**Angel** Part 20 FINISHED!

I still don't get how this story can turn so bad. And it freaks me out. Anyway. I hope Javi will open his eyes finally. Fabulous part.

Thanx!! I'm not saying anything... You just have to wait... and read...

Aaww..

Javi has to love her.

Great part!!!!I want more!!!!!

Agreed

Thank you! More later today

woehoe!

this is torture... pure torture

Mindex wrote:Thanx!! I'm not saying anything... You just have to wait... and read...

Then post more so we can read...
Fab part!

Ooookkk... another part!

Part 16

I looked at him and he looked at me.
- Your eyes are so sad, Javi said quietly.
I said nothing. I couldn't speak.
He touched my hair, my cheek and then he kissed me. My heart almost stopped. I never thought I could kiss him again like this, but it just happened. His lips were so soft, they knew exactly what they were doing, no hesitation... it was a perfect kiss and then he stopped.
- This was my present to you, he said and hugged me, - I hope you'll find the man of your dreams, because I hate to see you so alone.
That was the last thing I could stand. I bursted into crying and I couldn't stop it. Javi got a bit scared.
- Susana? Hey... what's wrong? Tell me..., he said and I heard he was worried about me.
I managed to calm down a bit.
- Javi... the man of my dreams... I can never have him... I'll be alone always, I whispered.
- No... what are you talking about, you haven't met him yet... you just can't know it yet.
- I do know...
- Susana, listen to me! You're a wonderful girl and the man who gets you is a lucky man! he tried so hard to cheer me up.
I got up. I couldn't stand it anymore.
- Where are you going? Javi asked and got up as well.
- It's late and I need to sleep, I said and looked at him.
I would have given anything just to hear the words "Can I come with you?".
- Ok... it is really late, he replied quietly.
- Yes... I'll see you..., I said and was about to leave.
- Erm... do you... well... need a shoulder... tonight? he asked carefully.
I looked at him like I couldn't believe what he suggested.
- Tonight? I asked suspiciously.
- Yes...
- Only for tonight? I repeated.
- Yes.
- Javi. I thought we had a deal already, I was confused.
- Well, we can make another deal, he said without joking.
- No, Javi. Not anymore. I can't do it anymore, I lowered my eyes.
- You're a decent girl, he said then, - I'm sorry I even suggested it.
- Never mind! I said, - But if we're going to remain friends, we should stop all this... kissing and talking about... well... you know...
- Well... yes... but...
- Listen... This never happened, ok? We won't talk about this anymore, right?
- Ok..., Javi replied confused.
- You don't want me really, so let's stop everything about this subject, ok?
I started to get annoyed.
- Fine with me, he agreed.
- Great! Good night then! I said, turned and left.
- Sweet dreams, I heard him saying and then I was inside the house.
I ran to upstairs and into my room. I felt so bad again that I cried. How could I ever act normally with him?! How could I be just a friend to him?!

This is honestly freaking me out. Is he blind or what? Why the hell he kissed her? Holy crap. I have so many questions and no answers.

oh god.. why this

Is Javi totally blind?!?!?! How he can't see how his acts hurts her...?
Men... *deep sigh*
:doublethumbsup

I don't know what i could say....

moreee

egtnibnrojvworavnfqehfiuevboev.... !!!!! I missed so many parts!!
Oooh damn my dad

I read from part 9 (or was it 10? ) to this part 15 and I looooooove this story!! I feel so sorry for Susana Javi is a blind chicken! Doesn't he see it?!

Anyway I can't wait for what's going to happen next!
Mo......???

Edit; Whooops I mean I read till part 16

Javi is blonde for real.

Naw... Poor her..

**re?

Well, he sees, but Susana says everything's ok and she'll be fine, so he believe in her words, not what he sees. And she says also that he doesn't want her, so Javi believes she doesn't want more with him... And he is also afraid that if their relationship fails, he'll lose her forever... and he cares her so much that he doesn't want to lose her. Better to be just a friend than lovers...

stupid

Yeah, but if they stay just friends they will never be happy. And isn't is better to be happy as hell at least for some time?

Yes, but they don't realise it. Sus believes Javi doesn't want more really and Javi thinks the same. And Javi is afraid to tell his feelings, because what if she doesn't think the same way...

So m**e!!!

Are you s**e? I mean... well... no laugh anymore...