*The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.
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Re: *The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.
Is this really the end? It's kinda weird end.. But I like it
Re: *The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.
This can't be end. Just no.
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No this isn't the end because if the Interval part would be a real part there would be 71 and I think Kath didn't want that so she made that one an interval one so that she could have the 70th part as the end.. am I right?
I hope so because this end would be a big mistery
And Ony is a retard, yes I hope she will find Javi soon!! Or Javi will find her?
So... can I ask for more?
I hope so because this end would be a big mistery
And Ony is a retard, yes I hope she will find Javi soon!! Or Javi will find her?
So... can I ask for more?
Re: *The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.
Yeah, Imke's right There is still one more part to go Thats why its the "last but one"
Otherwise it would be a wierd end
Maybe the last part tonight (:
Otherwise it would be a wierd end
Maybe the last part tonight (:
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Ony's reason
WHAT AN ASS
WHAT AN ASS
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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hahahah his reason in so ridiculous xD and he expected Mikel and Basty to back him up x)
but great part !
I just wanna read the final part now
but great part !
I just wanna read the final part now
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I hope the last part will be tonight Because I don't know if I happen to be online tomorrow
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WTF WTF... THIS WTF IS BLONDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Because a girls looks like PA he should sleep with a MJ look a like
Because a girls looks like PA he should sleep with a MJ look a like
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Part 70 - THE END.
I stayed under the tree, waiting. I don’t know what I was waiting for but I was waiting. Soon I stopped crying, I was out of tears. I don’t know why I was so emotional all of a sudden. Probably lack of sleep… I didn’t want to get up and go home. I wanted to stay exactly where I was and wait.
Soon the sun faded and I started to get scared. There were noises, rustles in the trees, I still didn’t want to go. I began to fall asleep, drifting in and out of consciousness. I started to dream. There were flashing lights.. Bright lights… and someone was calling my name… I recognised the voice.
Javi.
I stirred and opened my eyes. The lights were still flashing. Was it a dream?
I could still here my name… I called out.
- Javi!?
- Alisha!?
- Yeah, it’s me. I’m over here! By our tree…
- Ok, hold on, I’m nearly there.
He came, my saviour.
- JAVI! I got up and hugged him. I started to cry again. - I am so sorry! I so should have believed you. I was so scared. Please forgive me… please… please…
- Shhhh, it’s ok. I’m here now, no need to be upset.
I couldn’t say anymore. I just cried and hugged Javi. He comforted me, stroking my hair and whispering calming words in my ear. Eventually I was too exhausted to cry anymore.
We stayed sitting under the tree, just being with each other until morning came.
- Morning sleep beauty. Javi smiled at me.
- Morning.
- How are ya?
- I’ve been better. You?
- I’m just glad to be with you…
- How did you know I was here?
- Mikel rang me as soon as he left the airport, he was worried about you. I got on the next plane back and then I got another phone call off Mikel as you hadn’t come home. He didn’t know where you were, and he was worried out of his head. He was so close to calling the police. I told him that I knew where you would be.. Here…
- Oh, Javi. Thank you…
- There’s no need to thank me…
- Oh but there is!! I am so sorry I didn’t believe you, you were right all along, and I was so stupid and then you sang that song and then Ony did it again, and now I just feel so bad and…
He cut me off with a kiss. A long passionate kiss, it was the perfect climax. I entwined my fingers in
his hair and inhaled his sweet cologne.
I only came up for air the once. All i said was:
- I love you Javi.
- I love you too, with all my heart.
I stayed under the tree, waiting. I don’t know what I was waiting for but I was waiting. Soon I stopped crying, I was out of tears. I don’t know why I was so emotional all of a sudden. Probably lack of sleep… I didn’t want to get up and go home. I wanted to stay exactly where I was and wait.
Soon the sun faded and I started to get scared. There were noises, rustles in the trees, I still didn’t want to go. I began to fall asleep, drifting in and out of consciousness. I started to dream. There were flashing lights.. Bright lights… and someone was calling my name… I recognised the voice.
Javi.
I stirred and opened my eyes. The lights were still flashing. Was it a dream?
I could still here my name… I called out.
- Javi!?
- Alisha!?
- Yeah, it’s me. I’m over here! By our tree…
- Ok, hold on, I’m nearly there.
He came, my saviour.
- JAVI! I got up and hugged him. I started to cry again. - I am so sorry! I so should have believed you. I was so scared. Please forgive me… please… please…
- Shhhh, it’s ok. I’m here now, no need to be upset.
I couldn’t say anymore. I just cried and hugged Javi. He comforted me, stroking my hair and whispering calming words in my ear. Eventually I was too exhausted to cry anymore.
We stayed sitting under the tree, just being with each other until morning came.
- Morning sleep beauty. Javi smiled at me.
- Morning.
- How are ya?
- I’ve been better. You?
- I’m just glad to be with you…
- How did you know I was here?
- Mikel rang me as soon as he left the airport, he was worried about you. I got on the next plane back and then I got another phone call off Mikel as you hadn’t come home. He didn’t know where you were, and he was worried out of his head. He was so close to calling the police. I told him that I knew where you would be.. Here…
- Oh, Javi. Thank you…
- There’s no need to thank me…
- Oh but there is!! I am so sorry I didn’t believe you, you were right all along, and I was so stupid and then you sang that song and then Ony did it again, and now I just feel so bad and…
He cut me off with a kiss. A long passionate kiss, it was the perfect climax. I entwined my fingers in
his hair and inhaled his sweet cologne.
I only came up for air the once. All i said was:
- I love you Javi.
- I love you too, with all my heart.
Re: *The Story Of A Girl* ... PART 70 - The End.
OH NAAAAAAAW
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finally... all i can say is good things
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Ooooh so sweeeeeet!!!!!!!! The sweetest end ever!!!
Kath, thanks for writing this story! I simply loved it!!!
Kath, thanks for writing this story! I simply loved it!!!
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haha I'm just glad you liked it Thank you for reading it all the way through girlies, it was such a long story
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long but bery bery good
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Naaaaw!!! It was such an amazing, wonderful, touching, happy, funny, sometimes sad but great story! Really!
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haha thanks I'm glad you liked it Thanks for reading it
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nawww kath!! I just realised that i had missed two chappies (how could i have done that? ) and i am frustrated with ony! His stupid fucking reason! I mean so what if she looks like pamela anderson? Doesn't mean he has to SLEEP with her! And he expected her to stay with him after that?
Regards to the final chapter, it was so beautiful and touching and romantic! It was a wonderful and perfect way to end a story! I hate it when stories leave you on a cliffie, all unsatisfied, but your story was perfect from beginning to end! Thanks for writing this story kath!!
Regards to the final chapter, it was so beautiful and touching and romantic! It was a wonderful and perfect way to end a story! I hate it when stories leave you on a cliffie, all unsatisfied, but your story was perfect from beginning to end! Thanks for writing this story kath!!
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Aww, i'm glad you liked it and didnt get to bored having to read through it all
Thanks (:
Thanks (:
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