~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
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~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
So, I just thought that I'll give it a try In gen, I was waiting for the nash.es foro to start working, but as it is still shut down, I shall post my story here...
Hopefully, you will like it
P.S. I am very sorry if there are mistakes in spanish words, I am bery bad at spanish
Hopefully, you will like it
P.S. I am very sorry if there are mistakes in spanish words, I am bery bad at spanish
Last edited by on Tue Jan 08, 2008 9:24 pm; edited 16 times in total
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
Age : 34
Location : Lituania
Registration date : 2007-11-26
Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
1.
‘And how did you like that building the guide showed us? You know, the one he showed when we were talking about his amazing smile?’ I laughed and licked some ice-cream. The first Spanish ice-cream I ever tasted.
‘It was amazing…’ my cousin answered dreamily. We were sharing the moments of our excursion.
‘I meant the building,’ I teased her.
‘I meant that the building was amazing,’ she blushed and I smiled.
‘I guess you also meant the smile, admit it!’ I said.
‘Never!’ my cousin yelled and we both laughed. I almost dropped my ice-cream. ‘Careful,’ my cousin said. ‘I won’t give you mine if you drop yours,’ she laughed.
‘Alright, his smile is heaven, no?’ I said. ‘It can drop you dead! Like I almost dropped my ice-cream,’ I added.
‘And I was thinking why you’re so weird lately,’ my cousin now teased me.
‘Oh come on, it’s not so obvious…’ I was saying, but then somebody bumped into me. All my ice-cream got onto my brand new Diesel blouse. ‘Oh… My… God…’ I stuttered and looked at my totally new cloth. I wore it for the first time.
‘Ah Dios, señorita, lo siento!’ the guy said fast.
‘My NEW blouse!!!’ I yelled.
‘Perdóname…’ the guy said.
‘I don’t speak Spanish!’ I yelled again. ‘Jesus, my totally new original Diesel blouse!’ I almost panicked.
‘I am sorry,’ the guy said then in English.
‘Your “Sorry” won’t clean my cloth!’ I said. ‘And my ice-cream! My very first Spanish ice-cream!’ I said.
‘Look, I will pay you for the washing and buy you ice-cream, alright?’ he said.
‘My mother will kill me! I spent quite some money and…it is ruined now! Argh!’ I shouted.
‘Hey, I said I am sorry! I will pay!’ the guy said again and again.
‘Yeah, right. After ten minutes you won’t even remember my face, so how will you pay, huh?’ I shook my head. The guy took out a piece of paper and a pen. He wrote something down and gave the paper to me.
‘Here is my phone number, call me when you get the bill for washing the blouse,’ he said.
‘I can wash my clothes myself, thank you,’ I said and took the paper. ‘But if you say so… God, my blouse!’ I was still shocked.
‘Stop whining already,’ the guy said irritated. He grabbed my arm and dragged me to the place where ice-cream was sold. ‘What do you want?’
‘What?’ I asked and pushed away his hands. ‘Don’t touch me!’ I said.
‘What ice-cream do you want?’ he asked.
‘Banana,’ I answered. The guy straightened his sunglasses and looked at me. ‘What?’ I asked and rolled my eyes.
‘Nothing,’ he said and turned away again. While he was buying the ice-cream, my cousin grabbed my arm and dragged me a bit away.
‘Why everybody’s dragging me today?’ I said irritated.
‘It’s Mikel!’ my cousin said.
‘What?’ I asked.
‘It is Mikel,’ she repeated.
‘Stop kidding me!’ I said.
‘IT IS MIKEL,’ she said once again. ‘Look!’ She turned me around and I stared into the guy. It really was Mikel…
‘It is Mikel,’ I said.
‘No kidding?’ my cousin teased me.
‘Alright… Alriiiiiight… Tell me I didn’t yell, please!’ I said.
‘You did yell,’ my cousin said. ‘Actually, you were acting like a real witch.’
‘Right. All what I need. You made me feel so much better now,’ I said and yet smiled.
‘And how did you like that building the guide showed us? You know, the one he showed when we were talking about his amazing smile?’ I laughed and licked some ice-cream. The first Spanish ice-cream I ever tasted.
‘It was amazing…’ my cousin answered dreamily. We were sharing the moments of our excursion.
‘I meant the building,’ I teased her.
‘I meant that the building was amazing,’ she blushed and I smiled.
‘I guess you also meant the smile, admit it!’ I said.
‘Never!’ my cousin yelled and we both laughed. I almost dropped my ice-cream. ‘Careful,’ my cousin said. ‘I won’t give you mine if you drop yours,’ she laughed.
‘Alright, his smile is heaven, no?’ I said. ‘It can drop you dead! Like I almost dropped my ice-cream,’ I added.
‘And I was thinking why you’re so weird lately,’ my cousin now teased me.
‘Oh come on, it’s not so obvious…’ I was saying, but then somebody bumped into me. All my ice-cream got onto my brand new Diesel blouse. ‘Oh… My… God…’ I stuttered and looked at my totally new cloth. I wore it for the first time.
‘Ah Dios, señorita, lo siento!’ the guy said fast.
‘My NEW blouse!!!’ I yelled.
‘Perdóname…’ the guy said.
‘I don’t speak Spanish!’ I yelled again. ‘Jesus, my totally new original Diesel blouse!’ I almost panicked.
‘I am sorry,’ the guy said then in English.
‘Your “Sorry” won’t clean my cloth!’ I said. ‘And my ice-cream! My very first Spanish ice-cream!’ I said.
‘Look, I will pay you for the washing and buy you ice-cream, alright?’ he said.
‘My mother will kill me! I spent quite some money and…it is ruined now! Argh!’ I shouted.
‘Hey, I said I am sorry! I will pay!’ the guy said again and again.
‘Yeah, right. After ten minutes you won’t even remember my face, so how will you pay, huh?’ I shook my head. The guy took out a piece of paper and a pen. He wrote something down and gave the paper to me.
‘Here is my phone number, call me when you get the bill for washing the blouse,’ he said.
‘I can wash my clothes myself, thank you,’ I said and took the paper. ‘But if you say so… God, my blouse!’ I was still shocked.
‘Stop whining already,’ the guy said irritated. He grabbed my arm and dragged me to the place where ice-cream was sold. ‘What do you want?’
‘What?’ I asked and pushed away his hands. ‘Don’t touch me!’ I said.
‘What ice-cream do you want?’ he asked.
‘Banana,’ I answered. The guy straightened his sunglasses and looked at me. ‘What?’ I asked and rolled my eyes.
‘Nothing,’ he said and turned away again. While he was buying the ice-cream, my cousin grabbed my arm and dragged me a bit away.
‘Why everybody’s dragging me today?’ I said irritated.
‘It’s Mikel!’ my cousin said.
‘What?’ I asked.
‘It is Mikel,’ she repeated.
‘Stop kidding me!’ I said.
‘IT IS MIKEL,’ she said once again. ‘Look!’ She turned me around and I stared into the guy. It really was Mikel…
‘It is Mikel,’ I said.
‘No kidding?’ my cousin teased me.
‘Alright… Alriiiiiight… Tell me I didn’t yell, please!’ I said.
‘You did yell,’ my cousin said. ‘Actually, you were acting like a real witch.’
‘Right. All what I need. You made me feel so much better now,’ I said and yet smiled.
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
Age : 34
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Registration date : 2007-11-26
Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
ANGIEEEE!!!!! I've missed your stories! And this one won't be an exception! The beginning shows already that this is dynamite!! :doublethumbsup
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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dnashrocks wrote:aaaw! this is amazing!
Thanks, hon
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
Age : 34
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Registration date : 2007-11-26
Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
Mindex wrote: ANGIEEEE!!!!! I've missed your stories! And this one won't be an exception! The beginning shows already that this is dynamite!! :doublethumbsup
Aaaw, Minna!!!
Oh you're too nice But I indeed hope it will be at least a little boom, LOL
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
Age : 34
Location : Lituania
Registration date : 2007-11-26
Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
greaaaaatttt
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
Oh Angie. It is so good to see you here writing new story. Thank you.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Location : with Javi in his bed
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Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
Yeeeeee this time it'a bout Mikel...
Your storys have influence on me... When I red If farrytales come true, for a week i guess Ony was my number one and I abanded Mikel...
So now I will love Mikel even better yay....
Anyways I can see this will be a killer story :pirat:
Just don't keep us waiting long...
Your storys have influence on me... When I red If farrytales come true, for a week i guess Ony was my number one and I abanded Mikel...
So now I will love Mikel even better yay....
Anyways I can see this will be a killer story :pirat:
Just don't keep us waiting long...
kleckutis_lt- Number of posts : 278
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Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
aaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh Angie is back with stories
i loved this part... already yellings
i loved this part... already yellings
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Location : Portugal
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-Katja;
Thanks, dear
-girl;
Ys, I guess I am back, LOL
Took me a while to make such decision though
-Julija;
Hahaha, oh you read it already? Well, glad you liked it I'll send you the other part anytime soon then, if you wish
And I must say it is great to hear such nice words from another great writer Administracija rules, no?
-Pris;
Yep, kinda Been waiting long? LOL
And yes, I promise quite some yellings in this story as well
However, I tried to do all to make it also romantic and with this hidden feeling of love, so I hope you will all like it
Thanks, dear
-girl;
Ys, I guess I am back, LOL
Took me a while to make such decision though
-Julija;
Hahaha, oh you read it already? Well, glad you liked it I'll send you the other part anytime soon then, if you wish
And I must say it is great to hear such nice words from another great writer Administracija rules, no?
-Pris;
Yep, kinda Been waiting long? LOL
And yes, I promise quite some yellings in this story as well
However, I tried to do all to make it also romantic and with this hidden feeling of love, so I hope you will all like it
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
Age : 34
Location : Lituania
Registration date : 2007-11-26
Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
You're back!
Really interesting start!
Can't wait for more..
Really interesting start!
Can't wait for more..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Location : Finland
Registration date : 2007-11-18
Re: ~One ice-cream story~ by Kyra THE END
2.
‘Here is your ice-cream. Now I will go,’ he said and held the ice-cream in his hand.
‘Look, I am so sorry that I acted like that…’ I said and pushed his hand with the ice-cream towards himself. ‘I can’t take it.’
‘Don’t be silly. Take it,’ he said and tried to give me the ice-cream.
‘No no, I can’t. You shouldn’t have bought it. After all, it can happen to anybody,’ I said.
‘Why then I bought it, huh? Take it,’ he said, but I pushed the hand away again. Just I pushed it maybe a little bit too strong.
‘Whooops,’ I muttered and put my hands on my face. ‘So…so…sorry,’ I stuttered. The ice-cream was now all over Mikel’s shirt.
‘Amazing!’ Mikel said sarcastically.
‘At least you know how I felt!’ I said.
‘You did it on purpose, no?’ he asked.
‘No!’ I said.
‘Yes,’ he said.
‘No!!!’ I was losing my patience.
‘Yes!’ he looked the same.
‘Sorry! Ok, I let you to forget my blouse and not pay for it,’ I said.
‘Fine…’ he said. I saw that my cousin was walking around irritated too… But then a girl came towards us.
‘Mikel, corazón!’ she said and wanted to hug him, but then she noticed his creamy shirt.
‘Hola,’ Mikel said and pecked her cheek. Then the girl looked at me. She was scanning me with her eyes and then she noticed my shirt as well.
‘Qué es esto? Quién es ella?’ the girl asked. Mikel wanted to say something, but the girl made her own conclusions. She came to me and started talking fast and angry. Then she pushed me and almost slapped my face, but Mikel grabbed her hand. I was standing shocked and just watching the scene. The girl looked at Mikel angrily. ‘La defiendes?’ she asked and then she ran away. Mikel wanted to follow her, but then he stopped.
‘Oh well, I will call her. How are you?’ he asked me then. I only blinked. Mikel smiled.
‘What’s so funny?’ I asked and blinked again.
‘You’re blinking so funny…’ he said and laughed.
‘What?’ I said but felt that I started smiling as well. ‘And you…you smile funny!’ I said. He laughed again. ‘You know, you ruined my new blouse, my first ice-cream in Spain, my perfect day on my vacations, that mad cow just pushed me around for nothing, I didn’t understand anything and you LAUGH?’ I said. ‘You are just INSANE! You and your girl!’ I said and wanted to walk away, but Mikel stopped me.
‘Look, I am sorry,’ he said sincerely and serious. ‘I will pay for the blouse and…and dunno, you can ask me something if that makes you feel better,’ he said.
‘Alright, but now I really want to go home and take a shower,’ I said and started walking away. My cousin came to me, finally, and asked what happened. But I just shook my head. Then I remembered something and turned around.
‘How about your shirt?’ I asked Mikel. He was quite away already, so I had to yell.
‘No worries, it’s not mine anyways,’ he yelled back and laughed.
‘Now HIS smile IS heavenly,’ my cousin said.
‘Yeah, and himself is an ass,’ I said and looked at my blouse. ‘Hope he at least pays for it,’ I said and we walked away.
‘Here is your ice-cream. Now I will go,’ he said and held the ice-cream in his hand.
‘Look, I am so sorry that I acted like that…’ I said and pushed his hand with the ice-cream towards himself. ‘I can’t take it.’
‘Don’t be silly. Take it,’ he said and tried to give me the ice-cream.
‘No no, I can’t. You shouldn’t have bought it. After all, it can happen to anybody,’ I said.
‘Why then I bought it, huh? Take it,’ he said, but I pushed the hand away again. Just I pushed it maybe a little bit too strong.
‘Whooops,’ I muttered and put my hands on my face. ‘So…so…sorry,’ I stuttered. The ice-cream was now all over Mikel’s shirt.
‘Amazing!’ Mikel said sarcastically.
‘At least you know how I felt!’ I said.
‘You did it on purpose, no?’ he asked.
‘No!’ I said.
‘Yes,’ he said.
‘No!!!’ I was losing my patience.
‘Yes!’ he looked the same.
‘Sorry! Ok, I let you to forget my blouse and not pay for it,’ I said.
‘Fine…’ he said. I saw that my cousin was walking around irritated too… But then a girl came towards us.
‘Mikel, corazón!’ she said and wanted to hug him, but then she noticed his creamy shirt.
‘Hola,’ Mikel said and pecked her cheek. Then the girl looked at me. She was scanning me with her eyes and then she noticed my shirt as well.
‘Qué es esto? Quién es ella?’ the girl asked. Mikel wanted to say something, but the girl made her own conclusions. She came to me and started talking fast and angry. Then she pushed me and almost slapped my face, but Mikel grabbed her hand. I was standing shocked and just watching the scene. The girl looked at Mikel angrily. ‘La defiendes?’ she asked and then she ran away. Mikel wanted to follow her, but then he stopped.
‘Oh well, I will call her. How are you?’ he asked me then. I only blinked. Mikel smiled.
‘What’s so funny?’ I asked and blinked again.
‘You’re blinking so funny…’ he said and laughed.
‘What?’ I said but felt that I started smiling as well. ‘And you…you smile funny!’ I said. He laughed again. ‘You know, you ruined my new blouse, my first ice-cream in Spain, my perfect day on my vacations, that mad cow just pushed me around for nothing, I didn’t understand anything and you LAUGH?’ I said. ‘You are just INSANE! You and your girl!’ I said and wanted to walk away, but Mikel stopped me.
‘Look, I am sorry,’ he said sincerely and serious. ‘I will pay for the blouse and…and dunno, you can ask me something if that makes you feel better,’ he said.
‘Alright, but now I really want to go home and take a shower,’ I said and started walking away. My cousin came to me, finally, and asked what happened. But I just shook my head. Then I remembered something and turned around.
‘How about your shirt?’ I asked Mikel. He was quite away already, so I had to yell.
‘No worries, it’s not mine anyways,’ he yelled back and laughed.
‘Now HIS smile IS heavenly,’ my cousin said.
‘Yeah, and himself is an ass,’ I said and looked at my blouse. ‘Hope he at least pays for it,’ I said and we walked away.
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Heli wrote:You're back!
Really interesting start!
Can't wait for more..
Thanks, Heli!!!
Nice to be back and talk to you all again, girls :doublethumbsup
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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You have Mikel in front of you and all you care about is his blouse!? *stares disbelievingly*
Btw: Yayy!! Another angie fic! I can never keep up with your fast posts!
Btw: Yayy!! Another angie fic! I can never keep up with your fast posts!
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waiting for moree!!!!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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This is really great!
I want more..
I want more..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Yes this is soooo great
I wanna more...
I wanna more...
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Thank you, girls, THANK YOU SO SO MUCH!!!!
And well yeah, blouse is brand new...and original Diesel... tons of money, you know
Besides, relationship between Mikel and "me" of the story will be...well, you will see
And well yeah, blouse is brand new...and original Diesel... tons of money, you know
Besides, relationship between Mikel and "me" of the story will be...well, you will see
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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OMG amazing story I couldn't stop laughing please post next part very soon
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Sergo will be in trouble now
Aaaand I guess I will post another part today...
Aaaand I guess I will post another part today...
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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