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"Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part

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Post  Heli Mon Dec 31, 2007 9:19 pm

I don't know actually but over 20..
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Post  Sergo Mon Dec 31, 2007 9:21 pm

so. post now Very Happy
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Post  Heli Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:17 pm

Part 5

Those couple days went fast. I searched an apartment all my free time. But I still couldn’t find that. It was the day when we were going to end the cleaning of the attic. I had already told to María that I must go back home. She was sad about that but even she didn’t know anybody who could rent me an apartment. I have already booked a flight ticket to home.

When the boys arrived we started to clean the rest of the attic. And soon there were dust nowhere. I was a little bit sad that I must go back home. I had all my things with me because my flight was leaving at the evening. But something good had happened after all. I had met D’Nash even they didn’t know that I was their fan.

Javi noticed that I was little down. So, I told him that I haven’t found any apartment, so I had to fly back home tonight.
“Tonight?” Javi asked. “Why you didn’t tell me about that?”
“You have your own problems too. I didn’t want to concern you about my problems.” I replied.
“But you wouldn’t want to leave?” he asked.
“Of course not. But I have to.” I said sadly.
Silence fell between us. We were still at the attic.
“Well I have an idea. But I don’t know do you like this or not…” Javi said finally.
“Tell me. Then you’ll know.” I said.
“You don’t have an apartment but I have. And I have one free bedroom. So, if you like, you could move to my house. Of course it isn’t the same as the own apartment. But I have kinda busy summer because of my job, so you would be on your own quite much.” Javi explained.
I was really surprised.
“Was he offering his other bedroom to me? Even he has known me only a week.” I thought.
“So, what do you think?” Javi asked then.
“Errm… Umm… I’m totally speechless.” I said finally. “I just don’t understand why you want to help me?”
“I don’t know it myself either.” Javi answered. “It just came to my mind and seemed good idea.”
“I have just one question. What is the rent of your bedroom?” I asked.
“Naah, you don’t need to pay me anything.” Javi replied.
“Of course I have to” I said.
“We can argue that later. But are you coming or not?” he asked.
“Well, I shouldn’t miss offer like this, so I’m coming!” I said and smiled.
“Great! Now, let’s go to downstairs to tell this happy news.” Javi said.
“Okay, but you’ll go first. I’ll cancel my ticket booking right away.” I said and called to the aircompany.
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Post  x Imke x Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:20 pm

She can go in Javi's other bedroom?! Shocked
Sounds like heaven! What a Face
Ooh this part was great just as always! Very Happy

Edit; I'm the first one yaaay! MrGreen


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Post  Kath Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:20 pm

aaaw! javi is so nice! MrGreen
great part!
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Post  girl1035 Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:33 pm

Great. Javi is awesome. "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part - Page 3 Icon_biggrin

Happy new year guys.
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Post  Kath Mon Dec 31, 2007 10:37 pm

Happy New Year tooo everyone! MrGreen have a good'un!
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Post  Sergo Tue Jan 01, 2008 1:15 am

Greaat What a Face
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Post  Prisca Tue Jan 01, 2008 2:18 am

already in javi's house Laughing Laughing

loved this parts Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Tue Jan 01, 2008 5:05 am

Javi's fast Cool
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Post  Mindex Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:42 am

MrGreen Yeaahhh... go Javi!!! Laughing lissäälissää!!! Laughing Cool
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Post  Heli Tue Jan 01, 2008 2:56 pm

Part 6

Little later I joined with others to downstairs.
“We heard that you are staying here.” María said. “And I hope you can continue to working here.”
“Of course I can!” I said happily.
I was really relieved that I finally had house where to sleep. Even it was Javi’s and he didn’t want any payment for that.

Finally Javi suggested: “Maybe we should go that you can unpack your stuff tonight.”
“Yeah, that would be good idea.” I said.
“But I took Mikel, Ony and Basty at first at their homes and I’ll pick you up then.” he said.
“Okay, no hurry.” I answered.

After they had left María winked and said: “Javi is really nice guy.”
“Yeah, he really is as a FRIEND.” I replied.
“Haven’t I told you that I can ‘see’ sometimes in the future? I have sometimes little feelings what is happening and lately I got that kind of.”
“And what did you ‘see’ then?” I asked little curious.
“Nothing special. Here was just feeling on the air that something is happening to you. Something big.” she answered.
“Well, that is very welcome. My life is always been this same.” I said.

“By the way, do you know what they are doing for their living?” María asked suddenly.
“Well.. Ermm.. Actually yes.” I said and blushed.
“Why you blushed?” María asked curious.
“Well, I know that they are popular boyband, but they don’t know that I know it.” I explained.
“What? You haven’t told Javi about that?” she asked.
“No, because I thought that I won’t see him anymore so I thought that there’s no point to tell him that I’m their huge fan.” I replied.
“You are their huge fan? Well, I can give you hint that tell him. Even now you’re going to live with him.” María said.
“No, I won’t tell him. I should have told him right away when I met him. But now it’s too late for that.” I said.
“I think it’s not too late. But it isn’t my business, so I won’t argue.” she said.
“Great.” I said.
At the same moment Javi came back.
“So, are you ready for see your new home?” he asked.
“Of course! Let’s go!” I said.
“You can keep free day tomorrow, so you can used to your new home.” María said.
“Oh, really? Great, thanks!” I said and hugged her. “So we’ll see at the day after tomorrow then.”
“Yes, goodbye!” she said.
“Bye!” we answered in one voice with Javi.
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Post  girl1035 Tue Jan 01, 2008 3:07 pm

I love it. "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part - Page 3 Icon_biggrin Great part.
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Post  Prisca Tue Jan 01, 2008 4:26 pm

great part Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Tue Jan 01, 2008 5:33 pm

Wonderful!!! :doublethumbsup ja lissää!!!! MrGreen
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Post  x Imke x Tue Jan 01, 2008 5:49 pm

Lovely!! Very Happy
This story is so good!! MrGreen
Didn't I said that before? Neutral
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Post  Hen «3 Javi Tue Jan 01, 2008 6:48 pm

Amazing parts! Very Happy Javi is really sweet Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Tue Jan 01, 2008 8:05 pm

Great Very Happy
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Post  Heli Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:48 pm

Part 7

When I saw Javi’s car, I got a shock. He has a really cool sport car. And the colour was of course silver.
“Wow, you have really cool car.” I said. “And if your house is same kind than this, I’m speechless.”
“Thanks. And no, my house isn’t as cool as my car. But almost.” he winked.
“Well, soon I can check it up on.” I said.

After fifteen minutes we were there. I saw kinda normal apartment building. Javi lead the way to his house. He had really beautiful home. There was a big living room with huge TV and stereos. And kitchen was very modern. Only my bedroom was quite simple. There was only a bed and wardrobe. And couple small tables. His house was on the top of the floor. And he had little surprise for me. His apartment has stairs to the roof. When I got there I couldn’t believe my eyes. It was incredible. There were big swimming pool and some chairs to sunbathe.

“This includes to your home?” I asked surprised.
“Yes, and that’s why I like this. You can sunbathe and nobody sees it.” he said and winked.
“Wow, I’m totally speechless. I’m glad that I didn’t miss your offer.” I said and smiled.
“Just wait till you can taste my cooking.” Javi said and grinned.
“Right..” I said. “And now you’re boasting yourself.” I laughed.
“Well, everybody says I’m good cooker, so then I should believe them.” he said.
“Well, we’ll see it then… But now I want to unpack my things. And I haven’t slept very well these last nights, so I’m quite tired.” I said and yawned.
We went back to in. I started to unpack my things.
Suddenly Javi yelled from the kitchen: “Are you hungry? I could cook something little.”
“Actually I’m, so it would be very great. And then I can say are you good cooker or not.” I yelled back and laughed.

When I arrived at the kitchen, Javi was ready already. And he really was good cooker. He had made some pasta and salad.
“I have to agree with others. You really are great cooker.” I smiled.
“Well, thanks.” Javi said.
“But I think I’m going to bed now. I’m really tired.” I said and yawned again.
“Okay. Good night and sweet dreams.” he said.
“Good night.” I replied and left from the kitchen.
I was so tired that I fell asleep right away when I put my head on the pillow. I didn’t even hear that Javi knocked the door little after when I had left. He opened the door quiet.
“Aaw. She is so sweet when she sleeps.” he thought.
Javi left a little note to the table next to her bed. He looked at her for a while.
“Buenas noches.” he whispered and closed the door quietly after him.
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Post  Kath Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:51 pm

Javi's house sounds awesome Cool
great parts! MrGreen so cute!
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Post  x Imke x Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:51 pm

Ooooh Javi is so sweet and cute!! MrGreen MrGreen
What was on the note?! Shocked Very Happy
That's a yell for more Cool
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Post  girl1035 Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:53 pm

Too bad I cant write here the sounds Im releasing when I read this. This is so extremely great. Javi forever
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Post  Prisca Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:53 pm

ohhh so sweet Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Hen «3 Javi Tue Jan 01, 2008 9:54 pm

Oh Shocked More Javi is so sweet! Very Happy
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Post  Mindex Tue Jan 01, 2008 10:04 pm

In love He is so sweet!!! *sigh* yea, and moreeeeee... just can't wait to read moreeee... Very Happy
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