~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
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~Fairytale III~ part 8
Well girls, I hope you all wated for it, because I present you FAIRYTALE III
I might be slow with it, due to school, but I wrote some parts and wanted to share them with you... Well, for now
So, stay tuned for more new, LOL
I might be slow with it, due to school, but I wrote some parts and wanted to share them with you... Well, for now
So, stay tuned for more new, LOL
Last edited by Kyra on Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:56 pm; edited 1 time in total
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
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I moaned through dreams. My body was aching.
‘Is something wrong?’ a voice asked me. I opened my eyes and looked at a worried face next to my bed. I slowly looked around and realized I was in hospital.
‘No… It’s…fine,’ I said hardly. Every word caused me pain. I closed my eyes again.
‘I will call a doctor, alright? Try to sleep,’ the voice said and I tried to nod.
‘Ok,’ I whispered when I realized I couldn’t really move my head that well yet.
‘Ok, I will be back soon… Are you sure you will be fine? I shouldn’t leave you alone…’ the voice said.
‘I will be fine,’ I answered.
‘Ok… And…and… Dear, do you remember me?’
‘No… Should I?’ I asked, but felt that I was falling into some dark tunnel. I fainted. I fainted and didn’t hear the answer.
‘…tell her everything, or let her remember it all herself?’ a voice said.
‘I think it would be best for her to remember things by herself. You can give her hints, but start from happy memories. She is still very weak, bad events can even cause her life,’ another voice replied.
My head was like full of sand and I hardly understood the meaning of the words.
‘Doctor, should I tell her about the divorce?’ the first voice asked again.
‘I think now it is not the right time for that.’
‘Alright. Can I stay with her here?’
‘Yes.’
I didn’t get a word. I just heard a speech, but it had no meaning for me… The dark tunnel took me away again…
‘…I do now?’ voice said.
Few moments of silence. I almost thought I fainted again, but then I heard the voice. The same voice.
‘No, but…look….we must talk. What do you mean? How can you say this? Don’t dare to…damn you!’ the voice was quite sad and desperate. I opened my eyes and saw the same guy staring at his mobile phone in his hand.
‘Oh, you are back,’ he tried to smile.
‘What’s going on?’ I asked and gasped. I tried to move, but my body refused to move more than the pain allowed it to. I just stared at the phone in his hand.
‘Ermmm… N-nothing,’ the guy stuttered. He looked lost. ‘It’s just that….uhm…well, problems at…at work,’ he said weirdly.
‘I hope everything will be fine,’ I said sincerely and blinked. The light in the ward was very bright to me. It felt as if I was lying on the same bed for quite long. ‘How long am I here?’ I asked.
‘Oh…well…uhm… I am not sure,’ the guy said and pretended to do something with the phone. But he was obviously pushing the buttons too hard.
‘Are you lying to me?’ I asked and almost smiled.
‘Uhm, I guess,’ he said and I saw a smile on his face as well. ‘Sorry, I feel a bit lost, this guy I was talking to, he…he hanged up and…and we have a lot to talk about and…and well… You know, don’t worry, you mustn’t worry now,’ the guy said and came closer to my bed.
‘But I don’t worry,’ I said and looked at him. He made me feel comfortable and safe.
‘Oh… That’s…that’s good. Well, get some rest, alright? I will stay for few more minutes with you, but the doctor doesn’t allow me to stay any longer right now.’
‘It’s ok,’ I said. I stared at his face and it was so familiar. He looked back at me and our eyes met. My heart painfully trembled like it remembered something my brains erased. We were staring at each other for some time and then he turned his eyes away.
‘I must go now…’ he said.
‘Ok. Will you come…again?’ I asked.
‘Yes. Of course I will,’ he smiled and left.
I moaned through dreams. My body was aching.
‘Is something wrong?’ a voice asked me. I opened my eyes and looked at a worried face next to my bed. I slowly looked around and realized I was in hospital.
‘No… It’s…fine,’ I said hardly. Every word caused me pain. I closed my eyes again.
‘I will call a doctor, alright? Try to sleep,’ the voice said and I tried to nod.
‘Ok,’ I whispered when I realized I couldn’t really move my head that well yet.
‘Ok, I will be back soon… Are you sure you will be fine? I shouldn’t leave you alone…’ the voice said.
‘I will be fine,’ I answered.
‘Ok… And…and… Dear, do you remember me?’
‘No… Should I?’ I asked, but felt that I was falling into some dark tunnel. I fainted. I fainted and didn’t hear the answer.
‘…tell her everything, or let her remember it all herself?’ a voice said.
‘I think it would be best for her to remember things by herself. You can give her hints, but start from happy memories. She is still very weak, bad events can even cause her life,’ another voice replied.
My head was like full of sand and I hardly understood the meaning of the words.
‘Doctor, should I tell her about the divorce?’ the first voice asked again.
‘I think now it is not the right time for that.’
‘Alright. Can I stay with her here?’
‘Yes.’
I didn’t get a word. I just heard a speech, but it had no meaning for me… The dark tunnel took me away again…
‘…I do now?’ voice said.
Few moments of silence. I almost thought I fainted again, but then I heard the voice. The same voice.
‘No, but…look….we must talk. What do you mean? How can you say this? Don’t dare to…damn you!’ the voice was quite sad and desperate. I opened my eyes and saw the same guy staring at his mobile phone in his hand.
‘Oh, you are back,’ he tried to smile.
‘What’s going on?’ I asked and gasped. I tried to move, but my body refused to move more than the pain allowed it to. I just stared at the phone in his hand.
‘Ermmm… N-nothing,’ the guy stuttered. He looked lost. ‘It’s just that….uhm…well, problems at…at work,’ he said weirdly.
‘I hope everything will be fine,’ I said sincerely and blinked. The light in the ward was very bright to me. It felt as if I was lying on the same bed for quite long. ‘How long am I here?’ I asked.
‘Oh…well…uhm… I am not sure,’ the guy said and pretended to do something with the phone. But he was obviously pushing the buttons too hard.
‘Are you lying to me?’ I asked and almost smiled.
‘Uhm, I guess,’ he said and I saw a smile on his face as well. ‘Sorry, I feel a bit lost, this guy I was talking to, he…he hanged up and…and we have a lot to talk about and…and well… You know, don’t worry, you mustn’t worry now,’ the guy said and came closer to my bed.
‘But I don’t worry,’ I said and looked at him. He made me feel comfortable and safe.
‘Oh… That’s…that’s good. Well, get some rest, alright? I will stay for few more minutes with you, but the doctor doesn’t allow me to stay any longer right now.’
‘It’s ok,’ I said. I stared at his face and it was so familiar. He looked back at me and our eyes met. My heart painfully trembled like it remembered something my brains erased. We were staring at each other for some time and then he turned his eyes away.
‘I must go now…’ he said.
‘Ok. Will you come…again?’ I asked.
‘Yes. Of course I will,’ he smiled and left.
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
this part was suspicious
this part was suspicious
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Soooo great
Welcome back
Welcome back
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
:doublethumbsup Great Angie!!
Last time this ended so incomplete.. or not.. kind of.. but anyway, i can't wait to read more now
Last time this ended so incomplete.. or not.. kind of.. but anyway, i can't wait to read more now
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Oooh.. Sounds really interesting..
Waiting for more..
Waiting for more..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Thanks, girls, for a warm welcome
I hope you remember how the last story ended, I forgot to post the last part of F2
Anyways, surely this is a suspicious part, as Pris said, because the girl doesn't really remember anything... It's so easy to fool her around now Well, you shall see anyways
I hope you remember how the last story ended, I forgot to post the last part of F2
Anyways, surely this is a suspicious part, as Pris said, because the girl doesn't really remember anything... It's so easy to fool her around now Well, you shall see anyways
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
if someone fool her is a bastard
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
You and your stories is baaaaaaaack
Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
*Pris* wrote:if someone fool her is a bastard
Erh... Whoooops
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Aida wrote:You and your stories is baaaaaaaack
Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat
Thaaaaaaaaaaaanks
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Kyra wrote:*Pris* wrote:if someone fool her is a bastard
Erh... Whoooops
i didn't like that oooppss
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*Pris* wrote:Kyra wrote:*Pris* wrote:if someone fool her is a bastard
Erh... Whoooops
i didn't like that oooppss
Twice "whooops" actually... Cause many people will full her and dumb her and all that
Ooooops, I shouldn't have said it
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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ooohhhh... a group of bastards and bitches, if they exist
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Hmmm... Good idea!*Pris* wrote:ooohhhh... a group of bastards and bitches, if they exist
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
This is great. So this is the continuation of Fairytale 2? Cool, the only thing I have to do is to remember what was Fairytale 2 actually about.
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Kyra wrote:Hmmm... Good idea!*Pris* wrote:ooohhhh... a group of bastards and bitches, if they exist
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girl1035 wrote:This is great. So this is the continuation of Fairytale 2? Cool, the only thing I have to do is to remember what was Fairytale 2 actually about.
Yeah, which was continuation to Fairytale 1
Well, Ony lost memory, then found out who the girl was, but she slept with Mikel and had a child from Mikel, although lied to Ony that it was his child In the end Ony goes out the house, she tries to follow and then a car hits her... She looses her memory now and here we have the third part
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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very good story ^^^
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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*Pris* wrote:very good story ^^^
Reminds me a lame soap-opera
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Thx Angie. Now I remember. Daugiau?
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ooh great part!! interesting!! please post the next part
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Kyra wrote:*Pris* wrote:very good story ^^^
Reminds me a lame soap-opera
it isn't lame
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