~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
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Re: ~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
Part twenty-seven
Almeira was staring at the waves through her tears. It was so beautiful to see the waves going up and down and just feel water caressing her feet. It calmed her down a bit and she tried to pull Ony’s face out of her heart and throw it away from her head, but it was really hard.
Almeira sighed. She was so stupid. From beginning to the end, she was so stupid… If only she could change anything. If only she could change everything! But would she then?
Almeira imagined Ony’s voice singing to her and she closed her eyes.
‘Hasta que me ames, hasta que me llores, como todas lo hacen por ti…’ she whispered and smiled with a sad smile. Ever since Mallorca she was having those words in her heart and ever since then she swore she will not stop until Ony loves her as she loved him. How stupid…
‘Hasta que me digas, que vas a ser mia…’ Almeira heard somebody saying quietly behind her and she turned around fast. Ony was smiling to her and Almeira’s heart started beating faster and faster.
Ony was smiling to her, because he knew she sang about him. He knew it! Her silent whisper was like angel’s song to him and he wanted to yell out of happiness that he was there, that she was near, that she didn’t hate him… He saw tears on her cheeks and he wanted to kiss each piece of her face for crying for him.
But he felt weird, he was standing there still and he couldn’t move at all. All he could do was staring at her and smiling. But it was all he needed during those few silent moments. Besides, he needed to catch his breath and he tried to ignore pain on the said brought by lack of oxygen.
‘You….you scared me,’ Almeira finally said when she couldn’t take the silence any longer. She turned her back to Ony and got back to watching the sea.
‘I am sorry,’ Ony said. It meant so much. He was sorry for everything he did wrong.
‘It’s ok. I forgive you,’ Almeira whispered. ‘How did you find me?’ she asked few more seconds.
‘Mikel told me where you went. He saw you in the crowd,’ Ony said the truth. His breath was finally normal again.
‘Oh Mikel,’ Almeira said and finally smiled. She shook her head gently. ‘As always. I will never be able to pay him for everything he had done for me,’ Almeira said.
‘And for me too. For us,’ Ony said and Almeira looked at him a bit confused. She wanted to believe it meant what she wanted it to mean, but she was afraid to dream. ‘Almeira, do you remember how in Madrid you didn’t take my autograph?’ Ony asked.
‘Yes,’ Almeira said silently. She didn’t really understand what he wanted to say by those words.
‘Well, I want you to take my autograph now. Can I sign?’ Ony asked. He took her hands into his and looked straight into her eyes. Almeira ran out of breath.
‘What?’ she just stuttered. ‘What…what do you want to sign? I… I don’t have anything here…no paper, no…no nothing,’ she said.
‘It’s not needed,’ Ony said and smiled. ‘Can I sign…your heart?’ he whispered. Ony kissed her fingers while she stood there silent and speechless and when she smiled, he knew it was her answer. He leaned and finally allowed himself to take what was meant to be his from very beginning.
Two people were kissing under the moonlight with their feet in the water, wind in their hair and they didn’t care about anything. They both finally found peace of their souls and hearts in each other.
‘I love you,’ she said.
‘I will love you forever,’ he answered.
And it was more than words.
THE END
Almeira was staring at the waves through her tears. It was so beautiful to see the waves going up and down and just feel water caressing her feet. It calmed her down a bit and she tried to pull Ony’s face out of her heart and throw it away from her head, but it was really hard.
Almeira sighed. She was so stupid. From beginning to the end, she was so stupid… If only she could change anything. If only she could change everything! But would she then?
Almeira imagined Ony’s voice singing to her and she closed her eyes.
‘Hasta que me ames, hasta que me llores, como todas lo hacen por ti…’ she whispered and smiled with a sad smile. Ever since Mallorca she was having those words in her heart and ever since then she swore she will not stop until Ony loves her as she loved him. How stupid…
‘Hasta que me digas, que vas a ser mia…’ Almeira heard somebody saying quietly behind her and she turned around fast. Ony was smiling to her and Almeira’s heart started beating faster and faster.
Ony was smiling to her, because he knew she sang about him. He knew it! Her silent whisper was like angel’s song to him and he wanted to yell out of happiness that he was there, that she was near, that she didn’t hate him… He saw tears on her cheeks and he wanted to kiss each piece of her face for crying for him.
But he felt weird, he was standing there still and he couldn’t move at all. All he could do was staring at her and smiling. But it was all he needed during those few silent moments. Besides, he needed to catch his breath and he tried to ignore pain on the said brought by lack of oxygen.
‘You….you scared me,’ Almeira finally said when she couldn’t take the silence any longer. She turned her back to Ony and got back to watching the sea.
‘I am sorry,’ Ony said. It meant so much. He was sorry for everything he did wrong.
‘It’s ok. I forgive you,’ Almeira whispered. ‘How did you find me?’ she asked few more seconds.
‘Mikel told me where you went. He saw you in the crowd,’ Ony said the truth. His breath was finally normal again.
‘Oh Mikel,’ Almeira said and finally smiled. She shook her head gently. ‘As always. I will never be able to pay him for everything he had done for me,’ Almeira said.
‘And for me too. For us,’ Ony said and Almeira looked at him a bit confused. She wanted to believe it meant what she wanted it to mean, but she was afraid to dream. ‘Almeira, do you remember how in Madrid you didn’t take my autograph?’ Ony asked.
‘Yes,’ Almeira said silently. She didn’t really understand what he wanted to say by those words.
‘Well, I want you to take my autograph now. Can I sign?’ Ony asked. He took her hands into his and looked straight into her eyes. Almeira ran out of breath.
‘What?’ she just stuttered. ‘What…what do you want to sign? I… I don’t have anything here…no paper, no…no nothing,’ she said.
‘It’s not needed,’ Ony said and smiled. ‘Can I sign…your heart?’ he whispered. Ony kissed her fingers while she stood there silent and speechless and when she smiled, he knew it was her answer. He leaned and finally allowed himself to take what was meant to be his from very beginning.
Two people were kissing under the moonlight with their feet in the water, wind in their hair and they didn’t care about anything. They both finally found peace of their souls and hearts in each other.
‘I love you,’ she said.
‘I will love you forever,’ he answered.
And it was more than words.
THE END
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
‘Can I sign…your heart?’ he whispered.
so romantic....
so romantic....
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw!! Happy ending
Love this story!!
Love this story!!
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Wow. You are an amazing writer Angie. I'm speechless.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: ~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
Naaw, thank you, girls, for reading this story from first words to lasts, for commenting and supporting And for all kind words you said about my writings, it means a lot to me
Without you, without this place, without d'Nash there were no stories of mine, so I thank you all from the bottom of my heart
It's that you are amazing readers, not that I am amazing writer
Without you, without this place, without d'Nash there were no stories of mine, so I thank you all from the bottom of my heart
It's that you are amazing readers, not that I am amazing writer
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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It's so romantic
Your all stories are amazing ecpecial this one!!!!
I loved it a lot!!!!Thanks!!!!!
Your all stories are amazing ecpecial this one!!!!
I loved it a lot!!!!Thanks!!!!!
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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aaaawwwww <3
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Aws. It was so romantic that I had tears in my eyes..
Thanks for this amazing story!
Thanks for this amazing story!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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OOOOhh......No words...incredible, amazing!!!!!!!!! oj Angie..
Negaliu to zodziais apsakyt teisiog nuostabu....saunuole
Thanks for this....
Aciu labai
Negaliu to zodziais apsakyt teisiog nuostabu....saunuole
Thanks for this....
Aciu labai
Re: ~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
Oh... it was so beautiful!!! So lovely end! You wrote it so well!! I totally loved it! And I loved the whole story! Thank you, Angie!! :flower: :flower: :flower:
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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ohh so beautiful!
this is officially my fav story by you though they've all been great
this is officially my fav story by you though they've all been great
Re: ~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
The ending was so cuute!
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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awwwwwwww.. the end was so sweet
thanks for story
thanks for story
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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ooow I loved the end and I loved the whole stoy!! it was just amazing
Eveline- Number of posts : 1222
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They are togetheeeeeeeer!!! Naaaaw
Again an amaaaazing story I've read from you, Angie!!!
I LOVED the end!!
When more?
Again an amaaaazing story I've read from you, Angie!!!
I LOVED the end!!
When more?
Re: ~FanLove in FanLife~ (part 27) THE END
Answer Imkes question.
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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it's a nice question
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Jeeeesh, thanks for all nice comments, girls
As to the question I "must" answer here, I have no idea when more or less
I came back from my holidays and I am a bit "empty-headed" now
As to the question I "must" answer here, I have no idea when more or less
I came back from my holidays and I am a bit "empty-headed" now
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Inspiration will come.
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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and we have all the time from the world.... so no pressure
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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