Re: A Short story about Mikel ;)part 10 THE END

Prisca Wed Apr 09, 2008 4:03 pm

more today?? Rolling Eyes

**Monikute** Wed Apr 09, 2008 4:22 pm

She closed curtains over Mikel.... Laughing

Anyway...great part and want MORE Rolling Eyes

Aida Wed Apr 09, 2008 6:47 pm

Oooo

Love is in the air Suspect

Great part Very Happy

kleckutis_lt Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:38 pm

Part 7

Some days passed quietly… The weekend ended so I had to go back to work….

It was getting dark… But I had to go to the shop before going home… I mean my fridge was empty…. I didn’t have any time to go to the store so now I found a free minute I finally went there…. The shop was crowded… So eventually I got out of the store swearing like a old man… I held my two bags full of food and some else goods…. My coat was opened because I was getting warm.. And mad…. And then…What luck… one of my bag’s bottom ripped and all of my goods spilled on the ground….

- Now that just Fucking great! I yelled to my self…Or maybe to god.. I don’t know but anyways….

I started picking the goods…My hair was falling on my face so eventually I didn’t see a thing…. When I took the hair from my face I noticed a man behind me picking my things and handing them to me.. I took it and started speaking while picking other goods….

- Oh thank you.. You are so nic…. Mikel…? What are you doing here…?

- Helping you..or maybe is it you who are helping me… hmmm… HE smiled askew…

- Don’t start Mikel.. I am mad as a furry so I am not a good company right now…

- Well being a furry is probably better then being your self… he teased me

- Thanks… I said sarcastyckly I needed that…

He took my bags from me and carried them to his car…

- What are you doing? I asked surprised….

- Stealing your bags! what does it look like? I am taking you home….He said and rolled his eyes…

- But I didn’t beg you to.. I was still surprised… But I was following him slowly to the car

- And I didn’t ask you.. Now are you going to sit in to the car or are going to run behind it? HE said and laughed…

- Yes yes of course… I said and smiled to…

All the time in the car we were talking he told about his job I told him about mine.. But there was something weird about him today…

When We drove to my house… I stepped out of the car and wanted to say bye but he also stepped out of it.. My heart started beating faster because I didn’t know what to expect…

But he looked normal as never….

He led me to the very door…

- Can I get a reword?

- For what?

- You are just too much… I take to the house twice and I don’t get anything noo that’s too much…

- Well… I I don’t know what to offer you…

Think again.. He said and before I could reply He pulled me near him and kissed me…I could feel his warm lips touching mine… And the taste of his perfume was nice… And the menthol taste of his gum.. Everything was perfect

Prisca Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:43 pm

i agree.... so perfect Beating heart

girl1035 Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:46 pm

Lovely.

tuLicia Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:56 pm

Menthol Gum... mmm =)

**Monikute** Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:28 pm

Gum..perfume....lovely Beating heart

MORE

Sergo Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:03 pm

Mikel.

**Laura** Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:07 pm

It's so lovely Beating heart

More?

Prisca Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:20 pm

massssss

**~Mar~** Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:16 pm

Niiiceeee

Más?

kleckutis_lt Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:30 pm

Part 8

- When he leaned back my eyes where still closed… I opened them slowly… He was smiling… then with saying a word he turned around and walked to the car…Just left me standing there… But after that.,.. Nothing silence. Not a word from him in days… Not a message, not anything… And when the day chased another day.. I got to realize that the kiss meant nothing to him… And with fear I was afraid that I wouldn’t fall for him.. For his false words.. False smile… And then it hit me…. That I was only my imagination. That he just played with me that’s all.. Another girl…So I decided to ignore him.. To get the whole wedding thing quick and live my own life…

So when the day before the wedding come I meditated and promised myself to ignore him… I mean today we had to meet everyone and talk about tomorrow, make preparations and stuff…. So we all met in Jen’s favorite coffee…. As expected Mikel was late…

- Fashionably late.. He said when he finally entered the coffee…. Of course these words made a huge laughter wave.. Everybody greeted him accept me… I just went aside for a minute… I watched him madly… I mean he looked like he owned the place… Friend of everybody… Mister center of the earth – I muttered irritated to my self… Then I sighed and went to the table everybody was sitting… he saw me and waved.. then walked towards me… Aldo he looked cute with his super BIG sun glasses I forced my self to make a cold look…

- Hi there…. He said and smiled…

- Yeah… Hi… I said calmly and pretended to look at the menu…

- So how are u? He asked…

- Perfect.. I said.. But my voice sounded more sad or mad than happy…

- I am fine also Thank you…. He seemed to ignore my coldness and smiled askew at me..

- Good for you… I picked up my eyes from the menu for a second but he looked to damn hot so I looked away…

- So this is the way it’s going to be from now on huh?

- It’s your fault…

- I could have any girl I want… In a eye blink… Who do you think you are…

- The smartest girl you ever seen…! Do you really thought I would fall for that cheezy talk and that fake kiss…?

- Fake.. (he sighed) HE sat on the edge of the table for some time and looked at me.. He tried to look cold but I thought I could see sadness in his eyes… When he finally went away.. No way I thought to my self and tried to have some fun with other guests.. but something was different.. I was missing a smile….

Aida Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:44 pm

Great part Very Happy

Eveline Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:45 pm

ooooooooooooh amazing part Very Happy

can't wait to read a new part Very Happy

Sergo Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:58 pm

DAUGIAU

girl1035 Thu Apr 10, 2008 10:05 pm

DAUGIAU

Sorry. I cant help it. This is just so great. Thumbs Up

kleckutis_lt Thu Apr 10, 2008 10:09 pm

Thaanks

well thre's only 2 parts left ... Razz

Prisca Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:47 am

oohh... i loved this part....

a shame that is only 2 more Rolling Eyes

**Laura** Fri Apr 11, 2008 3:19 pm

Only 2 parts? Shocked

Great part like always! Smile

And I want more!!!! Wink

tuLicia Fri Apr 11, 2008 8:01 pm

Mas?

Eveline Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:11 pm

more more more please Very Happy

kleckutis_lt Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:15 pm

Thaaaanks girls;)

Part 9

The day of the wedding… When all of us, girls met.. All of them was happy…Jen was floating of course… everyone accept me.. I smiled… All the time.. But it was just the outside mask… I didn’t want to ruin everybody’s emotions and happiness so I just played the game.. But inside I was going crazy… I mean.. I had to spend the whole day with Mikel… And at this moment I hated him… his words irritated me… Everything about him made me go nuts…

Hour by hour I was getting nervous about seeing him…

When all of the girls was in there dresses I came out of the dressing cabin( I was the last one to get my dress)..

- You look…Amazing girl! Luisa said…

- Mikel should be very proud to have you as his pair for this evening… Sharlote added…

I just bended my head down and said silently…

- He wont even notice…

- don’t be kidding me.. .The guy eats you with his eyes when he sees you…

- Shut up.. I said and closed the dressing room’s curtains…

- What’s up with her… Luisa said silently to Sharlote..

- I herd that.. I said out of the dressing room…

The hours where still passing like crazy… And the time to go to the wedding came…

We sat in to the limo and took off….

The bridesmaids startle getting out of the limo one by one and slowly walked to their pairs… The guys were waiting out side… They all looked so happy… I was the last one to come… ( Jen had to come with the other limo..) I went out of the limo… Suddenly all of the guys looked at me… And they just ate me with their eyes… At first I was a bit uncomfortable but then I thought.. Hey what the heck… let me enjoy the attention…

Mikel turned around with a cold face but it immediately changed when he laid his eyes on me.. I mean I don’t usually call my self pretty but… This dress made me feel special…

He came nearer and hugged my waist with his hand then smiled to everyone.. I did the same.. I mean we had to play along…

Prisca Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:20 pm

oohhh... mikel loved Razz

girl1035 Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:23 pm

Oh.

Me likeing it. Very Happy

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