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La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"

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Post  x Imke x Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:30 pm

Naw poor Nat and Javi Sad

Btw, little funny fact in between.. did you know that Nat is Dutch for "wet"? lol!
Just thought about that when I typed the name Laughing Laughing

Great part!! More?? monkey
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Post  girl1035 Tue Apr 08, 2008 10:41 pm

Thx for the info. I didnt know that.
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Post  Laura Wed Apr 09, 2008 11:30 am

“You belong to me.”-It's so sweet! Smile Wink And poor Javi Sad Sad Please more!
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Post  *Tricia* Wed Apr 09, 2008 12:30 pm

Awww no. Sad

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Post  gabrielle Wed Apr 09, 2008 2:06 pm

Shocked I hope she won't left him... Neutral But if not, I hope she'll come back, or he'll go with her... Rolling Eyes But can't nothing to know Smile
More... Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Wed Apr 09, 2008 4:03 pm

will we have more today?? Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  girl1035 Wed Apr 09, 2008 5:40 pm

I can't promise you anything. I had very tough day. First we were writing exam for 4 hours and then me and my classmates spent 4 hours at photostudio to make photos for our presentation. And now I need to learn for 2 english exams I have tommorow.
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Post  Prisca Wed Apr 09, 2008 5:41 pm

so many things... maybe you should study Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  Sergo Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:39 pm

I understand. That sounds like a lot monkey
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Post  Riikka Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:05 pm

aw, poor them. I have missed a few parts but they all were awesome!

But isn't five pizzas for two a bit too much?
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Post  girl1035 Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:43 pm

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Those few days they had left, they spent together in a rented house in Valencia. They wanted to be far away from everyone and just enjoy each other’s presence. But the time was going impossibly quickly.

“I don’t want you to go,” Javi said when they were at the airport in Madrid.
“I have to, I hadn’t seen Andy for ages,” Natalia felt so bad while she was telling him these lies.
“We’ll see soon.”
“I hope,” Natalia said and went the way to the plane.
On the way she was trying to stay strong, but in the plane she started to cry. This wasn’t what she hoped for.

At LAX airport agent White was waiting for her.
“I see you made it.”
“I hate you.”
“I don’t need you to love me.”
“Could you at least tell me who was the 2nd agent?”
“You’ll meet him soon. And you will be surprised,” White smiled.
“Don’t smile like this. It’s freaky.”
“I see you didn’t change at all.”
Natalia gave him an evil look and went to thecar that was waiting for them.
“You do realize I can’t let you go just so.”
“What more do you want? Wasn’t this enough?”
“Don’t worry. I just need you to sing few papers.”
“What papers?”
“Those that will keep your ass safe.”
“Like I will be your slave forever?”
“Nothing like this. Don’t worry.”
“How could I?”

In White’s office Natalia signed those papers and was free to go. It felt good to be free again.
The first thing, Natalia did, was, that she went to see her friends. They usually gathered in La Dolce Vita cafeteria. And this night wasn’t exception. Everyone was there. Robert, Michael, Tim, Adam, Helena, Brice, Josh, Mandy, Ginny, Alecia and many more. They all were happy to see Natalia again. But she couldn’t tell them the truth about where she was, so she just told them that she was in jail for some time. And they talked and talked. After few hours it felt like she was never gone and Natalia forgot everything that happened in last few months. For a while it was the old Natalia they all have known. But her brain reminded her of Javi in nights. She was having romantic dreams about him and also agent White called her.
“What do you want?”
“I just wanted to let you know that Gabrielle is behind bars and that, if you still want, you could meet the other agent.”
“Sure thing I still want. When and where?”
“The day after tommorow in my office.”
“Ok, I’ll be there. Thank you,” Natalia hung up and funally after few days she was thinking about something else than Javi. She was exciting about meeting the other agent, ‘coz she had so many question.
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Post  Riikka Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:49 pm

I have weird and really wild guess who it would be... other agent, i mean.. but i don't know if it's even possible Laughing
Sad that she had to left Javi Sad
But part was fab! I'm waiting the next one already!
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Post  girl1035 Wed Apr 09, 2008 9:51 pm

Who do you think it is?
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Post  Prisca Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:01 pm

ohh.. it is antonio?? Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes
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Post  girl1035 Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:02 pm

I'm not telling. Rolling Eyes
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Post  Prisca Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:03 pm

hmm.. Rolling Eyes Rolling Eyes

now i need to know Razz Razz
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Post  girl1035 Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:05 pm

I'm not telling. But you will know it when I post next part which is gonna be the last part.
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Post  Mindex Wed Apr 09, 2008 10:22 pm

Surprised Last part? awwww... Crying or Very sad This is so good, that I'd like to read much more... Neutral
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Post  Prisca Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:24 am

ohh.. the last one Neutral Neutral
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Post  Priya Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:47 am

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! TINA THIS STORY IS FANTASTIC!! I FINALLY GOT UP TO DATE ON IT AND IT'S WONDERFUL MAGNIFICENT FABULOSO!!!! AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH!! YOU'VE GOTTEN ME ADDICTED!! I WAS BORED AND I WAS LOOKING THROUGH ALL THE FANFICS AND THEY WERE SO MANY TO CHOOSE FROM BUT THE NAME OF YOUR STORY REALLY DREW ME IN SO I READ IT AND AAAARRRRGGHHH!! IT'S SO GOOD!! I WANT MOOOORRRREEEEEEEEEE!!!

btw i think the secret agent is javi lol. Laughing i don't think you'd leave us with a sad ending would you? Although javi being the agent would be odd since they're brothers...but i don't think it will be antonio or diego because that would be too predictable...hmmm...i guess i'll have to wait...what an evil cliffie
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Post  emilia Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:09 pm

great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Monikute Thu Apr 10, 2008 2:13 pm

The last part.... Sad so sad to heard that... Rolling Eyes but anyway...I'm waiting...I want to know more Wink
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Post  Sergo Thu Apr 10, 2008 3:50 pm

I think I know who the secret agent is... Razz
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Post  Laura Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:04 pm

Last part Sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad I am waiting more! Wink
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Post  Prisca Thu Apr 10, 2008 4:19 pm

i can't wait to knowwwwwwwwwwwwww
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