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La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"

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Post  Prisca Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:23 pm

yes, that one... he is really good Smile Smile
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Post  Kyra - Angie Mon Apr 07, 2008 4:38 pm

Ooooooh, coolio Cool Cool Cool Cool
Don't make us wait for long now Razz
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Post  gabrielle Mon Apr 07, 2008 5:06 pm

This story is getting more and more interesting Twisted Evil
I wan't to read more Shocked Razz Wink
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Post  Heli Mon Apr 07, 2008 6:03 pm

Prisca wrote:yeah,... but my fav is raikkonen Cool Cool
Finnish power... Cool Laughing



Thsi part was super! Wink
Can't wait for more!
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Post  Sergo Mon Apr 07, 2008 6:07 pm

girl1035 wrote:You mean Robert Kubica? He's hell good and the future Formula 1 world champion.
Oh yeah I read about him Razz
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Post  girl1035 Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:32 pm

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Inside the hose it was very comfortable and cozy. She was walking down the corridor when she noticed painting by Salvador Dali - The Persistence of Memory. Natalia just stared at it.
“You like it?”
“I love it.”
“It’s the original. Gabrielle bought it few years back at one auction in Miami.”
“How so everything about you is so fascinating?”
“That’s up to you to answer this question.”
Natalia was staring at it for few more secs and then she went to look after Javi. She found him in a living room. He was calling someone. When he noticed her, he showed her with his fingers to wait. After few secs he finished it.
“Problem?”
“Kind of. I have to to manage few more things. Do you think you can survive it here without me?”
“I’m not a little girl.”
“Ok. Then.” he said and kissed her.
Natalia was alone in the house and she decided to use the time to install the cameras and microphones. She was going through all the rooms and she stopped in one of them. It had to be Javi’s. It was full of fluffies and car toys. Someone obviously didn’t want to give up his child memories. Natalia had to smile.
Then she heard like someone was coming towards the room she was in. Natalia slowly and quietly went outta the room and followed the noises. She slowly opened the door and saw a person standing there.
“Diego?” she said.
“Natalia? What the heck are you doing here?” he asked surprised.
“I was about to ask you the same. Anyway. I’m here with Javi, but he had to manage something.”
“So, you two are now together?”
“You can say so?”
“I thought you were differente, but you are same as others.” he said angrily.
“I have my reasons why I’m doing this.”
“Oh, really?” he said sarcastically. “I think you are just another bitch who wants money.”
“You really hate him, don’t you?”
“I have my reasond for it.”
“You do realize revenge is not a solution, do you?”
“How you can know what I want?”
“I see it in your eyes.” Natalia was still calm, even if she noticed a gun behind Diego’s belt.
“You have no idea what he did. If you knew it, you’d gone far away from him and never went back.”
“Why don’t you just tell me?”
“It would be too easy for you.” he said and angrily left the house. Natalia decided not to tell anything about it to Javi. She needed to focus on her task and not to bother about anything else. But she didn’t have time to think about it as Javi entered the door.
“Hey. Already back?” Natalia smiled.
“Yep. I hope you’re hungry. I have ordered few pizzas.”
“Sure I am. How many is few?”
“Just *cough*5*cough*.”
At that moment Natalia bursted into laugh and Javi was just looking at her in disbeliev.
“You really are crazy.”
“I know. But usually one pizza is enough for two people.”
“Well, when you taste the pizzas I have ordered zou will want to eat them all.”
“Hmmm, I can’t wait then.” Natalia said seductively.
“Want some Coca Cola?”
“What kind do you have?”
“Just Zero.”
“Yep. I want it.”
“Here you go my queen.”
“Thank you my king.”
They sat on the couch and started arguing about what to watch. Casablanca won. After 20 minutes pizza arrived and Natalia had to admit it was the best pizza ever. After the movie thay started petting and the couch became a love scene.
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Post  emilia Mon Apr 07, 2008 10:49 pm

sooo great Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Mon Apr 07, 2008 11:06 pm

wtf. why was Diego there? Suspect

5 pizzas xD
Oh lovescene pig
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Post  Prisca Tue Apr 08, 2008 12:32 am

Here you go my queen.”
“Thank you my king.”


so cute Razz Razz
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Post  Monikute Tue Apr 08, 2008 2:09 pm

Twisted Evil Twisted Evil ooo....noce....and 5 pizzas Laughing
It's so great...more Rolling Eyes
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Post  Laura Tue Apr 08, 2008 4:27 pm

It's so nice!!!! Twisted Evil Razz Hey I want more!!!! Wink
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Post  x Imke x Tue Apr 08, 2008 6:13 pm

Omfg 5 pizzas!!! lol!
I usually only eat one!! Razz Laughing

When more?? Very Happy
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Post  girl1035 Tue Apr 08, 2008 6:14 pm

More when I write it. So sooner than you will go sleep. Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:17 pm

i hope that you post soon Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Heli Tue Apr 08, 2008 7:42 pm

Those 5 pizzas.. Laughing
Great part, can't wait for more! Wink
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Post  Mindex Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:14 pm

MrGreen Thumbs Up
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Post  girl1035 Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:20 pm

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Few days later, while Natalia and Javi were sleeping, her phone started ringing.
“Let it be,” Javi mumbled.
“I can’t. What if it is important?”
“Yes?” Natalia answered it.
“Just pretend like it is your best friend Andy,” agent White said.
“Hey Andy. Surprise to hear you.”
“Good girl. Now just listen. We are planning to take over Gabriell this Friday. You completeley distracted him and he is not as careful as he was, so we were able to cought him at some, let’s just say, situations. I don’t want you to be in Madrid on Friday. You will leave to Los Angeles on Thursday evening. Understand?”
“Of course I will come. I would love to see you again. Bye.” Natalia hung up and went to sleep again. But Javi was already awaken and wanted an explonation.
“Who was it?”
“Andy. My childhood friend. She wants to meet me.”
“You’re not going back,” he said.
“Excuse me? ,” Natalia couldn’t believe her ears.
“I’m not going to let you go to LA.”
“Why’s that?”
“You belong to me.”
“I don’t belong to anyone!” Natalia yelled and left him. She rushed outta the house and at the gate she met Antonio.
“Rushing somewhere?” he asked.
“Not your bussines,” she replied.
But he didn’t give up. Natalia was rushing down the street and Antonio followed her. Natalia was really tired of all the things that were going around her. She wanted it to be over so much. She didn’t want to pretend her love to Javi anymore. If White found out she really has feelings for him, he would call her off immediately. And Antonio? Everytime she has met him he was so selfconfident and annoying.
“What do you want?” Natalia stopped and turned around to face Antonio.
“You still owe me a reveng. Remember?”
“Hello, we’re on the street, mistr I’m-always-thinking-with-my-ass,” she said him angrily.
“My car is not so far from here.”
“But I don’t have my car here.”
“I can get you one?”
“No thanks. I’m not racing with any other car,” Natalia said and continued in walking.
Luckily Antonio didn’t follow her. When she got to her appartment, she fell on the bed and immediately fell asleep. She wasn’t dreaming about anything special, just Javi was flying in her head.
In the morning, when she woke up, she saw Javi lieing next to her and staring at her.
“What the hell are you doing here?” Natalia freaked out and jumped outta the bed.
“Could you please chill out?” Javi asked.
“No, I couldn’t. I’m no-one’s property.”
“Look, I’m really sorry about what I said. It’s just that when I finally found you, you are about to leave me.”
“What?” Natalia didn’t understand what he means.
“Every girl I have ever date was with me ‘coz she wanted to be near my brother. Not because of me. And when you showed up and I saw how Gabrielle hates you and the more he was talking about you the more I liked you. You are like a fresh wind in my life. Like a light in a darkness. Before I have met you, I used to have just fun with girls. But with you it’s differente. I wanna be with you for the rest of my life.”
“That’s not gonna happen,” Natalia had tears in her eyes.
“Why?”
“I’m leaving on Thursday. And I don’t know when I’m coming back. Maybe I won’t.”
Natalia was crying. Javi moved to her to hug her, but deep inside he was broken.
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Post  emilia Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:23 pm

aaawwww <3
so great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:26 pm

oohh... this situation is poor for both Neutral Neutral
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Post  girl1035 Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:28 pm

Thx girls. I think you should know, that this story is almost over. Just few parts left.
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Post  Prisca Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:38 pm

hhmm too bad that Neutral Neutral
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Post  Monikute Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:41 pm

Sad Sad oh...poor both... Sad more.... Crying or Very sad
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Post  Heli Tue Apr 08, 2008 8:42 pm

Oh, crappy situation for both... Neutral
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Post  Mindex Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:22 pm

Neutral complicated...
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Post  Sergo Tue Apr 08, 2008 9:22 pm

Naaaw Sad
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