La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Naw poor Nat and Javi
Btw, little funny fact in between.. did you know that Nat is Dutch for "wet"?
Just thought about that when I typed the name
Great part!! More??
Btw, little funny fact in between.. did you know that Nat is Dutch for "wet"?
Just thought about that when I typed the name
Great part!! More??
Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Thx for the info. I didnt know that.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
“You belong to me.”-It's so sweet! And poor Javi Please more!
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*Tricia*- Number of posts : 72
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
I hope she won't left him... But if not, I hope she'll come back, or he'll go with her... But can't nothing to know
More...
More...
gabrielle- Number of posts : 198
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
will we have more today??
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
I can't promise you anything. I had very tough day. First we were writing exam for 4 hours and then me and my classmates spent 4 hours at photostudio to make photos for our presentation. And now I need to learn for 2 english exams I have tommorow.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
so many things... maybe you should study
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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I understand. That sounds like a lot
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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aw, poor them. I have missed a few parts but they all were awesome!
But isn't five pizzas for two a bit too much?
But isn't five pizzas for two a bit too much?
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
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Those few days they had left, they spent together in a rented house in Valencia. They wanted to be far away from everyone and just enjoy each other’s presence. But the time was going impossibly quickly.
“I don’t want you to go,” Javi said when they were at the airport in Madrid.
“I have to, I hadn’t seen Andy for ages,” Natalia felt so bad while she was telling him these lies.
“We’ll see soon.”
“I hope,” Natalia said and went the way to the plane.
On the way she was trying to stay strong, but in the plane she started to cry. This wasn’t what she hoped for.
At LAX airport agent White was waiting for her.
“I see you made it.”
“I hate you.”
“I don’t need you to love me.”
“Could you at least tell me who was the 2nd agent?”
“You’ll meet him soon. And you will be surprised,” White smiled.
“Don’t smile like this. It’s freaky.”
“I see you didn’t change at all.”
Natalia gave him an evil look and went to thecar that was waiting for them.
“You do realize I can’t let you go just so.”
“What more do you want? Wasn’t this enough?”
“Don’t worry. I just need you to sing few papers.”
“What papers?”
“Those that will keep your ass safe.”
“Like I will be your slave forever?”
“Nothing like this. Don’t worry.”
“How could I?”
In White’s office Natalia signed those papers and was free to go. It felt good to be free again.
The first thing, Natalia did, was, that she went to see her friends. They usually gathered in La Dolce Vita cafeteria. And this night wasn’t exception. Everyone was there. Robert, Michael, Tim, Adam, Helena, Brice, Josh, Mandy, Ginny, Alecia and many more. They all were happy to see Natalia again. But she couldn’t tell them the truth about where she was, so she just told them that she was in jail for some time. And they talked and talked. After few hours it felt like she was never gone and Natalia forgot everything that happened in last few months. For a while it was the old Natalia they all have known. But her brain reminded her of Javi in nights. She was having romantic dreams about him and also agent White called her.
“What do you want?”
“I just wanted to let you know that Gabrielle is behind bars and that, if you still want, you could meet the other agent.”
“Sure thing I still want. When and where?”
“The day after tommorow in my office.”
“Ok, I’ll be there. Thank you,” Natalia hung up and funally after few days she was thinking about something else than Javi. She was exciting about meeting the other agent, ‘coz she had so many question.
Those few days they had left, they spent together in a rented house in Valencia. They wanted to be far away from everyone and just enjoy each other’s presence. But the time was going impossibly quickly.
“I don’t want you to go,” Javi said when they were at the airport in Madrid.
“I have to, I hadn’t seen Andy for ages,” Natalia felt so bad while she was telling him these lies.
“We’ll see soon.”
“I hope,” Natalia said and went the way to the plane.
On the way she was trying to stay strong, but in the plane she started to cry. This wasn’t what she hoped for.
At LAX airport agent White was waiting for her.
“I see you made it.”
“I hate you.”
“I don’t need you to love me.”
“Could you at least tell me who was the 2nd agent?”
“You’ll meet him soon. And you will be surprised,” White smiled.
“Don’t smile like this. It’s freaky.”
“I see you didn’t change at all.”
Natalia gave him an evil look and went to thecar that was waiting for them.
“You do realize I can’t let you go just so.”
“What more do you want? Wasn’t this enough?”
“Don’t worry. I just need you to sing few papers.”
“What papers?”
“Those that will keep your ass safe.”
“Like I will be your slave forever?”
“Nothing like this. Don’t worry.”
“How could I?”
In White’s office Natalia signed those papers and was free to go. It felt good to be free again.
The first thing, Natalia did, was, that she went to see her friends. They usually gathered in La Dolce Vita cafeteria. And this night wasn’t exception. Everyone was there. Robert, Michael, Tim, Adam, Helena, Brice, Josh, Mandy, Ginny, Alecia and many more. They all were happy to see Natalia again. But she couldn’t tell them the truth about where she was, so she just told them that she was in jail for some time. And they talked and talked. After few hours it felt like she was never gone and Natalia forgot everything that happened in last few months. For a while it was the old Natalia they all have known. But her brain reminded her of Javi in nights. She was having romantic dreams about him and also agent White called her.
“What do you want?”
“I just wanted to let you know that Gabrielle is behind bars and that, if you still want, you could meet the other agent.”
“Sure thing I still want. When and where?”
“The day after tommorow in my office.”
“Ok, I’ll be there. Thank you,” Natalia hung up and funally after few days she was thinking about something else than Javi. She was exciting about meeting the other agent, ‘coz she had so many question.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
I have weird and really wild guess who it would be... other agent, i mean.. but i don't know if it's even possible
Sad that she had to left Javi
But part was fab! I'm waiting the next one already!
Sad that she had to left Javi
But part was fab! I'm waiting the next one already!
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Who do you think it is?
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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ohh.. it is antonio??
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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I'm not telling.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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hmm..
now i need to know
now i need to know
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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I'm not telling. But you will know it when I post next part which is gonna be the last part.
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Last part? awwww... This is so good, that I'd like to read much more...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
ohh.. the last one
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! TINA THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!! I FINALLY GOT UP TO DATE ON IT AND IT'S WONDERFUL MAGNIFICENT FABULOSO!!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!! YOU'VE GOTTEN ME ADDICTED!! I WAS BORED AND I WAS LOOKING THROUGH ALL THE FANFICS AND THEY WERE SO MANY TO CHOOSE FROM BUT THE NAME OF YOUR STORY REALLY DREW ME IN SO I READ IT AND AAAARRRRGGHHH!! IT'S SO GOOD!! I WANT MOOOORRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!
btw i think the secret agent is javi lol. i don't think you'd leave us with a sad ending would you? Although javi being the agent would be odd since they're brothers...but i don't think it will be antonio or diego because that would be too predictable...hmmm...i guess i'll have to wait...what an evil cliffie
btw i think the secret agent is javi lol. i don't think you'd leave us with a sad ending would you? Although javi being the agent would be odd since they're brothers...but i don't think it will be antonio or diego because that would be too predictable...hmmm...i guess i'll have to wait...what an evil cliffie
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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The last part.... so sad to heard that... but anyway...I'm waiting...I want to know more
Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
I think I know who the secret agent is...
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Last part I am waiting more!
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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i can't wait to knowwwwwwwwwwwwww
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