The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)

Agree.

girl1035 wrote:Agree.

Me too

D’nash split up ?? and you tried to kill yourself!?

yeah, i agree too. we need more.

omg I love this
moreeeeeeeeeee

Well, you already know what I think of this story
You are BRILLIANT writer, Julyt

WOW thanks girls
But I guess a new part will have to whait a little bit cuz I'm out of inspiration

inspiration goes and backs... we wait, because this is so great

I sent you a package of inspiration Julia. You should have it soon.

Part 14

I opened my eyes. White sealing, white walls. I had no Idea where I was. And how silly it may seem my first thought was that I was in heaven. Soon enough I felt a killing pain in my right arm. Oh eyah I’m alive.
… Where am I? ….
But there was no answer.
Where am I ?!?!? .
This time I said it louder. A man came in to the room. HE was wearing a long white coat, so I realized he was a doctor.
What happened? I said silently this time. My lips were almost sealed, they were very dry and dead.
- Finally miss, you woke up. You are in the Northons Coast hospital. A man brought you here. He said he found you lying in your house bleeding.
- Thank…. Y..you …- At first I was in shock but I finally started remembering what had happened.
- Oh and miss, you have a visitor, may I let him in?
- Yes of course.
- Young sir, you may enter. She is finally awake. Just be very careful she is still very weak.
Mikel ran in to the room as soon as he heard what the doctor said.
- My love (he kissed me) You are so stupid (kiss) why did you do that? (kiss) I almost lost you (kiss) how would I live without you? (kiss)
- But. .but your girl…
- Shhh… don’t even think about it… I love you.. I only dated her to forget you.. but when I saw you in the supermarket I remembered Why I fell in love with you… And when you said you chose me… and then the news that you… (he stoped.. I saw tears in his eyes.. and I started crying to)
- But I caused so much pain… I deserve to die…
- Don’t you ever dare to say that you hear me… you mean the world to me…If you dye I would dye to… Please don’t you ever do that again.. (he was hugging me and crying. I have never seen a man cry so sencear, so.. His eyes.. his beautiful green eyes… I hugged him tighter…
- -I’m sorry…
- Don’t be… don’t be. It’s all my fault.. How could I’v been so foolish… Oh If I could just turn the time back and take away your pain…
Then silent stood between us. We just hugged each other tight. It seemed we would never let each other go. And soon enough he fell asleep. After all he watched over me for two whole days. It was so nice to finally have him in my arms. To see him sleeping. He was like an angel. He slept so peacefully. And than I realized how foolish I was. I foolishly tried to take my life away. And the thought of never seeing him again crossed my heart. Tears slowly started run trough my chin. I started glossing his hair… he woke up for a second but than he fell back to sleep. I didn’t sleep all night. I just watched him sleep and looked trough the window

Aaaw Mikel
Good God you're not dead

I'm are stupid or in this part don't was Ony

not ony

Mikel was so cuteeeeeee

I still think then must be Ony

*Pris* wrote:

What so fun?

because you think it's ony

No you don't understand me, because I saw instead of Mikel have been Ony. Now you understand me?

ohhh ok... sorry, my mistake

Never mind about that

thanks

This story is great...it started with Ony and now it went to Mikel

Amazing part!
This story is really great!

OKi Julyte..... This story is amazing.... But You are kiling me.. when you end part like that... so pleas,... more!!!! :doublethumbsup :doublethumbsup :doublethumbsup :doublethumbsup

I agree, you MUST post more!!!