Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
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emilia
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
And you will get it, but first I have to type it
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Part 2
Ony putted Antonio on the floor, came closer to Andrea and kissed her pationately.
- I will correct everything. He said.
- It's about a time. She said. But now we have to go to Mikel and Monika.
They both looked to Antonio, but he wasn't there were Ony putted him.
- Where is he? Andrea asked.
They looked to the stairs. Antonio was going them.
- OMG!!!!1 He can fall down. She said.
Ony ran to him and took him on his hand's.
- Where you wanted to run?
Antonio started to laugh.
- It's nothing funny. Said Andrea.
- Andrea and Ony went to babies room. Ony putted him on the floor and went to the capboard. From there he took small football player clothes. On the back of shirt's was written Antonio and No.1 Ony started to dress up Antonio, but he didn't wanted that. Antonio started to call mum.
- I am here my little angel. She said and came from the bathroom.
Antonio ran to her.
- What dad have done to yoou? She asked.
- Me? I just wanted to dress up him.
-Give me his clothes I will finish.
Andrea dressed up Antonio and then went to change her clothes too. All the time Ony was looking at her. He came to her and kissed.
- Ony.....
- I know, but it's just only a kiss. He said.
Andrea with Antonio went down stairs. After few minutes came Ony.
- So let's go. He said.
They went out, sat into car and drove. After 20 minutes they arrived. Mikel opened the doors.
- Hey my friend came. Hi, Antonio. Mikel said.
- You said it to me or for the baby? Ony asked.
- I said clearly Antonio, not Ony.
They came in.
- Where is Monika? Andrea asked.
- She is in the kitchen. Said Mikel.
- Ok. I am going to the kitchen and you take care of the baby.
- Of course sunshine. We will be in the garden. Ony said.
Andrea went to the kitchen.
- Hey Monika!
- Hi. Finally you came.
- Welll it took up long to dress up Antonio.
- It seems that you have a lot of problems with 2 man.
- Maybe everything would be different if there would be a girl.
- So why you don't try? Monika asked.
- Have you talked with Ony?
- No, but you are young and you are family.
- Monika, please stop. Why you and Mikel are not trying?
- Well we.... mmhhh......
- Something happened? Andrea asked.
- No.
When Monika said so, she turned her eyes.
- Don't lie to me.
- Something is wrong with Mikel. I think that he don't love me anumore.
- Why do you think so?
- Because he became cold and few days he sleeps in other room. Monika said.
- He is not sleeping in the same room? You must be lieing.
- Why should I?
- But he loved you so much. Andrea said.
- That's the point Andrea he loved me. Now everything is finished. It's going to happen again. My heart will be break.
Ony putted Antonio on the floor, came closer to Andrea and kissed her pationately.
- I will correct everything. He said.
- It's about a time. She said. But now we have to go to Mikel and Monika.
They both looked to Antonio, but he wasn't there were Ony putted him.
- Where is he? Andrea asked.
They looked to the stairs. Antonio was going them.
- OMG!!!!1 He can fall down. She said.
Ony ran to him and took him on his hand's.
- Where you wanted to run?
Antonio started to laugh.
- It's nothing funny. Said Andrea.
- Andrea and Ony went to babies room. Ony putted him on the floor and went to the capboard. From there he took small football player clothes. On the back of shirt's was written Antonio and No.1 Ony started to dress up Antonio, but he didn't wanted that. Antonio started to call mum.
- I am here my little angel. She said and came from the bathroom.
Antonio ran to her.
- What dad have done to yoou? She asked.
- Me? I just wanted to dress up him.
-Give me his clothes I will finish.
Andrea dressed up Antonio and then went to change her clothes too. All the time Ony was looking at her. He came to her and kissed.
- Ony.....
- I know, but it's just only a kiss. He said.
Andrea with Antonio went down stairs. After few minutes came Ony.
- So let's go. He said.
They went out, sat into car and drove. After 20 minutes they arrived. Mikel opened the doors.
- Hey my friend came. Hi, Antonio. Mikel said.
- You said it to me or for the baby? Ony asked.
- I said clearly Antonio, not Ony.
They came in.
- Where is Monika? Andrea asked.
- She is in the kitchen. Said Mikel.
- Ok. I am going to the kitchen and you take care of the baby.
- Of course sunshine. We will be in the garden. Ony said.
Andrea went to the kitchen.
- Hey Monika!
- Hi. Finally you came.
- Welll it took up long to dress up Antonio.
- It seems that you have a lot of problems with 2 man.
- Maybe everything would be different if there would be a girl.
- So why you don't try? Monika asked.
- Have you talked with Ony?
- No, but you are young and you are family.
- Monika, please stop. Why you and Mikel are not trying?
- Well we.... mmhhh......
- Something happened? Andrea asked.
- No.
When Monika said so, she turned her eyes.
- Don't lie to me.
- Something is wrong with Mikel. I think that he don't love me anumore.
- Why do you think so?
- Because he became cold and few days he sleeps in other room. Monika said.
- He is not sleeping in the same room? You must be lieing.
- Why should I?
- But he loved you so much. Andrea said.
- That's the point Andrea he loved me. Now everything is finished. It's going to happen again. My heart will be break.
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
Age : 31
Location : Lithuania
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
ohhh......sunshine???? What a beautiful word!!!
Poor Monika!!! Mikel you will pay for this
Great Part Laura!!! I loved it, especialy the part with the sunshine word!!!!
Poor Monika!!! Mikel you will pay for this
Great Part Laura!!! I loved it, especialy the part with the sunshine word!!!!
Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Naw.. poor Monika.. I feel sorry for her..
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Hi, Antonio. Mikel said.
- You said it to me or for the baby? Ony asked.
- I said clearly Antonio, not Ony.
omg
and ony with the baby, still cute....
but poor Monika, so bad to her
- You said it to me or for the baby? Ony asked.
- I said clearly Antonio, not Ony.
omg
and ony with the baby, still cute....
but poor Monika, so bad to her
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Poor Monika...("me")haha..joke Like Dimitra said: sunshine is very nice word so.....i wanna say.....MORE.Daugiau!!!!!!!!
Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Mikel
Monika
Ony
Antonio
Great part!!
MORE!!
Monika
Ony
Antonio
Great part!!
MORE!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Sunshine is a cute nickname
Poor Monika
Stupid Mikel
Poor Monika
Stupid Mikel
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Thanks girl's for you coments
And more.....really soon
And more.....really soon
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Sergo wrote:Sunshine is a cute nickname
Poor Monika
Stupid Mikel
I love your comment
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Poor Monica.
Stupid Mikel
Nice sentence to Mikel stupid...
Stupid Mikel
Nice sentence to Mikel stupid...
Last edited by Monikute on Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:48 pm; edited 1 time in total
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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wait another part your opinion will change
Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Try to say something more and then I will kick you ass
And you wont run from me
And you wont run from me
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Hehe,i'm in Lithuania and you are in England. HEHE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and I'm faster.
Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
But I will come back and it will be part of your birthday present
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
First I will kick your ass,then we will talk
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
Age : 34
Location : Portugal
Registration date : 2007-11-08
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
Age : 31
Location : Lithuania
Registration date : 2008-02-16
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
Age : 34
Location : Portugal
Registration date : 2007-11-08
Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END
Part 3
- Maybe there is some kind of reason. Andrea said.
- I think that he don't trust me.
- Have you talked with him about it?
- No.
- What are you waiting for?
Monika was silent and didn't said anything.
- I think we shouldn't come here. You need to be alone and talk about it.
Andrea in Monika's eyes saw tears.
- Please don't go. We won't talk.
To the kitchen came Mikel. He really looked different. Andrea didn't noticed that earlier. His eyes were sad and that wonderful smile was gone from his face. He opened frigde, took some drink and went.
- He looks so pale. It seems that he is tired of everything. Said Andrea.
- Not for everything. He is tired of me. Said Monika.
- Monika stop.
- I think that I have to go from here.
- Do you need some help? Andrea asked.
- No thanks. Said Monika.
- Ok then I am going to the garden to look how is everything.
- Of course.
Andrea went to the garden. There guys were playing with Antonio, just only Mikel was sitting and looking to them. Andrea sat near him.
- How are you? She asked.
- Bad.
- What's happened?
- I don't wanna tell fot you my problems, because I think that you have your owns.
- I am listening. Said Andrea.
- Well Monika doesn't love me anymore. He said.
Andrea was in shock.
- She started to look to others. Her kisses changed and all those concerts...... I am so tired and I need her, but I feel that I am loosing her. That's why I went to sleep to the other room that won't disturb to her.
- That was the problem. You need to talk. Said Andrea,
- I don't get it. Mikel said.
- Monika thinks that you don't love her anymore.
- Really? Mikel asked.
- She have just sait it to me. She is crying.
- Monika is crying?
- She loves you.
- I am going to talk with her. He said.
- Go.
Monika was cutting lettuse, when Mikel came to the kitchen.
- Monika....... Can I talk with you? He asked.
- Sure.
- I need you. Please don't leave me.
- I don't understand. She said.
- I love you Monika. He came closer and kissed her. She answered the same.
- Auch.....
- What's happened? Mikel asked.
- I cut into my finger.
She put her finger under the water.
- Now everything is ok. She said.
- Do you still love me?
- And what do you think? But I wouldn't say the same about you.
- I love you too. He said.
- Then why do you left to the other room and left me alone?
- Because I feel tired and I thought that you don't love me anymore.
- Oh you silly. How I can stop loving you?
- Maybe there is some kind of reason. Andrea said.
- I think that he don't trust me.
- Have you talked with him about it?
- No.
- What are you waiting for?
Monika was silent and didn't said anything.
- I think we shouldn't come here. You need to be alone and talk about it.
Andrea in Monika's eyes saw tears.
- Please don't go. We won't talk.
To the kitchen came Mikel. He really looked different. Andrea didn't noticed that earlier. His eyes were sad and that wonderful smile was gone from his face. He opened frigde, took some drink and went.
- He looks so pale. It seems that he is tired of everything. Said Andrea.
- Not for everything. He is tired of me. Said Monika.
- Monika stop.
- I think that I have to go from here.
- Do you need some help? Andrea asked.
- No thanks. Said Monika.
- Ok then I am going to the garden to look how is everything.
- Of course.
Andrea went to the garden. There guys were playing with Antonio, just only Mikel was sitting and looking to them. Andrea sat near him.
- How are you? She asked.
- Bad.
- What's happened?
- I don't wanna tell fot you my problems, because I think that you have your owns.
- I am listening. Said Andrea.
- Well Monika doesn't love me anymore. He said.
Andrea was in shock.
- She started to look to others. Her kisses changed and all those concerts...... I am so tired and I need her, but I feel that I am loosing her. That's why I went to sleep to the other room that won't disturb to her.
- That was the problem. You need to talk. Said Andrea,
- I don't get it. Mikel said.
- Monika thinks that you don't love her anymore.
- Really? Mikel asked.
- She have just sait it to me. She is crying.
- Monika is crying?
- She loves you.
- I am going to talk with her. He said.
- Go.
Monika was cutting lettuse, when Mikel came to the kitchen.
- Monika....... Can I talk with you? He asked.
- Sure.
- I need you. Please don't leave me.
- I don't understand. She said.
- I love you Monika. He came closer and kissed her. She answered the same.
- Auch.....
- What's happened? Mikel asked.
- I cut into my finger.
She put her finger under the water.
- Now everything is ok. She said.
- Do you still love me?
- And what do you think? But I wouldn't say the same about you.
- I love you too. He said.
- Then why do you left to the other room and left me alone?
- Because I feel tired and I thought that you don't love me anymore.
- Oh you silly. How I can stop loving you?
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
Age : 31
Location : Lithuania
Registration date : 2008-02-16
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