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The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT)

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Post  Prisca Sun Dec 30, 2007 8:49 pm

me toooo Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Sun Dec 30, 2007 9:12 pm

when when when? Very Happy
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Post  kleckutis_lt Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:32 pm

Part 8
.the concert
Was about to start and I’m still in my bed… I started preparing… make up… cloths… boots… fuck where is the other boot… daaamn… I’m late… Oh here it is….
Meanwhile the concert was already started…After a few songs the boys went to the dressing room to change outfits…
Basty- So where is your so called friend ?
Ony- you mean Julia? Well she was supposed to come but I guess she was busy…
Mikel- yeah right…
Ony… Th- ( he wanted to say something but the show keeper came and told them that it’s their time to on stage again…
Ony- No time to argue now, lets go…
Mikel- Big smiles everyone ….
The concert was their best performance ever… but It was coming to an end… I came horribly late but.. still better later then ever right? So as I was walking towards the stage I saw the boys dancing.. boy do they know who to dance or what… But I noticed that Ony was kind’a sad… I sat in the middle of the viewers places… the show was over soon… I wanted to surprise Ony so I waited till all he fans took photos with them etc… I took a distance that no one would have seen me… when the boys were in the dressing room I knocked the door and waited for someone to open… Meanwhile in the dressing room…
Basty- sooo your Julia didn’t came did she..?
Ony- well no… his voice sounded sad…
Mikel- C’mon just admit that you don’t know her and stop the sharade…
Ony- damn how many times can I tell you I do know her…
Someone knocked the door…
Mikel- Ony you open the door, maybe it’s Julia… (they started laughing)
When I knocked the door Ony opened the door… his sad face filed with a smile at the same moment… When I walked trough the door I saw javi basty and Mikel looking at me a bit shocked…
- Hey, what happened, you look like you’v seen a ghost…
Mikel- Shit Ony was telling the truth…
I didn’t understand a thing so I just smiled…

- I’m so sorry I’m late but I…
- Naaah it’s ok.. I’m just glad you are here… (he said and smiled).
We sat there with the boys for a couple of hours and talked… I saw that Mikel, Javi and Basty are really nice and warm people.. We got to know each other… After some more time only me Mikel and Ony were left in the concert place… We were sitting on the edge of the stage and having a good laugh… Then Ony looked strange at Mikel and said:
- I thought you had to go SOMEWHERE.. .
- What are you talking about I have plenty of ti… (Ony didn’t let Mikel finish ..He kicked him in to the leg… ) Oh yeah Now I remember I have to go… do um.. stuff… Um.. Bye… I hope to see you soon Julia … (He said and waved to us.. after a few seconds he was gone in the shades)
- So, we are alone… (said Ony and moved closer to me)
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Post  Sergo Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:36 pm

Hahah!
You sure showed them! Cool

All aloone What a Face
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Post  kleckutis_lt Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:37 pm

time to get o bussnes Cool Laughing
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Post  Sergo Sun Dec 30, 2007 10:41 pm

please post it now Rolling Eyes Laughing
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Post  Prisca Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:04 pm

alone Razz Razz
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Post  Heli Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:08 pm

hey, greeat! Cool
moore! Wink
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Post  girl1035 Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:10 pm

Great part. More please.
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Post  kleckutis_lt Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:15 pm

Part 9
- Yes we are… (I felt a little bit uncomfortable and he saw it)
- Are you afraid of me? You seem to be scared?
- No, I’m not scared it’s just I feel like I hardly know you… (I was lying.. But I don’t know why)
- Strange.. Cuz I feel like I know you forever… I wont lye… I usually flirt with girls and stuff but when I’m with you… I start being silly.. I can’t explain it but… ( I saw as his brown cheeks started blushing… And at that moment I felt so close to him… I was attracted to him like.. like magnet… I putted my hand on his hand… And looked strait to his eyes… My heart started beating like crazy…
- Anto…. (HE didn’t let me finish. he slowly stroke his fingers trough my lips… All of my body shivered… HE was looking to my eyes… And..A kiss followed our moves… It was a passionate and a sweet kiss… When it was over I wanted it to last forever… so when Ony opened his mouth to say something I grabbed his T-shirt and pulled him near myself and kissed him again… this time the kiss was.. different… A bit perversa… I stroke my hands trough his gorgeous hair… His arms was on my waist… I felt how fit he is… Although he was holding me so gently Y felt the pover that he had…
After the kiss Ony looked stupefied…
- Now that’s what I call a kiss (he said and hugged me stronger)
- You call that a kiss? Pfff I can do better (I said and we both laughed).. I looked at the clock and I saw it was almost 10 o’clock – well it’s time to go home…
- What? No.. why? I like it here…
- But I have a big photo shoot tomorrow…
- Please, can we stay here a little bit longer?
- Sorry but I really have to go…
- No you are not gong anywhere (he hugged me tightly)
- No, really I have to go now…
- C’mon.. relax… everything will be fine (he laughed)
- It’s just a game to you isn’t it..? Well it’s not a game for me… I have to go.. I shouted… I felt as he let me go…
- What’s wrong with you? This all modeling thing changed you… (he said in a grumpy mood)
- Well get used to it… (I said angrily and I went out of the building)
At the taxi I was thinking about what I said.. first of all I was mad because of him… but when I finally calmed myself down… I rethought what I said and I felt sad because I understood It was my fault we had this fight…But My pride didn’t let me call him… N..not to night.. tomorrow I thought…
Back at home I tried to fall asleep but Ony’s lips was on my mind… I thing I even slept with a smile on my face…
A day passed by… two days.. but I didn’t get a call from him… I grudged my self for being such an ass but I couldn’t call him..I just couldn’t… Maybe it was my pride.. Or maybe I was just afraid to hear a negative answer… One day my oldest and most precious friend Tommy took me out to diner… We went to our favorite coffee…
We talked about old times… We had such a good time… I even smudged his face with ice cream ..Of course he did the same… Just like old times… I heard someone laughing in the back of the coffee.. The laughter was soo familiar…
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Post  Prisca Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:19 pm

ony laugh Razz
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Post  Heli Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:20 pm

Naawh.. So sweet.. MrGreen
Great part!
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Post  Sergo Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:20 pm

Greaaaat part!
Iwanna know more What a Face
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Post  kleckutis_lt Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:29 pm

pris- maybie maybie Wink Razz
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Post  Prisca Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:30 pm

Razz Razz Razz
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Post  Sergo Sun Dec 30, 2007 11:32 pm

new part noow? What a Face
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Post  kleckutis_lt Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:09 am

Part 10
I was right.. It was Mikel… And no surprise… with Ony… I excused my friend and went to their table to say hi… The boys looked so surprised to see me… But glad also.. accept Ony… Mikel complained that the rehearsals are killing him and that I newer come to visit them… When he asked with who I came here I waved to Tommy and said that I came here with a friend… Suddenly Ony stood up..took my hand and said angry:
- We need to talk… (we went outside of the coffee to talk.Ofcourse he started.I was concern) – So you think it’s funny ? to play with my heart and than show up with another guy and came to me and talk like it’s nothing? (I couldn’t take it so I started smiling…) –You think it’s funny? ( he became angrier and angrier)
- Actually… yes…
- And what’s so funny huh?
- Your jealous aren’t you? ( I was smiling very wide)
- Of course I am!!!… I mean.. am… Not really No..
I leaned and kissed him…He almost jumped back..
- What are you doing? Are you insane?
- Yes.. I am… Insanely in love… With you
(his anger was all away.. )
- But what about the guy you came here with?
- He is my best friend since I was like eleven…
- So you… like me?
- Yes silly… (I said in a calm voice and kissed his forehead)
- I.. Am… I don’t know what to say.. (he was sooo confused)
- I think it’s the part where you say I like you to blab la bla… Of course if you feel the same way because if not I could just turn around and (I was turning around when I felt as ony’s hand grabbed my hand and pulled me near him. For a moment there my heart stopped beating as his face was near mine… moment’s like these I go week… His lips was getting closer and closer… I thought he would kiss me but he rubbed his nose with mine…
- We just kissed, Eskimo style… (he said and smiled)
- How about a kiss Ony style?
- I don’t think you could handle it.. (he said ironicly)
- Oh yeah? Try me (I said and gently bit his lip…
- But don’t say that I didn’t warn you… (he lifted me up in his arms)
We kissed…It was a French kiss… All the time my hands were touching his face… and he held me lifted in his arms… When he stopped kissing I took his face with my hands and kissed his lips for a 100 times at least…
- So what do you love the most in me? My incredible charm, my amazing hair or my astonishing butt? (he said laughing)
- I would say, your astonishing butt… (I laughed and hugged his shoulders and kissed his cheek) And what do love in me? My amazing butt or my astonishing honesty?
He stopped… leaned near me… gently brushed my hair that was fallen on my face…
- I love the way you laugh… I love the way you stroke your hair when your nervous… I love the way you putt your lips when you drink tea…I love your voice when you speak… But mostly I love the way you look at me.. that way I can see your beautiful eyes, I have never seen anything so amazing in my life…
Darn I'm In a god mood today santa
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Post  girl1035 Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:13 am

Thank you Julia. You are amazing writer. The ugly duck... Another fanfic by Julia ;) (Kleckutis_LT) - Page 3 Icon_cheers
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Post  kleckutis_lt Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:16 am

oh thanks... Embarassed Embarassed Embarassed Embarassed Embarassed
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Post  Prisca Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:18 am

romantic part.... i love it Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Riikka Mon Dec 31, 2007 1:39 am

Absolutely lovely! cheers This is great!
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Post  Heli Mon Dec 31, 2007 12:13 pm

Aaaww.. So romantic.. MrGreen
You are really good writer!
More, please! Wink
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Post  Sergo Mon Dec 31, 2007 8:40 pm

This part of the story was really great!
Keep up the good work! What a Face
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Post  girl1035 Wed Jan 02, 2008 6:04 pm

When more?
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Post  kleckutis_lt Wed Jan 02, 2008 7:37 pm

- I…I… ( But my friend Tommy came out of the coffee)
- Oh there you are… I was looking for you and… Is this the guy you were talking about?
- Yeah( I smiled)
- You were right he is gorgeous… ( don’t be surprised Tommy is gay) Anyways something came up so I have to go.. by hun (he kissed my cheek and went off)
- Let’s go inside? (I jumped on his back and we went inside the coffee, We were laughing like hell)
We had a good time at the coffee, we laughed and laughed… Everyone was so friendly.. Ony held my hand the whole time… But mikel was looking sad.When it was time to go home everyone jumped in to their separate cars, I was about to jump I to Ony’s car but Mikel came by and offered to take me home because it’s on his way… Ony said he had some things to do anyway so he agreed, So I was driving home with Mikel… Our conversation at the car was very pleasant…
- You know (I started) I only know you for a couple of days, but I can definitely say that you are one of my dearest friends…
- Naaaw, thanks sweetheart, I feel the same way…
- So there is my house… hey come in for a cup of tea.. If you want of course…
- With great pleasure… (he said and took my hand.. But everything was friendly of course.. )
Later at the house… We were sitting by the coffee table, drinking tea and talking about…Ony…
- he is my dear dear friend… And I love him like a brother. .But I could always feel the competition between us… And he would always win it… I mean he always gets more fans attention etc… And he’s prettier I admit it…
- Don’t speak like that… You are gorgeous.. I mean look at you.. girls eat you with their eyes when you walk down the street, and you could easily get any girl that you want…
- Really? (he asked a bit weird)
- Really really (I said and smiled)
He leaned near me (we were sitting opposite each other)
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