Re: Continuation of Entra en mi vida>No trust<-Part21 THE END

**~Mar~** Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:12 pm

Naaww..

They're so cute.. Does this means that everything's fine between them?
Me loved it! What a Face

emilia Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:12 pm

Great part Very Happy

NETTTE Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:16 pm

Great part!! They are so sweet!! I love you

Sergo Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:46 pm

Aww

Poor Mikel. Razz

Prisca Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:51 pm

aww this was cute Razz

Dimitra_Ony Fri Jul 25, 2008 9:56 pm

WOW great part!!!! Very Happy

**Laura** Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:30 pm

~Mar~ wrote:Naaww.. They're so cute.. Does this means that everything's fine between them? Me loved it!

Ammmm mmmmm....... dunno Razz

Soon I will post new part and you will see Laughing

**Laura** Sat Jul 26, 2008 6:48 pm

Sergo wrote:Aww
Poor Mikel.

First Monika was poor and Mikel stupid Laughing

And now Mikel is poor so it means that Monika is........ silent

**~Mar~** Sat Jul 26, 2008 7:47 pm

Laura wrote:
~Mar~ wrote:Naaww.. They're so cute.. Does this means that everything's fine between them? Me loved it!

Ammmm mmmmm....... dunno
Soon I will post new part and you will see

Good

Prisca Sun Jul 27, 2008 1:17 am

i can't wait to read it soon Razz

**Monikute** Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:09 pm

hehe...So Sergo,what do you think about STUPID Mikel now? Laughing

Amazing,adorable,nice...Thats why i wanna more Razz

Sergo Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:40 pm

Laura wrote:
Sergo wrote:Aww
Poor Mikel.

First Monika was poor and Mikel stupid
And now Mikel is poor so it means that Monika is........

Hehehehehe Laughing

**Monikute** Sun Jul 27, 2008 8:45 pm

Laura wrote:
Sergo wrote:Aww
Poor Mikel.

First Monika was poor and Mikel stupid
And now Mikel is poor so it means that Monika is........

I'm going to kill you Laura!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

**Laura** Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:32 pm

Monikute wrote:
Laura wrote:
Sergo wrote:Aww
Poor Mikel.

First Monika was poor and Mikel stupid
And now Mikel is poor so it means that Monika is........

I'm going to kill you Laura!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Now I am dead

Help somebody............... Rolling Eyes

**Monikute** Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:32 am

Nobody won't help you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Evil or Very Mad

**Laura** Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:14 am

It seems so pale

But I didn't say so......I just asked Sergo Rolling Eyes

**Monikute** Mon Jul 28, 2008 11:34 am

Laura wrote:It seems so
But I didn't say so......I just asked Sergo

ye ye ....you asked Sergo....But you mean that MONIKA is stupid.... Evil or Very Mad

**Laura** Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:46 pm

Part 4

Through her cheek fall a tear.
- Please don't cry. Mikel said.
- I am crying from happiness, that everything is ok. So you are going back to room?
- Yeah and now......
Mikel pushed Monika to the wall and kissed her pationately.
- ..... I am going to take you there and there we could do something.
- Mikel..... we have got guest's: Javi, Basty and Ony with and Andrea.
- So what? They can wait.
- Yeah, yeah. Go to the garden and I will come.
- Hey.....
- Yes my love. Said Monika.
- Ok, ok you won.
Mikel kissed her again softly and went to the garden. When Mikel left, Monika took a deep breath. Mikel came back to the garden with a smile on his face. Andrea understood that everything is ok. Mikel went to boys. After few minutes came Monika.
- To your garden came Madrid real team.
- I see. You know they are very beautiful players.
- Yeah. The most I like that one in the gates. Andrea said and showed to Ony.
- Good type, but I prefer that one..... Oh my God.
Monika closed her eyes.
- Which have just fall down. She continued.
Andrea and Monika started to laugh.
- That's normal he is new one. He have just joined the team. Said Andrea.
- It seems. That little angel is really cute too. Real copy of that one in gates.
Antonio ran to them and sat on the ground. Andrea took a glass with a drink and gave to Antonio. He drank, stood up and again ran to play.
- He is so small, but energy he got. Said Monika.
- Antonio all energy took from me.
After few minutes to them came Ony and Mikel. Basty and Javi was still playing with Antonio. Mikel sat near monika and hugged her.
- We are very tired. Said Ony.
- Look to your son. He could play and play. Said Andrea.
- It's not the same age. Said Mikel and started to laugh.
- He will sleep like an angel. Said Ony and winked to Andrea.
- I think the same about you. She said.
- Is still there the same suggestion? Asked Mikel.
- Of course. Said Ony.
- What are you talking about? Asked Monika.
- About vacations in Malljorca. Said Mikel.
- It sounds really good. Monika said.
- Just only we four. Said Ony.
- Four? And how will be Antonio? Asked Andrea.
- He will be with my parents in Valensia. They missed him. Said Ony.
- I hope there won't be Daniel. Andrea said.
- I don't know. Last time he was in Portugal with his girlfriend. But don't forget that he is my brother and Antonio uncle. Ony said.
- I didn't forgot that, but you also don't forget what he had done to me. She said.
- Aren't you planning new football player to our football team? Asked Mikel.
- Coach didn't gave a permision. Said Ony. And what about you? It's about time, because later you will be old. He continued.
- I haven't talked with mine coach. Mikel said.
- Coach is going to have vacations and new players will wait. Said Monika.
- Agree. Said Andrea.

emilia Mon Jul 28, 2008 8:55 pm

Great

NETTTE Mon Jul 28, 2008 9:05 pm

Liked the part!! Very Happy

More??

Dimitra_Ony Mon Jul 28, 2008 9:19 pm

GREAT!!!! Well, I'm pretty sure that Antonio's energy is something that Ony has too!!! Embarassed

hope tomorrow there will be a new part Laura......plzzzzzzzzzz

Prisca Tue Jul 29, 2008 2:31 am

the last sentences were funny Laughing

Sergo Tue Jul 29, 2008 8:07 pm

Vacation

Dimitra_Ony Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:29 pm

Lauraaaaaa.......you said you'd post a new part yesterday....... Sad

PLZZZZZz post a new part!!!

NETTTE Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:48 pm

Dimitra_Ony wrote:Lauraaaaaa.......you said you'd post a new part yesterday....... PLZZZZZz post a new part!!!

Yeees, please, new part!!

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