Turnaround - Part 40 The End :P

well girls... i don't have the gift of writing and since i'm so blonde, i wrote a story. this story sucks from the beginning to the end But since it's writing i think i should try and post it.
this story don't have nothing sobrenatural and doesn't have big descriptions because i really suck on that

now that you are warning... i wanna know if i should post it

*waiting for your opinion*

yeeeeeah! post it! post it!

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I wanna read

PPOST IT NOW

POST POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
POST IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gazel wrote:Sissisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisisiisisisisisisisiisisisi

I wanna read

sis you... xiuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

ok, girls i will post... first part soonnnn

YEEEY

you should post it POST POST POST

Oooo...POST IT!!

POST IT!!!!!

Come on!!!! Hurry, I want to read!!

wait a little more... i'm reading the story for the last time to cheeck somethings

oK..I will wait...but just a little..

thanks

No.... THANK YOU PRIS

This is like the introduciton... because the rest of the story will be a flashback

part 1-

- Hey, why are you looking to me like that? – The boy asked to the girl that was lying with is head on his hips.
- Who said i was looking to you? I am looking to the sky..
- don’t lie my little girl, i know that you are looking for this beautiful face!!
And he seats the girl on his lap in a way that they are looking to each other...
- What?? The sky is more beautiful that you…
- How you dare to say that?!! – He makes a sad face faking that was going to cry.
- I was joking, you are the most beautiful, gorgeous, and perfect boy in the all world…
- In the all world? What about the entire universe? – And he gives a little kiss on her cheek.
- Are you joking, right… You are exaggerating…
- You are impossible today! – And he holds her hands and puts the girl with her head down..
- Stop it, I’m going to fall on the sand… - She is yelling with the boy while she is trying to hold with her legs on his waist.
- No, you not… I hope you trust in me a lot to know that I wouldn’t let you fall.
- I trust a lot in you babe, we passed so many things to be together.
While she is talking, he pushes again her to the top.
She is sitting on his lap again, and both are looking to the sea, since they are on the beach.
Time passes and the silence returns…
- Why you are so quiet? - The boy asked to the girl, because she suddenly shut up and turned quiet.
- Nothing – she says that in low voice
- Nothing isn’t a answer, I know you. What is the matter?? – The boy was getting worry
- I was just thinking… - she is trying to escape to the boy answer.
- Thinking in what? In the past again? In your crazy story? - And he laughs
- Don’t you laugh, this story had a happy end but was close from having a bad.
- I know babe, I can’t imagine living without you now… you know, you are my everything, my life…

awwwwwww.... so sweet .... very good..... waiting for more,..!! more!!!!!

thanks

This is great. I really like it.

nice beginning that boy is so sweet
more please

sweet like the hell

thanks girls

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw how sweet

sounds great
i wanna more

Naaw.. How sweet beginning..
Can't wait for more!

thanks a lot girls... i'm really happy that you like it