Re: A Short story about Mikel ;)part 10 THE END

**Laura** Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:27 pm

Woow amazing!!! Smile

**Monikute** Fri Apr 11, 2008 9:30 pm

oOO..Mikelitoooo...she's coming Rolling Eyes

Anyway..more Julia

Sergo Fri Apr 11, 2008 10:25 pm

Sexy lady. Razz

Eveline Fri Apr 11, 2008 11:47 pm

oooooh more please Very Happy

Aida Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:41 pm

Nicee

Prisca Sat Apr 12, 2008 5:45 pm

more??

Sergo Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:42 pm

when will we get more? Razz

girl1035 Sat Apr 12, 2008 10:43 pm

I guess when Julia is online. And I hope it will be soon.

kleckutis_lt Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:15 pm

Part 10

- So how can this bee that I got the most prettiest girl?

- And who can I thank to get some attention from the most self loving guy here?

- You don’t know me at all… he said threw a grinned smile … We were still smiling to everyone…

- You made your self seem like that . You didn’t even call after our kiss so I thought it didn’t mean anything to you..

He wanted to say something.. But the guests came to us and started talking so we just had to stop talking… When we had a free second he said:

- we will talk later….

- So now you want to talk to me? You said you can have any girl you want… So why do you even care about talking to me?

- Because I…. He sighed… Never mind… And he let my waist go…. This move of him surprised me… Even though I hated him… I wanted him to hug me.. Because I felt.. I felt…I felt good when he was near him….

The day seemed to last forever… But every second it was more and more hard to play the game of good friends when he was trying to escape me….

When evening came… The official part ended and there was a party… I walked to the balcony because our play was over and… And I didn’t want to force him to be with me anymore… So I went to the balcony to get some fresh air… a gentle wind blew… I took a deep breath and looked up to the sky… But I herd as the balcony’s door opened and someone’s footsteps getting closer to me…. I felt the perfume that vas driving me crazy…

- It’s amazing isn’t it? the sky

I looked at him… At one second I got lost in his eyes.. That all of the time irritated me but now.,.. Now… I wished to look at them forever… I embraced his cheeks and leaned my head to my ear… and accidentally my lips stroke his lips… I putted my head on his neck and stayed there that way… But he leaned back….

- You kissed me…. He said silently ( he was talking about my accidental lip stroke)

- No… I said so silent even I almost herd that…

- Yes.. He said and now he embraced my face with his hands…. I closed my eyes.. That opened them and looked at his eyes.. Than lips…. And….. He kissed me… it was a gentle kiss… But.. There was so much passion in it… So much.. feeling..

When the kiss ended I was pleased so I bit my lip…

- I love when you do that.. He said smiling…

Then he spread his hand’s fingers… I did the same and reclined my hand the same way… He took my hand and embraced it wit his other hand… I smiled…

The end… Very Happy

**Laura** Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:21 pm

It's so lovely ending! Beating heart

Thanks Julia for another amazing story! Thumbs Up

girl1035 Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:32 pm

Oh, such a lovely ending. I wish this was a movie. It would be an amazing movie.

Eveline Sun Apr 13, 2008 6:42 pm

great end

I loved the story Very Happy

Aida Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:05 pm

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaw MrGreen

kleckutis_lt Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:16 pm

thaaanks girls Wink

Sergo Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:28 pm

Naw they kissed MrGreen

Lovely ending.

Prisca Mon Apr 14, 2008 2:10 am

kisssss....... Razz

this end was amazing Smile

**~Mar~** Mon Apr 14, 2008 7:19 pm

Like all the other girls: Nice ending Wink

loved to read it.. Wink

kleckutis_lt Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:46 pm

Damn I couldn't help my self..I started writing a continuation... Very Happy

girl1035 Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:57 pm

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeees. Very Happy

Prisca Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:51 am

ccoooolieeeeeeeeeeeeee Smile

**Monikute** Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:38 pm

Aw...so sweet Rolling Eyes

kissssss

oh..Thanks Julia Thumbs Up

Sergo Tue Apr 15, 2008 6:07 pm

Awesome!!

Mikeltequiero Sun May 18, 2008 5:45 pm

Oh, I hope that I was that girl! Beating heart

Very good story. Thumbs Up

NETTTE Mon May 19, 2008 7:03 pm

Ooooh, this story was amazing!! smile

The end was lovely!! Beating heart

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