~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
And stupid me, why I can't get skypeTinute wrote:
yeah... we are goooooooooooood girls
I dunno why it's durring so long...... stupid msn.. why he sin't working
And sure we are We are not good only when we talk about stories like the one when we were going back to Akropolis
And part 13 also means I am good, LMAO
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Kyra wrote:
And stupid me, why I can't get skype
And sure we are We are not good only when we talk about stories like the one when we were going back to Akropolis
And part 13 also means I am good, LMAO
Oh... BTW.. that story.. maybe... we have to perpetuate it...
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Good idea for a fanfic WITHOUT some partsTinute wrote:
Ahaha, yes, I was thinking the same
Oh... BTW.. that story.. maybe... we have to perpetuate it...
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Kyra wrote: Good idea for a fanfic WITHOUT some parts
yeah.. without.... .. you know what said Diana.. when i tell her a bit .. just a bit of that story..??.
She said ..."shame on you ".... and btw,... she said poor Javi...... cause gabriele tell her a but of our speach abou him
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Post part now
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Aaaaw, Diana is too seriousTinute wrote:
yeah.. without.... .. you know what said Diana.. when i tell her a bit .. just a bit of that story..??.
She said ..."shame on you ".... and btw,... she said poor Javi...... cause gabriele tell her a but of our speach abou him
Although I also think poor Javi, but whatever...and poor Mikel...and Ony, LMAO We didn't make stories of Basty only
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
you wish -_-Sergo wrote:Post part now
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
DAUGAIU
DAUGIAU
DAUGIAU
DAUGIAU
DAUGIAU
DAUGIAU
DAUGIAU
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
I wanna new part...
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Kyra wrote:Aaaaw, Diana is too serious
Although I also think poor Javi, but whatever...and poor Mikel...and Ony, LMAO We didn't make stories of Basty only
Sunday is approaching.......
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Tinute wrote:Kyra wrote:Aaaaw, Diana is too serious
Although I also think poor Javi, but whatever...and poor Mikel...and Ony, LMAO We didn't make stories of Basty only
Sunday is approaching.......
You mean... Basty?
Alright, he needs a story too
And do you remember PAJAMAS?
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Kyra wrote:
You mean... Basty?
Alright, he needs a story too
And do you remember PAJAMAS?
Yeah.. I mean Basty ...... story......
And.... sure... how can I forget it
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Oh no, Sergo taught you?girl1035 wrote:DAUGIAU.
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Part 13
‘I don’t think we know each other,’ Mikel tried to be calm, but blood inside his veins was pulsing fast. Mikel gulped. ‘Who are you?’ he asked.
‘I am Miguel. You stole MY Alex from me!’ Miguel yelled. The pistol moved in the air dangerously.
‘She is not a thing to be yours,’ Mikel said.
‘Well she was,’ Miguel grinned. Mikel felt grudge growing in him.
‘What have you done to her, you animal?!’ Mikel yelled.
‘Does it matter? You will never see her again… Never ever… She will always be mine!’ Miguel yelled fanatically. He pointed the gun right into Mikel’s heart.
‘No!’ Alexandra yelled from behind and she grabbed a hard rock. She hit Miguel with it fast and the guy dropped on ground. ‘Mikel, you must go! Run!’ Alexandra was yelling while Miguel was moaning on the ground.
‘Not without you! I love you!’ Mikel said desperately.
‘Mikel, don’t be silly! Go!’ Alex tried to push him.
‘People do weird things when they are in love,’ Mikel whispered suddenly and kissed Alexandra. A gunshot sounded through the night. The girl kissed him back for a second, but then her lips became tense. Mikel looked at her and Alexandra just looked back and she gasped.
‘If you are not mine, you will never be anyone else’s,’ Miguel said hardly and moaned. He stood up slowly and it was obvious his head was spinning. His face was all covered with blood. A rain started pouring down on Earth. Mikel was just looking into Alexandra’s face.
‘I…I love you too,’ she just whispered and fell on ground. There was blood on her back…
‘You killed her! You monster!’ Mikel yelled and fell tears on his face. He kneeled next to Alex and didn’t care about Miguel, who was standing with gun there.
‘Yes… She won’t be yours, I swore,’ Miguel said. ‘But I can’t live without her. Death will unite us,’ he added and put the top of the gun into his mouth. Another gunshot disturbed the night.
Mikel was holding Alexandra’s hand. It was in blood, but nobody cared. Doctors let Mikel to see her only to say goodbye…
‘Mikel…I…I…’ Alex was saying the words slowly.
‘Shh, don’t talk now,’ Mikel said through he knew it was the last thing they could do.
‘No, I…must. You were…the only…good thing…in my…life…. Mikel….’ Alex gasped and closed her eyes in pain.
‘Alex?’ Mikel said scared. She was going away, she was leaving, it was obvious.
‘I love you, Mikel,’ Alex said quietly and her hand in Mikel’s hand drooped.
‘Alexandra…’ Mikel only gasped. His tear fell on her face, right on her tear and those two connected tears ran down the girl’s cheek. ‘To live without means not to live…’ he whispered and painfully kneeled next to her bed.
THE END
‘I don’t think we know each other,’ Mikel tried to be calm, but blood inside his veins was pulsing fast. Mikel gulped. ‘Who are you?’ he asked.
‘I am Miguel. You stole MY Alex from me!’ Miguel yelled. The pistol moved in the air dangerously.
‘She is not a thing to be yours,’ Mikel said.
‘Well she was,’ Miguel grinned. Mikel felt grudge growing in him.
‘What have you done to her, you animal?!’ Mikel yelled.
‘Does it matter? You will never see her again… Never ever… She will always be mine!’ Miguel yelled fanatically. He pointed the gun right into Mikel’s heart.
‘No!’ Alexandra yelled from behind and she grabbed a hard rock. She hit Miguel with it fast and the guy dropped on ground. ‘Mikel, you must go! Run!’ Alexandra was yelling while Miguel was moaning on the ground.
‘Not without you! I love you!’ Mikel said desperately.
‘Mikel, don’t be silly! Go!’ Alex tried to push him.
‘People do weird things when they are in love,’ Mikel whispered suddenly and kissed Alexandra. A gunshot sounded through the night. The girl kissed him back for a second, but then her lips became tense. Mikel looked at her and Alexandra just looked back and she gasped.
‘If you are not mine, you will never be anyone else’s,’ Miguel said hardly and moaned. He stood up slowly and it was obvious his head was spinning. His face was all covered with blood. A rain started pouring down on Earth. Mikel was just looking into Alexandra’s face.
‘I…I love you too,’ she just whispered and fell on ground. There was blood on her back…
‘You killed her! You monster!’ Mikel yelled and fell tears on his face. He kneeled next to Alex and didn’t care about Miguel, who was standing with gun there.
‘Yes… She won’t be yours, I swore,’ Miguel said. ‘But I can’t live without her. Death will unite us,’ he added and put the top of the gun into his mouth. Another gunshot disturbed the night.
Mikel was holding Alexandra’s hand. It was in blood, but nobody cared. Doctors let Mikel to see her only to say goodbye…
‘Mikel…I…I…’ Alex was saying the words slowly.
‘Shh, don’t talk now,’ Mikel said through he knew it was the last thing they could do.
‘No, I…must. You were…the only…good thing…in my…life…. Mikel….’ Alex gasped and closed her eyes in pain.
‘Alex?’ Mikel said scared. She was going away, she was leaving, it was obvious.
‘I love you, Mikel,’ Alex said quietly and her hand in Mikel’s hand drooped.
‘Alexandra…’ Mikel only gasped. His tear fell on her face, right on her tear and those two connected tears ran down the girl’s cheek. ‘To live without means not to live…’ he whispered and painfully kneeled next to her bed.
Hoy quiero soñar una vez más que estás aquí
volver a sentirte respirar dentro de mí
Te fuiste tan rápido
Adiós
Sé, sé que al despertar me perderé en el dolor
Que injusto fue verte partir de amor
Tu corazón, se apagó
Y me siento solo
No sé seguir
Me he quedado solo
Todo perdí
Si no estás, nunca más
No sabré qué es amar
Y me siento solo
¿Dónde estás?
Y miro al espejo que una vez nos vio reír
Tantos recuerdos quedan hoy en mí
Vivir sin ti es no vivir
Y me siento solo...
Sigo el destino
Enséñame el camino
O renuncio a vivir
Y me siento solo...
¿Dónde estás?
volver a sentirte respirar dentro de mí
Te fuiste tan rápido
Adiós
Sé, sé que al despertar me perderé en el dolor
Que injusto fue verte partir de amor
Tu corazón, se apagó
Y me siento solo
No sé seguir
Me he quedado solo
Todo perdí
Si no estás, nunca más
No sabré qué es amar
Y me siento solo
¿Dónde estás?
Y miro al espejo que una vez nos vio reír
Tantos recuerdos quedan hoy en mí
Vivir sin ti es no vivir
Y me siento solo...
Sigo el destino
Enséñame el camino
O renuncio a vivir
Y me siento solo...
¿Dónde estás?
THE END
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
This was amazing end. So sad.
No, Sergo didnt teach me. As a matter of fact it was you on the official foro.
No, Sergo didnt teach me. As a matter of fact it was you on the official foro.
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
I was thinking .. that your story will end exactly like that... dunnno why.....
But it's so so sad.... gosh.. like titanic.....
But it's so so sad.... gosh.. like titanic.....
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
omg i was reading this listeninf donde estas....
now i'm depressed
now i'm depressed
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
girl1035 wrote:This was amazing end. So sad.
No, Sergo didnt teach me. As a matter of fact it was you on the official foro.
Thanks
I have a bad memory
But as a matter of fact, I meant more like "Did Sergo teach you to nag me with that word?"
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Tinute wrote:I was thinking .. that your story will end exactly like that... dunnno why.....
But it's so so sad.... gosh.. like titanic.....
I am predictable
Well, thanks Asiukas
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
I wish all girls read the last part listening to that song*Pris* wrote:omg i was reading this listeninf donde estas....
now i'm depressed
Sorry for making you feel sad though
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I'm totally speechless
so sad
so sad
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emilia wrote:I'm totally speechless
so sad
Thanks
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Re: ~Donde estas?~ Part 13 (THE END)
Kyra wrote:I wish all girls read the last part listening to that song*Pris* wrote:omg i was reading this listeninf donde estas....
now i'm depressed
Sorry for making you feel sad though
it's ok hun.... listening with that song, is even more sad... it means all
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Yes, I chose that song, cause it fitted so well...and I was listening to it while writing the end...was sad moment*Pris* wrote:
it's ok hun.... listening with that song, is even more sad... it means all
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