"Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
stil wating
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Little hint: I'm sleeping then..
Btw, here just 2 hours..
Btw, here just 2 hours..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Yeah.. better go to bed..
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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2 hours then!
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Oh sounds really great ! I just hope this isn't so sad than your other fan fic on official foro.
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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I think this isn't so sad than my previous story.. But I can't promise anything...
Part 3
The voice said: “Why you sound so sad?”
I turned around. I was staring the most greenish eyes what I have ever seen. Then I realized that it was Javi, from D’Nash. I got quite a shock.
“What he was doing here? Why he was talking to me? I can’t believe that he is here and talking to me!“ I thought confusedly in my mind.
He had also noticed that something was wrong with me.
“Hey, what’s up?” he asked.
“Umm… Nothing..” I could finally answer.
“But can I sit here? This café is full of people now.” he asked.
“He wants to sit with me. He talks to me. Oh my god, what I’m going to do now? I’m fainting right away..” I thought.
Finally I could pull myself together.
“Oh, sure, of course you can.” I said fast.
He looked at me in a strange way but he didn’t say anything. I collected all papers from the table and made a space for him.
“So you just sounded quite sad. Do you want to tell me why? Javi asked.
“Umm.. Well.. I was looking a job and an apartment here but any of these papers weren’t anything.” I said. “And I have only a week time to find at least an apartment. And then I need to money to pay that apartment. Or otherwise I’ll have to go back home.” I continued.
“Home? You don’t live here?” Javi asked.
“No, I don’t. I’m just visiting here. I had planned to spend my whole summer here but I got fired from my job and now I have nothing left.” I answered.
“Why I’m telling all this to him? I’m sure he isn’t interested in my problems..” I thought again in my mind.
“Oh sorry, I have been very impolite. I haven’t even introduced myself. My name is Javi.” he said,
I introduced myself too and told him where I was from.
“Wow, you speak really fluent Spanish. You would never believe that you aren’t native Spanish-speaker.” he said.
“Oh, thanks.” I said and blushed.
I still couldn’t understand that I was speaking with Javi about my job and apartment searching. Then I decided that I’m not going to tell him anything about that I know who he really is.
“I’m not going to see him after this day, so why I should bother him all those fan-stuff things. He sees enough fans already. Also I didn’t know, why the hell I told him about my problems. I’m sure that my business doesn’t interest him at all.” I thought deep in my mind.
“You are quite quiet..?” Javi cut the silence.
“Oh, sorry, I was deep in my thoughts.” I said.
“You are worried about getting a job and an apartment?” he asked.
“Yeah, I had waited this thing so long. And now that I don’t have a job and an apartment is ruining my plans.” I said.
“What kind of job you are searching then?” Javi asked.
“Well, for example babysitting or housework etc.” I said. “Everything where you don’t need education is fine with me.” I continued.
“Housework.. Hmm.. Wait a minute, I’ll call one phone call.” Javi said and left to call.
I looked at the empty place in front of me.
“Is he going to get me a job or something…?” I thought.
Then he came back.
“Phone to this number, there might be some job to you.” he said.
“But, but…” was all I could say.
“But what..?” Javi asked.
“But why do you want to help me? You don’t even know me, I’m totally strange to you. And now you have solved my other problem.” I finally said.
“Well, you sounded so sad and then I noticed that maybe I can help you to get a job.” he said.
“Thanks about this, I really appreciate your act. And I want to make up your act someway.” I said.
“No problem. And you don’t need to make up it. It was my pleasure.” Javi said.
“Oh shit, I have to go now. But good luck for searching the apartment! Adíos!” he said and was gone right away.
“Adíos.” I whispered and stared the place, where he just sat.
“Those Spanish people really are very energetic.” I thought and looked the paper which Javi gave to me. I decided to call that number immediately.
Part 3
The voice said: “Why you sound so sad?”
I turned around. I was staring the most greenish eyes what I have ever seen. Then I realized that it was Javi, from D’Nash. I got quite a shock.
“What he was doing here? Why he was talking to me? I can’t believe that he is here and talking to me!“ I thought confusedly in my mind.
He had also noticed that something was wrong with me.
“Hey, what’s up?” he asked.
“Umm… Nothing..” I could finally answer.
“But can I sit here? This café is full of people now.” he asked.
“He wants to sit with me. He talks to me. Oh my god, what I’m going to do now? I’m fainting right away..” I thought.
Finally I could pull myself together.
“Oh, sure, of course you can.” I said fast.
He looked at me in a strange way but he didn’t say anything. I collected all papers from the table and made a space for him.
“So you just sounded quite sad. Do you want to tell me why? Javi asked.
“Umm.. Well.. I was looking a job and an apartment here but any of these papers weren’t anything.” I said. “And I have only a week time to find at least an apartment. And then I need to money to pay that apartment. Or otherwise I’ll have to go back home.” I continued.
“Home? You don’t live here?” Javi asked.
“No, I don’t. I’m just visiting here. I had planned to spend my whole summer here but I got fired from my job and now I have nothing left.” I answered.
“Why I’m telling all this to him? I’m sure he isn’t interested in my problems..” I thought again in my mind.
“Oh sorry, I have been very impolite. I haven’t even introduced myself. My name is Javi.” he said,
I introduced myself too and told him where I was from.
“Wow, you speak really fluent Spanish. You would never believe that you aren’t native Spanish-speaker.” he said.
“Oh, thanks.” I said and blushed.
I still couldn’t understand that I was speaking with Javi about my job and apartment searching. Then I decided that I’m not going to tell him anything about that I know who he really is.
“I’m not going to see him after this day, so why I should bother him all those fan-stuff things. He sees enough fans already. Also I didn’t know, why the hell I told him about my problems. I’m sure that my business doesn’t interest him at all.” I thought deep in my mind.
“You are quite quiet..?” Javi cut the silence.
“Oh, sorry, I was deep in my thoughts.” I said.
“You are worried about getting a job and an apartment?” he asked.
“Yeah, I had waited this thing so long. And now that I don’t have a job and an apartment is ruining my plans.” I said.
“What kind of job you are searching then?” Javi asked.
“Well, for example babysitting or housework etc.” I said. “Everything where you don’t need education is fine with me.” I continued.
“Housework.. Hmm.. Wait a minute, I’ll call one phone call.” Javi said and left to call.
I looked at the empty place in front of me.
“Is he going to get me a job or something…?” I thought.
Then he came back.
“Phone to this number, there might be some job to you.” he said.
“But, but…” was all I could say.
“But what..?” Javi asked.
“But why do you want to help me? You don’t even know me, I’m totally strange to you. And now you have solved my other problem.” I finally said.
“Well, you sounded so sad and then I noticed that maybe I can help you to get a job.” he said.
“Thanks about this, I really appreciate your act. And I want to make up your act someway.” I said.
“No problem. And you don’t need to make up it. It was my pleasure.” Javi said.
“Oh shit, I have to go now. But good luck for searching the apartment! Adíos!” he said and was gone right away.
“Adíos.” I whispered and stared the place, where he just sat.
“Those Spanish people really are very energetic.” I thought and looked the paper which Javi gave to me. I decided to call that number immediately.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Great part. I want MORE.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Yeahh... really great part!!! Moreeee!!!!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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great part
-mige-- Number of posts : 93
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Javi is really sweet!
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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I'm good mood today, so you get more.. And thanks all of those sweet comments..
Part 4
Couple days later…
I really have a job now. I called that number what Javi gave to me and there answered an old woman called María. After little talking she asked me to come to her house to discuss more closely. She gave her address and I left right away there. It was easy to find her house. I rang the doorbell. Soon I heard steps and the door opened. I noticed immediately that she was blind. And now I understood why she needed help of housework. I liked her right away. She was really affectionate, she didn’t get angry when I asked stupid questions or learnt to know where everything was. Salary wasn’t of course really big, but if I could find cheap apartment I could survive the summer. She told me that Javi had helped her before but he was too busy nowadays.
I told her that it wasn’t so sure that I could work to her, because I haven’t found an apartment yet. But she was so kind that she let me to work to her as long as I just could. So, now I’m trying to find the apartment double times harder than before.
My job included cleaning up the house and buying the groceries and etc. One day María asked if I could go to see the house’s attic. She herself couldn’t to go there. She said that it had been quite long time of cleaning it and if I could clean it, it would be very great. And she also promised to pay little extra for that. I went to see how dirty the attic was. I returned back to kitchen fast.
“I’m sorry, but anything big cleaning I can’t do there because there are so big boxes which should move. We would need a man power for that.” I explained.
“Okay, but I have an idea! Maybe Javi and his friends could help. They are very athletic.” María replied.
“Well, then I can do that.” I said and smiled.
“I’m seeing Javi again and maybe María meant Ony, Mikel and Basty when she talked about his friends.” I thought happy.
At couple days I used to work at María’s home. At first it was little difficult to remember to put all things back to their own places. But soon I used to that.
I haven’t found any apartment yet and I had only three days left to find that.
The one day María said that Javi and his friends were coming today to help me. Soon boys arrived and we started our job right away. And Javi really had Ony, Basty and Mikel with him. I was so excited about meeting them. But I didn’t dare to say anymore anything that I was their huge fan.
Couple hours later María invited us to coffee. And it was very welcome. My throat was dry as a desert and I had dust everywhere in my body. I got along very well with the boys. We were joking and laughing all the time and I could see that María enjoyed of our company. Soon we went again at the attic.
Finally I said: “I think this is enough for this day. If you could come tomorrow also it would be very great. Then I can survive myself of the rest.”
Boys looked each others.
“Umm… We have to work tomorrow, I’m sorry. But the day after tomorrow is free.” Javi said finally.
“It’s okay. So we’ll see day after tomorrow then.” I replied.
And that day would be also my final day at the free apartment…
Part 4
Couple days later…
I really have a job now. I called that number what Javi gave to me and there answered an old woman called María. After little talking she asked me to come to her house to discuss more closely. She gave her address and I left right away there. It was easy to find her house. I rang the doorbell. Soon I heard steps and the door opened. I noticed immediately that she was blind. And now I understood why she needed help of housework. I liked her right away. She was really affectionate, she didn’t get angry when I asked stupid questions or learnt to know where everything was. Salary wasn’t of course really big, but if I could find cheap apartment I could survive the summer. She told me that Javi had helped her before but he was too busy nowadays.
I told her that it wasn’t so sure that I could work to her, because I haven’t found an apartment yet. But she was so kind that she let me to work to her as long as I just could. So, now I’m trying to find the apartment double times harder than before.
My job included cleaning up the house and buying the groceries and etc. One day María asked if I could go to see the house’s attic. She herself couldn’t to go there. She said that it had been quite long time of cleaning it and if I could clean it, it would be very great. And she also promised to pay little extra for that. I went to see how dirty the attic was. I returned back to kitchen fast.
“I’m sorry, but anything big cleaning I can’t do there because there are so big boxes which should move. We would need a man power for that.” I explained.
“Okay, but I have an idea! Maybe Javi and his friends could help. They are very athletic.” María replied.
“Well, then I can do that.” I said and smiled.
“I’m seeing Javi again and maybe María meant Ony, Mikel and Basty when she talked about his friends.” I thought happy.
At couple days I used to work at María’s home. At first it was little difficult to remember to put all things back to their own places. But soon I used to that.
I haven’t found any apartment yet and I had only three days left to find that.
The one day María said that Javi and his friends were coming today to help me. Soon boys arrived and we started our job right away. And Javi really had Ony, Basty and Mikel with him. I was so excited about meeting them. But I didn’t dare to say anymore anything that I was their huge fan.
Couple hours later María invited us to coffee. And it was very welcome. My throat was dry as a desert and I had dust everywhere in my body. I got along very well with the boys. We were joking and laughing all the time and I could see that María enjoyed of our company. Soon we went again at the attic.
Finally I said: “I think this is enough for this day. If you could come tomorrow also it would be very great. Then I can survive myself of the rest.”
Boys looked each others.
“Umm… We have to work tomorrow, I’m sorry. But the day after tomorrow is free.” Javi said finally.
“It’s okay. So we’ll see day after tomorrow then.” I replied.
And that day would be also my final day at the free apartment…
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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aaaw! so sweet of Javi and the boys to help
i really like this story!
i really like this story!
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I dont like it. I LLLOOOOVVVEEE it. Great part and obviously great story. i hope she will find an apartment soon.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Wonderful part!! lissää lissää lissäääääää!!!!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Mindex wrote:Wonderful part!! lissää lissää lissäääääää!!!!
... what she says!!
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Lisää means in English more..
Like Enemmän, what Sergo uses..
Like Enemmän, what Sergo uses..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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I love this story!
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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You've got already two parts today.. So I think next part comes next year..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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wtf?
no way
no way
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Hey, I'm posting this story.. Not you!
So, just be patient...
There's no point to send the whole story in few days...
So, just be patient...
There's no point to send the whole story in few days...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
how many parts are there?
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