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~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)

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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:17 pm

Well girls, I hope you all wated for it, because I present you FAIRYTALE III Rolling Eyes
I might be slow with it, due to school, but I wrote some parts and wanted to share them with you... Well, for now Wink Razz
So, stay tuned for more new, LOL Laughing


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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:18 pm

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I moaned through dreams. My body was aching.
‘Is something wrong?’ a voice asked me. I opened my eyes and looked at a worried face next to my bed. I slowly looked around and realized I was in hospital.
‘No… It’s…fine,’ I said hardly. Every word caused me pain. I closed my eyes again.
‘I will call a doctor, alright? Try to sleep,’ the voice said and I tried to nod.
‘Ok,’ I whispered when I realized I couldn’t really move my head that well yet.
‘Ok, I will be back soon… Are you sure you will be fine? I shouldn’t leave you alone…’ the voice said.
‘I will be fine,’ I answered.
‘Ok… And…and… Dear, do you remember me?’
‘No… Should I?’ I asked, but felt that I was falling into some dark tunnel. I fainted. I fainted and didn’t hear the answer.

‘…tell her everything, or let her remember it all herself?’ a voice said.
‘I think it would be best for her to remember things by herself. You can give her hints, but start from happy memories. She is still very weak, bad events can even cause her life,’ another voice replied.
My head was like full of sand and I hardly understood the meaning of the words.
‘Doctor, should I tell her about the divorce?’ the first voice asked again.
‘I think now it is not the right time for that.’
‘Alright. Can I stay with her here?’
‘Yes.’
I didn’t get a word. I just heard a speech, but it had no meaning for me… The dark tunnel took me away again…

‘…I do now?’ voice said.
Few moments of silence. I almost thought I fainted again, but then I heard the voice. The same voice.
‘No, but…look….we must talk. What do you mean? How can you say this? Don’t dare to…damn you!’ the voice was quite sad and desperate. I opened my eyes and saw the same guy staring at his mobile phone in his hand.
‘Oh, you are back,’ he tried to smile.
‘What’s going on?’ I asked and gasped. I tried to move, but my body refused to move more than the pain allowed it to. I just stared at the phone in his hand.
‘Ermmm… N-nothing,’ the guy stuttered. He looked lost. ‘It’s just that….uhm…well, problems at…at work,’ he said weirdly.
‘I hope everything will be fine,’ I said sincerely and blinked. The light in the ward was very bright to me. It felt as if I was lying on the same bed for quite long. ‘How long am I here?’ I asked.
‘Oh…well…uhm… I am not sure,’ the guy said and pretended to do something with the phone. But he was obviously pushing the buttons too hard.
‘Are you lying to me?’ I asked and almost smiled.
‘Uhm, I guess,’ he said and I saw a smile on his face as well. ‘Sorry, I feel a bit lost, this guy I was talking to, he…he hanged up and…and we have a lot to talk about and…and well… You know, don’t worry, you mustn’t worry now,’ the guy said and came closer to my bed.
‘But I don’t worry,’ I said and looked at him. He made me feel comfortable and safe.
‘Oh… That’s…that’s good. Well, get some rest, alright? I will stay for few more minutes with you, but the doctor doesn’t allow me to stay any longer right now.’
‘It’s ok,’ I said. I stared at his face and it was so familiar. He looked back at me and our eyes met. My heart painfully trembled like it remembered something my brains erased. We were staring at each other for some time and then he turned his eyes away.
‘I must go now…’ he said.
‘Ok. Will you come…again?’ I asked.
‘Yes. Of course I will,’ he smiled and left.
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Post  Onyone Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:20 pm

moreeeee Cool
this is great
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:22 pm

GREATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT


Razz Razz Razz

this part was suspicious Suspect Suspect
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Post  emilia Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:32 pm

Soooo great Very Happy Very Happy

Welcome back Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Riikka Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:33 pm

:doublethumbsup Great Angie!!
Last time this ended so incomplete.. or not.. kind of.. but anyway, i can't wait to read more now MrGreen
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Post  Heli Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:40 pm

Oooh.. Sounds really interesting.. Thumbs Up
Waiting for more.. Wink
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Post  Kath Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:50 pm

si, bery interesting! Cool
morrrrre por favor! MrGreen
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:52 pm

Thanks, girls, for a warm welcome Razz
I hope you remember how the last story ended, I forgot to post the last part of F2 Laughing Laughing Laughing
Anyways, surely this is a suspicious part, as Pris said, because the girl doesn't really remember anything... It's so easy to fool her around now Rolling Eyes Well, you shall see anyways Cool Laughing
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 9:55 pm

if someone fool her is a bastard Mad Mad
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Post  Aida Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:06 pm

You and your stories is baaaaaaaack MrGreen cheers
Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat MrGreen
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:09 pm

*Pris* wrote:if someone fool her is a bastard Mad Mad


Erh... Whoooops Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:09 pm

Aida wrote:You and your stories is baaaaaaaack MrGreen cheers
Greaaaaaaaaaaaaaaat MrGreen

Thaaaaaaaaaaaanks Laughing Wink
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:11 pm

Kyra wrote:
*Pris* wrote:if someone fool her is a bastard Mad Mad


Erh... Whoooops Laughing Laughing Laughing

i didn't like that oooppss Suspect Suspect Suspect
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:13 pm

*Pris* wrote:
Kyra wrote:
*Pris* wrote:if someone fool her is a bastard Mad Mad


Erh... Whoooops Laughing Laughing Laughing

i didn't like that oooppss Suspect Suspect Suspect

Twice "whooops" actually... Cause many people will full her and dumb her and all that Rolling Eyes Laughing
Ooooops, I shouldn't have said it Suspect Suspect Suspect
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:18 pm

ooohhhh... a group of bastards and bitches, if they exist Laughing Laughing
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:18 pm

*Pris* wrote:ooohhhh... a group of bastards and bitches, if they exist Laughing Laughing
Hmmm... Good idea! Very Happy Razz Razz
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Post  girl1035 Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:19 pm

This is great.~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END) Icon_biggrin So this is the continuation of Fairytale 2? Cool, the only thing I have to do is to remember what was Fairytale 2 actually about.~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END) Icon_scratch 
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:21 pm

Kyra wrote:
*Pris* wrote:ooohhhh... a group of bastards and bitches, if they exist Laughing Laughing
Hmmm... Good idea! Very Happy Razz Razz


Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:23 pm

girl1035 wrote:This is great.~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END) Icon_biggrin So this is the continuation of Fairytale 2? Cool, the only thing I have to do is to remember what was Fairytale 2 actually about.~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END) Icon_scratch

Yeah, which was continuation to Fairytale 1 Laughing Laughing Laughing
Well, Ony lost memory, then found out who the girl was, but she slept with Mikel and had a child from Mikel, although lied to Ony that it was his child Laughing In the end Ony goes out the house, she tries to follow and then a car hits her... She looses her memory now and here we have the third part Laughing
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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:25 pm

very good story ^^^ Laughing Laughing
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:30 pm

*Pris* wrote:very good story ^^^ Laughing Laughing

Reminds me a lame soap-opera Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  girl1035 Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:30 pm

Thx Angie. Now I remember. ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END) Icon_biggrin Daugiau?~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END) Icon_wink
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Post  Eveline Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:31 pm

ooh great part!! interesting!! please post the next part Very Happy Very Happy

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Post  Prisca Wed Feb 06, 2008 10:33 pm

Kyra wrote:
*Pris* wrote:very good story ^^^ Laughing Laughing

Reminds me a lame soap-opera Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing

it isn't lame Smile Smile Smile
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