....
Now give us more.
And yes, Minna, you are lucky! For a while....
Now give us more.
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
x Imke x wrote:Oh man, you gotta love Javi!
And yes, Minna, you are lucky! For a while....
Now give us more.
Not yet!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Mindex wrote:Heli wrote:I'm not sure, I'm Heli..
But at least it seemed so. And Javi seemed to be sure about that too...
Smartass!!
Be glad that I'm not here this weekend to teasing you.. I'm a bit hyper-mood at the moment..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Location : Finland
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
No accdident
Javi is so naughty
Great part!!!!!!!!!
Minna give us more
Javi is so naughty
Great part!!!!!!!!!
Minna give us more
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
Age : 31
Location : Lithuania
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Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
- Sonia has had difficult times. His brother died in a car accident and she has been really down for a long time.
Sonia's a transsexual
Sonia's a transsexual
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
Age : 32
Location : Sweden
Registration date : 2007-11-08
Re: *Angel... in a different story* part 39, the end
Haha!! I admit I didn't check all the mistakes...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
Location : Finland
Registration date : 2007-11-16
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