La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
More maybe tommorow. I had few tough days and this week is also very tough so I have no idea how to manage it all. But I will try.
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OK then. I’ll send someone to kidnap her.” Gabrielle said.
“No. I wanna do it my own way.”
“Whatever.” Gabrielle gave up.
i hope he was a better way of do it
this is fantastic..
“No. I wanna do it my own way.”
“Whatever.” Gabrielle gave up.
i hope he was a better way of do it
this is fantastic..
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Ecxiting...
Can't wait for more!
Can't wait for more!
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Antonio
Wtf. They are afraid of a little giiiiirl
Wtf. They are afraid of a little giiiiirl
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Very interesting!!! Need more!!!
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Javiii Curious to what he's gonna do
That Antonio sounds like an ass
Please, more?
That Antonio sounds like an ass
Please, more?
Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Antonio Ass
when more??
when more??
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Sergo wrote:moooooore
Can you do something else than request?
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I can demand
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Next part in few minutes.
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Natalia was still sleeping when the bell rang. She slowly went o open the door, but when she opened it, no-one was behind. Just a package with a note and flowers.
“For the fastest girl in Spain.” it stood there.
Who is this from? Diego? Or someone I don’t know?
Natalia opened it. It was full of chocolate.
“Someone here is crazy about chocolate. Obviously” she thought.
But she couldn’t resist it and she opened it. It tasted to good. Now she knew why the unknown man likes chocolate so much. He has to be really sweet.
At the evening, the race was on the program. Nat registered again and, for a change, won the race. Tonight Gabrielle arrived secretly earlier to control the situation. But he couldn’t predict, that the crowd was already in love with Natalia. Diego wasn’t with her that night and Javi used this situation.
“Hola, guapa.” he appeared in front of her.
“I know who you are.” Natalia said grumpily.
“Good. Then I don’t have to introduce myself.” ke said and ordered drinks for them.
“How can you be so sure I wanna spend this evening with you?”
“Everyone does.”
“I’m not everyone.”
“I noticed.”
“Excuse me?”
“Not every girl can race and win.”
“Ok, I take this as a compliment.”
“Will you tell me why?”
“What why?”
“Why you don’t wanna talk with me.”
“Because of who you are?”
“Great. So because I’m Gabrielle’s brother it automatically means I’m like he is?” Javi was pissed and was walking away.
Natalia realized she made a mistake and run after him.
“Hey. Wait.” Natalia got to him. ”I’m sorry about that. Fresh start?”
Javi was looking at her for a while. “Ok.” he said then.
“I’m Natalia.”
“I’m Javi. Nice to meet you.”
“Same here.”
“Wanna go for a drink?” he asked her.
“Yes.” she smiled.
“By the was how did you like the chocolate?”
“Oh, it was from you? Thank you. It was delicious.”
“I’m glad you liked it.”
“Yeah. Me too. It was the only food I had that morning.”
“So I saved your life, didn’t I?”
“I guess.”
“I think it was destiny that we met.” suddenly Javi said seriously.
This sentence made Natalia scared.
“I think I should better go.” Natalia looked at her watch.
Javi walked her to her car. It was in a dark corner and he didn’t want anyone to hurt her. He felt weird feeling. Something he had never experienced before. Something he couldn’t stop.
“Nat?” he asked and she turned to him. In the moment, it felt like something stabbed him, he kissed her. But she didn’t kissed him back. Natalia recoiled from him.
“This ain’t right.” she just said and drove away.
Natalia was still sleeping when the bell rang. She slowly went o open the door, but when she opened it, no-one was behind. Just a package with a note and flowers.
“For the fastest girl in Spain.” it stood there.
Who is this from? Diego? Or someone I don’t know?
Natalia opened it. It was full of chocolate.
“Someone here is crazy about chocolate. Obviously” she thought.
But she couldn’t resist it and she opened it. It tasted to good. Now she knew why the unknown man likes chocolate so much. He has to be really sweet.
At the evening, the race was on the program. Nat registered again and, for a change, won the race. Tonight Gabrielle arrived secretly earlier to control the situation. But he couldn’t predict, that the crowd was already in love with Natalia. Diego wasn’t with her that night and Javi used this situation.
“Hola, guapa.” he appeared in front of her.
“I know who you are.” Natalia said grumpily.
“Good. Then I don’t have to introduce myself.” ke said and ordered drinks for them.
“How can you be so sure I wanna spend this evening with you?”
“Everyone does.”
“I’m not everyone.”
“I noticed.”
“Excuse me?”
“Not every girl can race and win.”
“Ok, I take this as a compliment.”
“Will you tell me why?”
“What why?”
“Why you don’t wanna talk with me.”
“Because of who you are?”
“Great. So because I’m Gabrielle’s brother it automatically means I’m like he is?” Javi was pissed and was walking away.
Natalia realized she made a mistake and run after him.
“Hey. Wait.” Natalia got to him. ”I’m sorry about that. Fresh start?”
Javi was looking at her for a while. “Ok.” he said then.
“I’m Natalia.”
“I’m Javi. Nice to meet you.”
“Same here.”
“Wanna go for a drink?” he asked her.
“Yes.” she smiled.
“By the was how did you like the chocolate?”
“Oh, it was from you? Thank you. It was delicious.”
“I’m glad you liked it.”
“Yeah. Me too. It was the only food I had that morning.”
“So I saved your life, didn’t I?”
“I guess.”
“I think it was destiny that we met.” suddenly Javi said seriously.
This sentence made Natalia scared.
“I think I should better go.” Natalia looked at her watch.
Javi walked her to her car. It was in a dark corner and he didn’t want anyone to hurt her. He felt weird feeling. Something he had never experienced before. Something he couldn’t stop.
“Nat?” he asked and she turned to him. In the moment, it felt like something stabbed him, he kissed her. But she didn’t kissed him back. Natalia recoiled from him.
“This ain’t right.” she just said and drove away.
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Wtf, why did she go?
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Why are you still using the pig?
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sooooooooo great
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she shouldn't had go away
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I wanna read more and more... this is so good story!
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Why she left away...?
Great part, can't wait for more!
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more today??
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Great part When more?
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Re: La Carrera De La Vida - Part 12 "The End"
Nat kicks ass
lad a girl beats those silly guys
Amazing part again
lad a girl beats those silly guys
Amazing part again
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