Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
This is soooooo great.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Aaaww.. Javi seems been really in love with María...
:doublethumbsup
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
After the song they were interviewed and the one with a babyface... Miguel or something
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Great
moreee
moreee
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Great part
Javi's in love
Javi's in love
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Thanks!! Sergo, your reaction... but this story is coming to an end this evening...
Part 8
In the evening Marina came over and tried to get me to go with her to a night club. At first I didn't want to go, but then she demanded to go with her. I had been alone for too long and it would do good for me. We were there for few hours. Few guys wanted to dance with me, but I said no thanks. I didn't want to dance and I didn't really want to chat with any guy.
Then I saw him! Javi saw me at the same time. He was there with the blond D'Nash guy. The blond was explaining something to Javi, but he didn't seem to listen to him, because he poked him and then looked at the same direction where Javi was staring at. I turned my head away and decided to leave. But I didn't find Marina. Suddenly Javi was in front of me.
- María..., he said.
- Go away..., I said indifferently.
Dale mi amor dale dale dale dame calor
Dale dale dale dale get up
Ven dame así tu sabor.
- Why don't you want to talk to me? he asked.
- It was your fault I broke up with my boyfriend, I said coldly and turned and left another direction to find Marina.
- You wanted it as much as I did, I heard him saying behind me.
I turned to him.
- You pressured on me! I replied angrily.
Dale mi amor dale dale dale baila mi son
Dale dale dale dale get up
Ven dame así tu sabor
Javi took my hand and pulled me after him to the dance floor. The song was fast, but Javi started dancing it like it was a slow one. He wrapped his arms around my waist. I tried to get rid of him, but he was strong.
- Just this one dance, ok? he asked nicely.
I rolled my eyes, but I accepted it. After it I could go.
Mil razones te daré
No me dejaras de ver
Yo seré quien haga que te sientas bien.
- I've been missing you, he said when we danced.
- I haven't, I tried to be mean.
- C'mon... didn't you enjoy that night at all? he asked and pressed me tightly against him.
- It was a big mistake..., I tried to avoid his look.
- Tell me you didn't enjoy it, he asked, - I want to know the truth.
He gave a deep look at my eyes and I felt really strange.
Tu sabes todo lo que hacer
Para verme enloquecer
Síguete acercando
Y estaré a tus pies.
Part 8
In the evening Marina came over and tried to get me to go with her to a night club. At first I didn't want to go, but then she demanded to go with her. I had been alone for too long and it would do good for me. We were there for few hours. Few guys wanted to dance with me, but I said no thanks. I didn't want to dance and I didn't really want to chat with any guy.
Then I saw him! Javi saw me at the same time. He was there with the blond D'Nash guy. The blond was explaining something to Javi, but he didn't seem to listen to him, because he poked him and then looked at the same direction where Javi was staring at. I turned my head away and decided to leave. But I didn't find Marina. Suddenly Javi was in front of me.
- María..., he said.
- Go away..., I said indifferently.
Dale mi amor dale dale dale dame calor
Dale dale dale dale get up
Ven dame así tu sabor.
- Why don't you want to talk to me? he asked.
- It was your fault I broke up with my boyfriend, I said coldly and turned and left another direction to find Marina.
- You wanted it as much as I did, I heard him saying behind me.
I turned to him.
- You pressured on me! I replied angrily.
Dale mi amor dale dale dale baila mi son
Dale dale dale dale get up
Ven dame así tu sabor
Javi took my hand and pulled me after him to the dance floor. The song was fast, but Javi started dancing it like it was a slow one. He wrapped his arms around my waist. I tried to get rid of him, but he was strong.
- Just this one dance, ok? he asked nicely.
I rolled my eyes, but I accepted it. After it I could go.
Mil razones te daré
No me dejaras de ver
Yo seré quien haga que te sientas bien.
- I've been missing you, he said when we danced.
- I haven't, I tried to be mean.
- C'mon... didn't you enjoy that night at all? he asked and pressed me tightly against him.
- It was a big mistake..., I tried to avoid his look.
- Tell me you didn't enjoy it, he asked, - I want to know the truth.
He gave a deep look at my eyes and I felt really strange.
Tu sabes todo lo que hacer
Para verme enloquecer
Síguete acercando
Y estaré a tus pies.
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
I'm speechless...this is so amazing
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
This is just great. Javi seems to be really in love.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Javi seems really pushy
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
yes... he is a bit different in this story... next part will be the last...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Great part
Moore Moooore!!
Moore Moooore!!
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
What? Last? POST IT POST IT POST IT
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Part 9
Ok... the last one...
Part 9
- I... I... did..., I stammered.
The song ended and I pushed him further.
- I have to go, I said and left.
I didn't want to look for Marina anymore. I just had to get out of there.
I was walking back home. I had many thoughts in my mind. I really didn't know anymore my feelings about Javi. The night with him was awesome, I couldn't deny that.. but did I love him..? At least I felt I didn't really hate him anymore...
In front of my flat I stopped and turned around to look back. Javi was there. He had followed me quietly. He stopped as well and for a while we just stared at each others. Then he slowly walked to me.
- María... let's not fight anymore..., he said quietly, - I've missed you a lot. I think I love you.
Suddenly he hugged me. I was surprised. I felt he really had missed me. I felt he loved me and wanted me. I hugged back. I was so touched. Then he released me and looked at me. I had tears in my eyes. I had really missed him, but I hadn't realized it. Now I knew.
He kissed me gently and caressed my hair. We both were getting excited. In the middle of the street.
Te quiera como yo
Te abrace como yo
Te bese como yo
En medio de la calle
We went in my flat, in my bedroom. We undressed each others, we were together in my bed. Together. My opinion about him had changed totally. I wondered why I had hated him, because he wasn't annoying, he wasn't mean at all. He was kind and tender. He was everything I wanted and needed. And I was to him. Finally I understood it as well.
Y ahora dímelo
Quien más te hará reír
Quien cuidara de ti
Quien sabe lo que vales
Como yo
THE END
Part 9
- I... I... did..., I stammered.
The song ended and I pushed him further.
- I have to go, I said and left.
I didn't want to look for Marina anymore. I just had to get out of there.
I was walking back home. I had many thoughts in my mind. I really didn't know anymore my feelings about Javi. The night with him was awesome, I couldn't deny that.. but did I love him..? At least I felt I didn't really hate him anymore...
In front of my flat I stopped and turned around to look back. Javi was there. He had followed me quietly. He stopped as well and for a while we just stared at each others. Then he slowly walked to me.
- María... let's not fight anymore..., he said quietly, - I've missed you a lot. I think I love you.
Suddenly he hugged me. I was surprised. I felt he really had missed me. I felt he loved me and wanted me. I hugged back. I was so touched. Then he released me and looked at me. I had tears in my eyes. I had really missed him, but I hadn't realized it. Now I knew.
He kissed me gently and caressed my hair. We both were getting excited. In the middle of the street.
Te quiera como yo
Te abrace como yo
Te bese como yo
En medio de la calle
We went in my flat, in my bedroom. We undressed each others, we were together in my bed. Together. My opinion about him had changed totally. I wondered why I had hated him, because he wasn't annoying, he wasn't mean at all. He was kind and tender. He was everything I wanted and needed. And I was to him. Finally I understood it as well.
Y ahora dímelo
Quien más te hará reír
Quien cuidara de ti
Quien sabe lo que vales
Como yo
THE END
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAW
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
GREEEEEEEAT.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
aawwwwww <3 sooo cute and sweet
Really great story
Really great story
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
aaaah so sweet and cute great end
thanks for another great story
thanks for another great story
Eveline- Number of posts : 1222
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Naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
This was really awesome story!! thanks for writing it :doublethumbsup
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Thanks for reading it!!
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
wooooow... perfect ending
loved your story
loved your story
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Aaaaaaaaaaaawww... So sweet and cute ending!
I liked this story.. Even it was little short..
I liked this story.. Even it was little short..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: Yassou Maria part 9 (finished)
Thanks, girls! Yes, this was a short story, but I didn't have any ideas to write longer... and this short one was kinda refreshing for a while.
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