Re: The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)

Sergo Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:00 pm

write what's happening now Twisted Evil

Heli Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:01 pm

Lovely parts! Wink

Great job! Thumbs Up

Prisca Mon Jan 07, 2008 7:26 pm

great part... Very Happy

you could write what is happening... Rolling Eyes

Basty girl Mon Jan 07, 2008 8:16 pm

Sweet....MORE,MORE,MORE Exclamation

Kyra - Angie Mon Jan 07, 2008 10:40 pm

I feel sorry for Ony Laughing

And Mikel deserved a good ass-kick Laughing

But the story is amazing Wink

kleckutis_lt Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:08 pm

Quite short but a romantic part..... I love you

PART 18
After everything we got dressed and went to the living room where everybody else was partying… We were hugging each other and kissing all the time… everybody noticed it and smiled… Javi said:
- They are sooo inlove….
- I agree… it’s just perfect.. our little Mikel in love… (basty agreed)
Some time later the boys went home and Simone was sleeping upstairs… Only Mikel and I were sitting on the flour.. by the fireplace…
I looked trough the window… It was such a beautiful evening… Ech it is so beautiful…. I said and sighed… Let’s go for a walk Mikel replied… Lets go.. I said and looked at his eyes… We were walking and just enjoying the summer that was going to an end… We went by the water.. it was a quite little lake… With an amazing view…. He sat on the ground and I sat by him… his legs were raped around me and kept me warm…
And suddenly words came to my head… I started saying them:
Take this moment..
And lock it in a little heart shaped box…
Witch beats inside your chest…
Lock it and throw away the key
That way it will never dye…
The feeling will never dye…
He looked at me… Than kissed me… Than… he took my hand and putted on his chest… On his heart…
- I lock you here… forever and ever….
I took his hand and did the same… Than I took his finger and pointed in to my eyes and lips… than my forehead…
- In my heart and my mind… My lips…. You are a part of me…
- And you… you fill me…
Than he came close to my neck… I could feel his warm breath… A little shiver ran trough my body… He was holding my hands.. And in a voice so calm but so quite… he sang: siempre seras… La estrella que alumbra my existir… his voice was so quite… like he wanted just me to Herat these words….
I kissed his cheek and sang : Vivir sin tie s no vivir” He was so happy… And seeing him happy… I was happy to… happy as never before…

Rania Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:12 pm

Amazing part!
Really romantic Beating heart

girl1035 Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:14 pm

Awesome.

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Kyra - Angie Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:14 pm

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAw Shocked

Tinute Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:17 pm

aw..... so sweet..... how from that song.. It's so in Love.... Laughing

Sergo Mon Jan 07, 2008 11:22 pm

naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw I love you

Prisca Tue Jan 08, 2008 2:02 am

such a amazing romantic part Beating heart

Heli Tue Jan 08, 2008 1:51 pm

Aaaww..

So romantic!

emilia Tue Jan 08, 2008 3:16 pm

sooo cute and sweet part Very Happy

Hen «3 Javi Tue Jan 08, 2008 5:52 pm

Aww

girl1035 Tue Jan 08, 2008 6:16 pm

More please. The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT) - Page 7 Icon_rr

Basty girl Tue Jan 08, 2008 7:29 pm

Ohh...so so wonderful and romantic :doublethumbsup :doublethumbsup In love

Rania Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:29 pm

Julia, please post more...I've missed this story

girl1035 Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:35 pm

Yes. More. That's very clever idea.

Tinute Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:36 pm

agree..... need more..!!

Kyra - Angie Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:38 pm

Tinute, we will have to force Julija then Twisted Evil

If only she was on MSN Evil or Very Mad

Tinute Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:39 pm

Kyra wrote:Tinute, we will have to force Julija then
If only she was on MSN

yeah....

and with msn .. that's not problem..... remember.. we will meet her.. soon... Twisted Evil

Kyra - Angie Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:41 pm

Tinute wrote:
yeah.... and with msn .. that's not problem..... remember.. we will meet her.. soon...

Yes

Neduosim jai torto Twisted Evil

She will have to post a new part, or else Twisted Evil

Tinute Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:43 pm

Kyra wrote:
Tinute wrote:
yeah.... and with msn .. that's not problem..... remember.. we will meet her.. soon...
Yes Neduosim jai torto She will have to post a new part, or else

apseis....!... arba...... ides nauja daly.... Twisted Evil

or she will be not in good form after.... Rolling Eyes

Kyra - Angie Tue Jan 15, 2008 6:45 pm

Tinute wrote:
Kyra wrote:
Tinute wrote:
yeah.... and with msn .. that's not problem..... remember.. we will meet her.. soon...
Yes Neduosim jai torto She will have to post a new part, or else

apseis....!... arba...... ides nauja daly.... or she will be not in good form after....

Yeah

Maybe after your cocktail she won't be able to post a new part until she is sober again Laughing

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