"Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Aww so sweet and sad
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
ooohhhh.... he left...
great part
great part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
aawww <3 so sweet
great part
great part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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awesome part.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
So sweet and sad and... awwwwww.... cute..
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Great parts
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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So sweet and sad at the same time
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Awww he propose her there! :D
Sweet part but sad because he left :(
Sweet part but sad because he left :(
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Thanks girls!
Part 10
Sofía had woken up and I took her on my arms. I went to the window where I saw the plane which Javi should fly back to Spain. I talked to Sofía all the time. Or otherwise I would have burst into crying. When the plane finally started to move I said: “And now your dad is sitting inside that plane.”
Little later we saw how the plane took flight off.
“We should wave to your dad.” I said and waved her hand to the plane which was now just a small spot in the sky.
“Now there are just we two.” I said.
“I don’t think so.” I heard somebody saying behind me.
I turned quickly around because that voice was so familiar.
“But why…how?” I tried to ask.
“When I was boarding to the plane I realized that I couldn’t leave you.” Javi said and came to hug me.
“I called to our manager and I got two weeks time to be here. But then I really have to go back.” he explained.
“I’m glad you couldn’t leave.” I mumbled to his shoulder.
“But let’s go home. I think we maybe could organize all things in two weeks so we all could fly to Spain together.” I continued.
“That sounds great.” Javi said and kissed me.
And we managed to do it. In two weeks we packed all things and sent them to Spain. I said goodbyes all to my friends and relatives and promised to visit here soon. My parents were happy that I was going to marry Javi. Or at least mum pretended to be happy. I wasn’t totally sure about her happiness because she looked so weird when she congratulated us. But my dad was really happy for me.
This time my best friend drove us to the airport. When it was time of goodbyes, I tried not to cry.
“You should come to visit there when we’ve got all things okay.” I said and hugged her.
“Let’s see it then. We’ve time to do it. But go now or otherwise I’ll start to cry even more.” she said and wiped tears off her eyes.
“I’ll call you when we’ve arrived.” I said and we left together with Javi and Sofía.
When we boarded to Spain, there was a little surprise to me. There were Basty, Ony, Mikel and also María at the airport. I hugged each of them tight.
“It’s good to see you again.” I said.
“Oh, that must be Sofía.” Mikel said and looked at the strollers where Sofía was sitting.
“Yes. My daughter.” Javi said proud.
“Aaw. She’s beautiful.” Ony said.
And then followed that moment when everybody praised Sofía and said how cute and nice little girl she is.
“I’m glad you solved your problems.” Basty said and looked at me.
“Yes. We’ve forgotten it now, so we don’t talk about it anymore.” I said.
“I heard you’re getting married?” María asked.
“Wow, news are moving fast. But yes, we’re.” I laughed.
“Have our things come already?” Javi asked.
“Yes. I’ve taken 5 boxes to your house.” Ony replied.
“Great. Then everything has arrived.” I said.
“Maybe we should leave, so you can go to unpack your things.” Mikel suggested.
“Oh no. I’ve just packed those boxes during these weeks and now I should unpack those.” I complained.
Basty had brought Javi’s car to the airport, so we could drive straight to home. It was already a night so we took only that stuff what Sofía needed and left the rest to the boxes.
“You’ve already a bed for Sofía?” I asked surprised.
“Yes. I bought it and I think boys must be took it here.” Javi said.
“I’m going to bed right now. I’m so exhausted of that travelling.” I yawned.
“Okay. I’ll just check few things and then come too.” he said and gave a quick kiss to me.
“Good night.” he said.
“Good night.” I answered and left to sleep with Sofía.
When Javi little later came to sleep, I was still wake.
“You aren’t still sleeping.” Javi mumbled tired.
“No.. It’s just little weird to be here again.” I replied.
“You’ll get used to it.” he said and pulled me tight against him.
“Just sleep now.” he told.
And slowly I fell asleep too.
Part 10
Sofía had woken up and I took her on my arms. I went to the window where I saw the plane which Javi should fly back to Spain. I talked to Sofía all the time. Or otherwise I would have burst into crying. When the plane finally started to move I said: “And now your dad is sitting inside that plane.”
Little later we saw how the plane took flight off.
“We should wave to your dad.” I said and waved her hand to the plane which was now just a small spot in the sky.
“Now there are just we two.” I said.
“I don’t think so.” I heard somebody saying behind me.
I turned quickly around because that voice was so familiar.
“But why…how?” I tried to ask.
“When I was boarding to the plane I realized that I couldn’t leave you.” Javi said and came to hug me.
“I called to our manager and I got two weeks time to be here. But then I really have to go back.” he explained.
“I’m glad you couldn’t leave.” I mumbled to his shoulder.
“But let’s go home. I think we maybe could organize all things in two weeks so we all could fly to Spain together.” I continued.
“That sounds great.” Javi said and kissed me.
And we managed to do it. In two weeks we packed all things and sent them to Spain. I said goodbyes all to my friends and relatives and promised to visit here soon. My parents were happy that I was going to marry Javi. Or at least mum pretended to be happy. I wasn’t totally sure about her happiness because she looked so weird when she congratulated us. But my dad was really happy for me.
This time my best friend drove us to the airport. When it was time of goodbyes, I tried not to cry.
“You should come to visit there when we’ve got all things okay.” I said and hugged her.
“Let’s see it then. We’ve time to do it. But go now or otherwise I’ll start to cry even more.” she said and wiped tears off her eyes.
“I’ll call you when we’ve arrived.” I said and we left together with Javi and Sofía.
When we boarded to Spain, there was a little surprise to me. There were Basty, Ony, Mikel and also María at the airport. I hugged each of them tight.
“It’s good to see you again.” I said.
“Oh, that must be Sofía.” Mikel said and looked at the strollers where Sofía was sitting.
“Yes. My daughter.” Javi said proud.
“Aaw. She’s beautiful.” Ony said.
And then followed that moment when everybody praised Sofía and said how cute and nice little girl she is.
“I’m glad you solved your problems.” Basty said and looked at me.
“Yes. We’ve forgotten it now, so we don’t talk about it anymore.” I said.
“I heard you’re getting married?” María asked.
“Wow, news are moving fast. But yes, we’re.” I laughed.
“Have our things come already?” Javi asked.
“Yes. I’ve taken 5 boxes to your house.” Ony replied.
“Great. Then everything has arrived.” I said.
“Maybe we should leave, so you can go to unpack your things.” Mikel suggested.
“Oh no. I’ve just packed those boxes during these weeks and now I should unpack those.” I complained.
Basty had brought Javi’s car to the airport, so we could drive straight to home. It was already a night so we took only that stuff what Sofía needed and left the rest to the boxes.
“You’ve already a bed for Sofía?” I asked surprised.
“Yes. I bought it and I think boys must be took it here.” Javi said.
“I’m going to bed right now. I’m so exhausted of that travelling.” I yawned.
“Okay. I’ll just check few things and then come too.” he said and gave a quick kiss to me.
“Good night.” he said.
“Good night.” I answered and left to sleep with Sofía.
When Javi little later came to sleep, I was still wake.
“You aren’t still sleeping.” Javi mumbled tired.
“No.. It’s just little weird to be here again.” I replied.
“You’ll get used to it.” he said and pulled me tight against him.
“Just sleep now.” he told.
And slowly I fell asleep too.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Amazing part
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa(tic tac tic tac)aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa(zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz)aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa( )aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa( )aaaaaaaaa(*yawn*)aaaaaaaaaw!!!!!!
Javi is just so sweet and amazing!! That girl is so lucky to have him!!!
This part was fab!!! Mooooooooooooooooo(not again )oooooooooooooo( )oooooooooooooooooooooooooo( )oooooore!!!!!!!
Javi is just so sweet and amazing!! That girl is so lucky to have him!!!
This part was fab!!! Mooooooooooooooooo(not again )oooooooooooooo( )oooooooooooooooooooooooooo( )oooooore!!!!!!!
Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Thanks..
And Imke, your comments really cheer up my day...
So, thanks for it..
And Imke, your comments really cheer up my day...
So, thanks for it..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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aawww <3 soooo great part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Great part. I want them to live luckily forever.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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I LOVE this story! Javi is amazing!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw Great part
Aida- Number of posts : 1533
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
i loveeeeeeeddddddddddddd.... so happy that javi didn't catch the plane without them....
loveeeeeddd
loveeeeeddd
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Awwwwww
Javi is really way too sweet here.
They gotta have happy end, they are worth of it! <3
Javi is really way too sweet here.
They gotta have happy end, they are worth of it! <3
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Part 11
Next day we started to set my things to their own places. Javi took things out of boxes and I planned where we should put it. Easy. Until I realized that even I had took only few bigger things with me, it was really hard to fit them in his flat. But finally we manage to do that.
I was putting our clothes to closets in our bedroom, when Javi came in.
“Should we take a break?” he asked and put his arms around my waist and kissed my neck.
I laughed. “A break?” I asked.
“Yes. A break. Because I’m bored.” Javi grinned.
“You’re asking me to take a break, because you’re bored?” I asked.
“I’ll keep that break when I’ve arranged these clothes. And there’s one box still left.” I smiled.
“Heyy, that’s unfair.” he complained.
“You could go to park with Sofía. She’s waking up soon.” I suggested, because I knew that he loves strolls in the park with Sofía.
“Okay.” he said with lighten face.
“We’ll be back soon.” he said and gave a quick kiss.
“Don’t hurry. Just take your time.” I answered. But they were already gone.
We were sitting on the couch together in the evening and I was sipping coffee, I just couldn’t get rid of that habit. Javi’s arm was around me when he started to speak:
“Don’t you think we should start to plan our wedding?”
“Already now?” I asked confused.
“Well, I didn’t mean just right now, but someday near here.” he smiled.
“Well, uhmm.. I just wanted to set up here and then start to think about the wedding. What that sounds?” I suggested.
“Okay..” Javi said.
But I heard that he was little disappointed.
“What? Why you want hurry?” I asked.
“I just would want to introduce you as my wife as soon as possible.” he smiled.
“I think you have a opportunity to do that someday.” I smiled gently.
“Maybe I have to live with that then.” he teased me.
“Okay, okay! What kind of wedding do YOU want?” I asked then.
“Really big. That kind of wedding what is only in fairytales.” he explained.
“And you?” he asked then.
“Uhm.. Well.. I just have thought little smaller wedding. I would like that we had only closest relatives and friends with us. I don’t need any big wedding.” I said.
“But I have thought that every woman wants huge and expensive wedding?” Javi said confused.
“You don’t need to prove of your huge wedding that you love that another one. I think that the ceremony is the main thing. Not that are there many hundreds guests to proving our marriage, or just few but even closer guest.” I said quietly.
“I know. But let’s make a deal. We’ll invite there those people that we want. And if t grows to huge wedding then we have them. If not, then we have little wedding?” he suggested.
“Okay. It’s a deal then.” I admitted and kissed him.
“But I want to buy you the most beautiful dress.” Javi said then.
“Okay. I can admit with that too.” I grinned.
Next day we started to set my things to their own places. Javi took things out of boxes and I planned where we should put it. Easy. Until I realized that even I had took only few bigger things with me, it was really hard to fit them in his flat. But finally we manage to do that.
I was putting our clothes to closets in our bedroom, when Javi came in.
“Should we take a break?” he asked and put his arms around my waist and kissed my neck.
I laughed. “A break?” I asked.
“Yes. A break. Because I’m bored.” Javi grinned.
“You’re asking me to take a break, because you’re bored?” I asked.
“I’ll keep that break when I’ve arranged these clothes. And there’s one box still left.” I smiled.
“Heyy, that’s unfair.” he complained.
“You could go to park with Sofía. She’s waking up soon.” I suggested, because I knew that he loves strolls in the park with Sofía.
“Okay.” he said with lighten face.
“We’ll be back soon.” he said and gave a quick kiss.
“Don’t hurry. Just take your time.” I answered. But they were already gone.
We were sitting on the couch together in the evening and I was sipping coffee, I just couldn’t get rid of that habit. Javi’s arm was around me when he started to speak:
“Don’t you think we should start to plan our wedding?”
“Already now?” I asked confused.
“Well, I didn’t mean just right now, but someday near here.” he smiled.
“Well, uhmm.. I just wanted to set up here and then start to think about the wedding. What that sounds?” I suggested.
“Okay..” Javi said.
But I heard that he was little disappointed.
“What? Why you want hurry?” I asked.
“I just would want to introduce you as my wife as soon as possible.” he smiled.
“I think you have a opportunity to do that someday.” I smiled gently.
“Maybe I have to live with that then.” he teased me.
“Okay, okay! What kind of wedding do YOU want?” I asked then.
“Really big. That kind of wedding what is only in fairytales.” he explained.
“And you?” he asked then.
“Uhm.. Well.. I just have thought little smaller wedding. I would like that we had only closest relatives and friends with us. I don’t need any big wedding.” I said.
“But I have thought that every woman wants huge and expensive wedding?” Javi said confused.
“You don’t need to prove of your huge wedding that you love that another one. I think that the ceremony is the main thing. Not that are there many hundreds guests to proving our marriage, or just few but even closer guest.” I said quietly.
“I know. But let’s make a deal. We’ll invite there those people that we want. And if t grows to huge wedding then we have them. If not, then we have little wedding?” he suggested.
“Okay. It’s a deal then.” I admitted and kissed him.
“But I want to buy you the most beautiful dress.” Javi said then.
“Okay. I can admit with that too.” I grinned.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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oooh weddings niceee
so great part
so great part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Javi looks like women that wants to marry in a hurry and that wants a big wedding
great part
great part
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Javi wants a big wedding Thats first time man said this. This part was great.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Heli wrote:Thanks..
And Imke, your comments really cheer up my day...
So, thanks for it..
Hahahaha Well I was pretty in a good mood yesterday
Anyway you're welcome
Oooh part 11 posted!! *starts reading*
Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Read it!
This was just so ......
Javi is loooooovely!!!
Aaaah I love this!! Mooore!!
This was just so ......
Javi is loooooovely!!!
Aaaah I love this!! Mooore!!
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