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Yo por ti, tú por mí Part 32 THE LAST PART!

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Post  Prisca Tue Mar 25, 2008 5:14 pm

WHY ONY ACTS LIKE THIS... stupid, asshole, bastard, daft man, AND BLONDE!!!


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Post  Heli Tue Mar 25, 2008 8:23 pm

Mad Ony.....
But Javi is so caring and sweet.. Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:34 pm

Thanks! Very Happy So you wanna more? So you'll get more! What a Face Haha, Heli... vai lisssssäääääää! lol! xD

Part 5

Javi met Basty and Anita, the other one of their dancers, at the breakfast table. Soon Mikel joined them.
- We have a busy day ahead, huh? Mikel said and sat down the table.
- Yea, Basty replied, - I wonder if Mr. Blonde will join us or do we have to wake him up.
- He is an idiot! Javi said full of anger, - You wanna know what I saw last night?
Mikel, Basty and Anita stared at Javi.
- What? Mikel broke the silence then.
Javi told what he had seen and the others just stared at him and then looked at each others. Even Anita looked surprised though the boys thought that she and Carmen were good friends.
- You don't know anything about this? Javi asked her.
- No, absolutely not! But she has told me that Ony is interesting... I thought that it was one-sided thing, because I haven't seen Ony being interested in her, Anita said and was a bit shocked.
Then they suddenly saw Ony coming toward them. He was wearing sunglasses! Carmen followed her a bit further, but she joined them anyway.
- Morning, Ony said and sat by the table.
- You have a shiny day ahead! Mikel grinned.
- Nah, he is playing a big star, Basty joined Mikel's teasing and they both laughed.
Javi didn't say a thing. He was pissed off.
- Shut up, guys..., Ony said quietly. He took the sunglasses off and looked embarrassed.
Javi was surprised. He expected Ony to be happy about what he had done, but he looked so ashamed.
Carmen ate her breakfast quietly on the other side of the table and didn't look at anyone.
Everyone continued their breakfast in silence and when all were finished, Mikel and Basty got up from the table. Anita was talking to Carmen and they left the table. Javi was leaving too, but Ony asked him to stay. Javi sat down the chair. He still didn't say anything.
- Javi... I was stupid... I... I made a mistake, I know it now, Ony confessed ashamed.
- I'm listening, Javi said firmly.
- Last night Carmen kissed me and took me to her room. I was too drunk and at first I thought it was only fun, but she told me that she wanted me.. I... I couldn't resist her at first.
Javi stared at him angrily.
- I don't want to hear the dirty details!
- No! There are no dirty details! Nothing happened! Ony looked desperate.
- Yea, like I would believe..., Javi replied indifferently.
- Shit... if you don't believe, how Marisa would...
- You have to practise more.
- Practise? This isn't practising! I'm telling you the truth! Ony exclaimed.
- So... tell...
- I was too drunk and I passed out...
- And that's why nothing happened? Javi was annoyed.
- I... don't... know, but in the morning I woke up next to her and I felt so stupid and quilty.
- How do you know nothing happened? Javi asked then.
- Because she told me. She said that "shame you was too tired last night, maybe tonight things look different".
- And?
- Well... I said that there'll be no tonight. This was a mistake in the first place and that she mustn't think of me anymore.
- Good, Javi said.
- She was offended.
- And you comforted?
- NO! What do you think I am? Ony got angry.
- Sorry... but you have to tell her she is not coming to the cottages.
- Why?
- Because of you and Marisa. You know she is mad about Carmen.
- We argued on the phone, Ony said looking sad.
- And I told her you went to her room, Javi confessed.
- WHAT? Ony was terrified, - Why the hell did you do that?
- She has the right to know, but I admit I was too fast. You can tell yourself how the things are.
- She won't listen! Ony was desperate. He buried his face into his hands.
- I'm sorry... but I'll tell her that I was wrong.
- Still... she's going to kill me!
- Well, there is only one person to blame, Javi looked at him seriously.
Ony sighed.
- Yes... me... I was totally an asshole!

Ony called Marisa, but he couldn't tell her anything. Marisa was furious and calling him names. The last words Marisa said were: "I'm not talking to you anymore, Antonio" and she used Antonio only when she was really mad. Now she was. So, Ony had to wait a better chance to talk to her.

Marisa was waiting for them in Helsinki-Vantaa airport. She didn't want to see Ony, but she had to be there, because they had agreed Marisa would meet them there and arrange them to their hotel. D'Nash were surrounded by a group of fans and it took for a long time to get in their car. Marisa waited for them patiently. Finally they came and all the others hugged her except Ony and Carmen. Well, Ony tried to hug her, but he saw that Marisa didn't want to hug him, so he just said "hi" to her. She didn't even reply.
Javi took Marisa apart from the others for a while.
- You have to listen to Ony. He didn't sleep with her, you have to believe it.
- I don't want to hear what happened, Marisa said and wanted to leave.
- No, you must! Ony knows he did wrong, let him tell you!
- I'm not talking to him.
- Then let him talk to you.
- No!
- How are you going to spend our holiday?
- I'll ask if Angie and Mikel take me to live with them... or Basty.
- C'mon... you have to talk.
- He is a liar, I can't listen to his new lies.
- Whatever, but I think you should talk, Javi said and stepped in the car.
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Post  girl1035 Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:38 pm

I just love Javi. Love struck
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Post  emilia Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:10 pm

Javi is soo cute Very Happy
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Post  Heli Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:21 pm

Well, at least Ony realized how stupid his acting was... Rolling Eyes
But is it enough..?
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Post  Prisca Wed Mar 26, 2008 1:47 am

that bastard didn't do nothing... but still a bastard...

i hope he will do a lot for the forgiven


this was greaaaaaat Smile Smile
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Post  Mindex Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:30 pm

Thanks! Smile

Part 6

Finally they were at their hotel. Javi was tired of travelling, but now they were in Finland and tomorrow they would have their first gig here. The second would be after the holiday. The girls, Marisa, Minna and Angie and also José had arrived here earlier, they came straight from Spain.
Javi opened the door of his room quietly. It was late already and he didn't want to wake up José, because he probably was already asleep. He entered the room with his luggages and closed the door. The room was dim, but he could see someone sleeping on the bed. Minna... his dear wife. Finally.
Javi took off his jacket and dropped it on the floor. He also took off his shoes and walked toward the bed and went under the same covers with his wife. He put his arm carefully around her and kissed her neck.
- Honey... are you sleeping? he asked.
- Mmm..., she mumbled and moved a bit and then she opened her eyes.
- Javi! Oh, I didn't hear you coming! How long have you been here? she asked with a sleepy voice.
- Just came..., he smiled and kissed her.
- I'm so happy to see you here, Minna said after the kiss.
- So am I... how's our little boy? Javi asked then.
- José has been a kind boy so far. He asked about you before he fell asleep.
- It has been so difficult to be without you two, Javi said and hugged her tightly.
- But now we have a holiday after tomorrow and we can be together, Minna smiled and took off his shirt.
- And tonight..., Javi grinned and was ready for what she had in mind.

Few hours later they were just laying on the bed holding close each others.
- How are Marisa and Ony? Minna asked then.
- Badly. She doesn't want to talk to him. Ony said to me that he did a big mistake, but now Marisa won't listen to him, Javi told and caressed her hair.
- Sad, Minna said and sighed.
- You know, I've been thinking..., Javi started.
- About what? Minna asked.
- Well... I'd like to have another... child..., Javi said carefully.
- What? Minna looked at him suspiciously, - Another one? No way!
- Why not? José would have someone to play with and...
- You're not even seeing José enough and I have to do all the work with him anyway... and then with two! You're out of your mind! Minna got angry and jumped up from the bed and walked to the bathroom.
- Shit..., Javi mumbled himself.
Soon Minna came back. She looked at Javi and sat down on the bed next to him.
- I'm sorry I got angry, but... it's just that... I'm so tired... it's not so easy to be all the time with a child. José has also bad days and... and even if I love him, I need to do something else in a while...
Javi saw tears in her eyes. He got a bit scared. He didn't know she was tired of everything.
- Come here..., he opened his arms and he took her close to him.
- I didn't know you have so hard times... you should have told about it already times ago, Javi said quietly caressing her hair.
- I just realized it here... I don't want another child now... I'm sorry...., she said with a sad voice.
- Am I so bad husband? Javi asked then seriously.
- No... don't blame yourself. It isn't your fault. I can understand your job, but... I just want you to know, that I'm not ready..., she said and wiped away her tears.
- Well, now we both know what we want... now we just let the things be like they are now, ok? No another child, ok? It's fine with me. I want that you're happy.
- Yes... I'm ok... I just... don't want another one right now..
- Shh... I understand. Now we better sleep. Tomorrow is a long day.
- I know...
But they couldn't sleep for a long time. Both were awake, but didn't say a word.

Javi woke up early in the morning. José said something and he got up to check the boy.
- Morning little José! Javi said to the boy and lifted him in his arms.
- Papi! José smiled and Javi kissed his forehead and realised how much he had missed the boy.
- Papi is here... aren't you sleepy anymore? he spoke quietly to José.
- Äiti, José said in Finnish and was asking where his mother was.
- Shh... Mom is sleeping... let's give her a chance to sleep, ok? Javi continued and José grabbed on his chin and laughed. Javi laughed as well.
Minna woke up. He listened to his boys and smiled. He is a good dad... but another kid..? she didn't smile anymore.
- Morning, she said and Javi noticed she was awake.
- Morning! he smiled and carried José to the bed and gave a kiss to his wife, - Are you ok?
- Yea... but you have a busy day... shouldn't you go soon?
- Yes... shit.., Javi looked sad.
- But tomorrow we'll be in the cottage relaxing... think about it, Minna smiled.
Javi smiled.
- I will..., he winked.

In the afternoon Javi was wondering where Minna was. She should have been somewhere there, where the gig was, but he didn't see her nor José. Javi was too busy to call her. They had also interviews and other stuff and he forgot his wife then. In the evening just before the gig Javi remembered Minna again. Where was she? He hadn't heard of her for the whole day. He was a bit worried, but tried to calm himself down by thinking that probably she had gone to visit her friends or something.

After the gig Javi was really worried. He tried to call her, but she didn't answer. Marisa was there and he asked her if she had seen Minna. She hadn't heard of her today.
- Calm down, Ony said, - Maybe she has done some plans for our holiday, he smiled.
- Yes, she might already be on the cottage with José, Basty said and tried to make Javi feel better.
- Maybe you're right, Javi said, but didn't smile. He had a feeling that something was wrong. Was she angry to him, because of the conversation about another child...? But she was ok in the morning... I don't understand.., Javi thought.
They returned to their hotel and in the morning they would leave for their holiday.
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Post  emilia Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:36 pm

wow so great again Very Happy Very Happy
But where is Minna?
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Post  girl1035 Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:01 pm

Oh, another kidnap? <_< Hope not. Javi is just wow in this story. Love struck
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Post  Mindex Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:35 pm

What a Face Not saying anything... yeh.. of course Javi is wow! xD
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Post  Kyra - Angie Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:36 pm

Ya know what I think Wink Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Thumbs Up Beating heart
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Post  Mindex Wed Mar 26, 2008 7:38 pm

Thanks, Angie! Very Happy And others as well! Wink
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Post  Heli Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:01 pm

Minna has disappeared.... WTF
Amazing work, as always.. Thumbs Up
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Post  Sergo Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:17 pm

Javi is amazing here What a Face
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Post  Mindex Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:39 pm

Sooooo... wanna have more? Like today? Rolling Eyes
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Post  girl1035 Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:05 pm

Yes please. Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:35 pm

Ok.... Smile

Part 7

In the morning Javi got a phonecall. He had already packed all his things. He was even more worried now when he had noticed that Minna had left the hotel already yesterday. There were no her things in the room - nor José's. Now his phone was ringing and he took it and saw that it was Minna.
- Honey, where are you? I'm so worried...., he answered to the phone.
The line was silent for a while. Then he heard her voice.
- I... I have to tell you that... I'm leaving you...
- What!!!! Javi was shocked, - But... but... what's wrong? I'm sure we can talk about it!
Javi panicked. What the hell is this? he walked around the room and didn't know what to say.
- I'm staying in Finland..., she said.
- Why? Why do you leave me? What about José? Javi almost cried.
Someone was knocking on his door.
- We can talk about it later. I have to stop now, Minna said coldly and then she hung up.
- Minnaa!! No! NOOO!!! Javi bursted into tears.
Someone was still knocking on the door.
- Javi! Are you ok? Open the door! Basty shouted behind the door.
Javi walked to the door and opened it. Basty got really scared when he saw Javi's face.
- What's wrong, pal? Basty asked and came in.
Javi just stood there and he dropped his phone and cried.
- She left me..., he said through his tears.
- What!!! Basty stared at him mouth open.
- Yes, she just called and said she's leaving me...
- It can't be true! Basty couldn't believe it.
- That's what she said! Javi sounded angry.
Basty hugged him. Javi cried on his shoulder.
- I don't believe it. There has to be an explanation. She wouldn't do this without a reason, Basty said quietly.
Javi didn't say a word. He was so shocked, terrified, sad... His whole life was crashing down... his wife... his son... where were they? Why she wanted to leave him?

Soon the others knew what had happened. Marisa agreed with Basty that something was wrong. Minna wasn't like that.. She wouldn't leave Javi just like that. Marisa knew that Minna loved Javi very deeply and this thing just wasn't what she would do.
Javi told everything he knew about this and Basty and Marisa looked at each others. They were sure that there was something more that they couldn't see yet.
Angie was shocked. She didn't know Minna well enough and she thought Minna was awful when she did something like this. Mikel was next to her and he was keeping his arm around her. Angie was hoping this wouldn't happen to her and Mikel.

Somehow the others made Javi to leave the hotel and go to the summer cottages they had rented. They weren't far from Helsinki, so they could be there and come to town whenever they wanted. Javi didn't say anything on their way to the cottages. He was thinking all the time the happenings before this. How they made love and everything was fine then... but the conversation about the baby... is it that's why she's leaving? It's my fault she's leaving..., Javi blamed on himself.
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Post  emilia Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:38 pm

omg Shocked Shocked
why Minna left Javi??She can't do that...
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Post  Prisca Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:40 pm

hhm... why this?? so strange this kind of attitude ....

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Post  girl1035 Wed Mar 26, 2008 10:49 pm

Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad Mad
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Post  Sergo Wed Mar 26, 2008 11:54 pm

I don't think she left Javii Mad
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Post  Mindex Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:03 am

Part 8

Minna was feeling bad. She was holding José in her arms and feeling so quilty. At least she had something left of Javi. She looked at José. That face reminded her of Javi. The way the boy always smiled... it was like his dad. She hugged the boy and felt tears in her eyes. This was a nightmare! Suddenly she heard steps behind the door. The door was unlocked and got opened.
- Well, you've been a good girl here, I assume, a voice said to her.
The voice she knew too well. Harri. He had somehow kidnapped José and forced her to pack her things and come to get José. But Harri had a plan and he didn't let them leave. He had said if Minna told about this to anyone, he would hurt the boy. That's why she didn't dare to leave a note or any clue what had happened.
- Tomorrow you have to call to your friend and tell that you're ok, but leaving that Spaniard, Harri said.
Minna didn't say anything. She hated him really.
- And then you must call that Spaniard too and make him feel really miserable, he continued laughing.
Minna felt anger, but she didn't show it outside. For José's sake she had to keep her mouth shut. She had tears in her eyes when she was thinking about Javi. How he had to feel so bad now.... wondering why am I doing this to him... shit!

Javi didn't sleep much on that night. He tried but he was only rolling on his bed. He got up and walked to the kitchen. They were supposed to have a great holiday here... all of them... and now... he felt he´d rather walk to the lake and drown himself. But José... he was the only good thing in this. Maybe he could be at least with José. He didn't want to give up because of him. He sat down on a chair and started crying.
Basty came to the kitchen. They had decided he would keep eye on Javi, even if they originally planned that Basty would have lived in the cottage next to Javi's, but he seemed to be so upset that they decided it was best for him, if someone was all the time with him.
- You can't sleep? Basty asked and sat down opposite Javi.
- No..., Javi said.
- We have to do something about it. I'm sure there is something wrong, Basty said and looked at Javi.
- Well... there's only one thing wrong... she left me and that's it, Javi cried.
- I'll find it out. I don't believe it, before I find all the details of it! Basty convinced.
- Don't waste your time...
- It seems I know her much better than you do, Basty replied.
Javi looked at him.
- What do you mean?
- How can you believe that she really wants to leave you? You told what happened before she disappeared. There was no reason to do it! Something has happened to her now and we must find it out!
Javi looked at him full of suspicion.
- I heard her on the phone. She meant it..., he said then and walked to the living room and sat down on a couch.
Basty sighed. Tomorrow he would talk to Marisa. He wanted to know what had happened to Minna.

Javi woke up when his phone rang. He had fallen asleep on the couch, though he had thought he couldn't sleep. He found his phone on the floor next to the couch and saw who the caller was.
- Minna? he answered the phone.
The line was silent again for a while.
- Yes... it's me..., she said quietly.
- Please, don't do this..., Javi whispered, - I can't live without you...
- I... have no choice.., she said, - I... I... don't... love... you anymore...
Then she hung up.
- NO!! DON'T HANG UP!! Oh... noo, noo, noo....!!!! Javi cried, sprang up from the couch and threw the phone to the wall. The phone got into many pieces.

Harri grabbed on the phone and took it from Minna.
- Enough, he said after closing it.
Minna was crying. Those words she had had to say to Javi broke her heart. She knew that it would kill Javi, but she had no choice. Harri had aimed with a gun at José who was playing on the floor. One wrong word and... bang!
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Post  girl1035 Thu Mar 27, 2008 8:54 am

WTF? Shocked Harri? Shocked Isnt he supposed to be dead or something? Shocked Oh my, how I hate him. Mad
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Post  Sergo Thu Mar 27, 2008 12:43 pm

How can he threaten a child!? Shocked
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