"Heart tells the truth" -Part 20 THE END
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Re: "Heart tells the truth" -Part 20 THE END
Maybe now???
tuLicia- Number of posts : 401
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maybe now would be nice
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Okay, you'll get the last part now...
Part 20
At the morning I woke up and noticed that Javi was already awaken and staring at me.
- How long you’ve stared at me? I asked in sleepy voice.
- Not long, he smiled.
- You could have woken me or then you would have made breakfast for us, I said.
- It was so nice to look your sleeping. And I don’t know where everything here is so it would be little hard to make breakfast, he smiled and gave a kiss to me.
- Mmm…Okay I’ll make the breakfast, I said and left to kitchen,
We spent almost all day at my house. But when we planned to make dinner I noticed I didn’t have anything what I could cook. So I told to Javi that we must go to supermarket.
- If we would go to my place, I could cook something for us, he suggested.
- You? Cook something? I said surprised.
- Yes. I’m good cooker, he smiled.
- You never told that to me, I said little annoyed.
- You never asked, Javi said.
- Well, okay. Let’s go, I said.
Javi lived in the other side of the town. So we took my car again.
Javi really was good cooker. He made really delicious food. After the dinner I wandered in his house. He had huge TV, great stereos and speakers all around the living room. And the movie self. It was full of movies, actually horror movies. Men. Why they loved to watch horror? Javi came there and saw me looking his movies.
- Do you want to watch something? he asked.
- NO! Absolutely not. I hate horror, I said.
- I can protect you of those scaring things, he smiled.
- No, no and again no! I said.
- Okay. Maybe TV has something better then, he said and turned the TV on. – Hey, football! he said and sat on the couch.
- No! I said and took the remote control from him.
- You don’t like football either? he asked surprised.
- No I don’t, I shook my head.
But then I found something good from the TV.
- Hey! Ice hockey! I yelled and sat next to Javi.
- Noo! I don’t like ice hockey, he complained.
- But I’m as a guest here so I’ll choose, I grinned.
- Okay, okay. I’ll give up, he said.
- Can I take a little nap during it, he asked.
- Sure, I said.
He lied on the couch and his head was in my lap. Soon he had fallen asleep. How cute he was. I watched the ice hockey match and at the same time I fingered his hair. When the match was over I started to tickle Javi.
- You’ve slept enough, I said when he woke up.
- What ? Hey, this is unfair, I didn’t sleep last night almost at all, he complained.
- And you can’t sleep this night either, I smiled naughty.
And Javi smiled understandingly.
- Oh, that’s what you mean, he laughed.
In the middle of the night we both were awaken.
- I’m just curious to know, I started, that where has disappeared that annoying person who I met at first? I asked.
- I don’t know, Javi answered.
- But you were so annoying then and now you’re just teasing me kindly, I said.
- Well, maybe you have changed me, Javi smiled.
- No, I won’t believe that. I want to know the truth, I replied.
- Hmm…Well…Something your acting made me so annoying at the first time. But when I realized how interesting person you were I regretted my behaviour. But I had to keep it on, he explained. - But when I got to know you better I couldn’t be that annoying person anymore, he smiled.
- Good. Because if you had acted any longer like that, I would have hit you straight to your face, I grinned.
- You wouldn’t have done that…Javi said.
- Yes, I would have, I laughed.
But then we both became serious. We looked at straight to our eyes.
- I love you, we said in one voice.
We both burst laughing. This was so ironic. I kissed him. He hugged me tight.
- Just keep me near and never let me go, I mumbled against his chest.
- No I won’t. Never, Javi answered, kissed my forehead and hugged me even more tightly.
Epilogue
My life isn’t so messed up anymore. I live with Javi and everything is fine. Daniel isn’t messing up our life anymore. Anyway he tried so many times to talk with me and he came to see me at my work because he knew that Javi wasn’t there then. But finally I said that if he won’t leave me alone I’ll call a police and blame him for disturbing my life. And after that I haven’t seen him. Maybe he had something troubles with police so he didn’t want to meet them. And Ony and I are good friends now. He also realized that we wouldn’t be a perfect couple. And I think he has found some interesting girl even he doesn’t confess that.
I still have lots of work but I can do most of them at home, so we can spend time together with Javi. And he is busy with D’Nash, so we’re trying to spend as much time together as we can. I’m very satisfied for my life at the moment. Even we’re still arguing and teasing each others. Other people watch us quite weirdly sometimes but we don’t care about that. It’s our way to show that we love and care each others. I’m glad that I believed my heart at once. Because it’s true, heart tells the truth. Sometimes it’s just difficult to see and understand what your heart is saying…
~THE END~
And thanks a lot all of you who read this! You don't know how I appreciate it!
Part 20
At the morning I woke up and noticed that Javi was already awaken and staring at me.
- How long you’ve stared at me? I asked in sleepy voice.
- Not long, he smiled.
- You could have woken me or then you would have made breakfast for us, I said.
- It was so nice to look your sleeping. And I don’t know where everything here is so it would be little hard to make breakfast, he smiled and gave a kiss to me.
- Mmm…Okay I’ll make the breakfast, I said and left to kitchen,
We spent almost all day at my house. But when we planned to make dinner I noticed I didn’t have anything what I could cook. So I told to Javi that we must go to supermarket.
- If we would go to my place, I could cook something for us, he suggested.
- You? Cook something? I said surprised.
- Yes. I’m good cooker, he smiled.
- You never told that to me, I said little annoyed.
- You never asked, Javi said.
- Well, okay. Let’s go, I said.
Javi lived in the other side of the town. So we took my car again.
Javi really was good cooker. He made really delicious food. After the dinner I wandered in his house. He had huge TV, great stereos and speakers all around the living room. And the movie self. It was full of movies, actually horror movies. Men. Why they loved to watch horror? Javi came there and saw me looking his movies.
- Do you want to watch something? he asked.
- NO! Absolutely not. I hate horror, I said.
- I can protect you of those scaring things, he smiled.
- No, no and again no! I said.
- Okay. Maybe TV has something better then, he said and turned the TV on. – Hey, football! he said and sat on the couch.
- No! I said and took the remote control from him.
- You don’t like football either? he asked surprised.
- No I don’t, I shook my head.
But then I found something good from the TV.
- Hey! Ice hockey! I yelled and sat next to Javi.
- Noo! I don’t like ice hockey, he complained.
- But I’m as a guest here so I’ll choose, I grinned.
- Okay, okay. I’ll give up, he said.
- Can I take a little nap during it, he asked.
- Sure, I said.
He lied on the couch and his head was in my lap. Soon he had fallen asleep. How cute he was. I watched the ice hockey match and at the same time I fingered his hair. When the match was over I started to tickle Javi.
- You’ve slept enough, I said when he woke up.
- What ? Hey, this is unfair, I didn’t sleep last night almost at all, he complained.
- And you can’t sleep this night either, I smiled naughty.
And Javi smiled understandingly.
- Oh, that’s what you mean, he laughed.
In the middle of the night we both were awaken.
- I’m just curious to know, I started, that where has disappeared that annoying person who I met at first? I asked.
- I don’t know, Javi answered.
- But you were so annoying then and now you’re just teasing me kindly, I said.
- Well, maybe you have changed me, Javi smiled.
- No, I won’t believe that. I want to know the truth, I replied.
- Hmm…Well…Something your acting made me so annoying at the first time. But when I realized how interesting person you were I regretted my behaviour. But I had to keep it on, he explained. - But when I got to know you better I couldn’t be that annoying person anymore, he smiled.
- Good. Because if you had acted any longer like that, I would have hit you straight to your face, I grinned.
- You wouldn’t have done that…Javi said.
- Yes, I would have, I laughed.
But then we both became serious. We looked at straight to our eyes.
- I love you, we said in one voice.
We both burst laughing. This was so ironic. I kissed him. He hugged me tight.
- Just keep me near and never let me go, I mumbled against his chest.
- No I won’t. Never, Javi answered, kissed my forehead and hugged me even more tightly.
Epilogue
My life isn’t so messed up anymore. I live with Javi and everything is fine. Daniel isn’t messing up our life anymore. Anyway he tried so many times to talk with me and he came to see me at my work because he knew that Javi wasn’t there then. But finally I said that if he won’t leave me alone I’ll call a police and blame him for disturbing my life. And after that I haven’t seen him. Maybe he had something troubles with police so he didn’t want to meet them. And Ony and I are good friends now. He also realized that we wouldn’t be a perfect couple. And I think he has found some interesting girl even he doesn’t confess that.
I still have lots of work but I can do most of them at home, so we can spend time together with Javi. And he is busy with D’Nash, so we’re trying to spend as much time together as we can. I’m very satisfied for my life at the moment. Even we’re still arguing and teasing each others. Other people watch us quite weirdly sometimes but we don’t care about that. It’s our way to show that we love and care each others. I’m glad that I believed my heart at once. Because it’s true, heart tells the truth. Sometimes it’s just difficult to see and understand what your heart is saying…
~THE END~
And thanks a lot all of you who read this! You don't know how I appreciate it!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: "Heart tells the truth" -Part 20 THE END
I love the end!!!!! Thanks for this great story!!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh
a love end
a love end
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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aaawwwwww <3
so great ending
so great ending
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Aw...it's end...it's so lovely oh..Thanks for great story! :doublethumbsup
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No, thanks for reading it!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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No it's over!
I loved the story though
I loved the story though
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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I can't continue it forever so it's kinda predictable that it ended someday....
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Wow. I loved every part of this story. And, to be honest, I don't want continuation. It's perfect the way it is.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: "Heart tells the truth" -Part 20 THE END
awwwwwww my god.... sooo amazing... love this story!!!! thank you 100 times!!!
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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so instead of continuation... maybe a new story
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Thanks.. And it's not so nice to write when everything is finally okay between them. It would be so boring to read also...girl1035 wrote:Wow. I loved every part of this story. And, to be honest, I don't want continuation. It's perfect the way it is.
I'm sorry, but noup... I'm not going to write anything in Engilsh for a while. I don't have time and no inspiration, but maybe someday...Prisca wrote:so instead of continuation... maybe a new story
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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I simply loved the end!!!!
Thanks for writing this story, Heli!
I loved it!!
Thanks for writing this story, Heli!
I loved it!!
Re: "Heart tells the truth" -Part 20 THE END
Aww Lovely end
Thanks for writing the story!
Thanks for writing the story!
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Woow!!!Your story was really amazing
Thank you a lot!
Thank you a lot!
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Heli wrote:I'm sorry, but noup... I'm not going to write anything in Engilsh for a while. I don't have time and no inspiration, but maybe someday...Prisca wrote:so instead of continuation... maybe a new story
someday is good
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Thanks a lot Imke, Riikka and Laura!
And Pris, yes someday is good..
Never say never...
And Pris, yes someday is good..
Never say never...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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This story was amazing! I loved it
Thank you
Thank you
gabrielle- Number of posts : 198
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Aaaaaaw
Amazing story, girl
Amazing story, girl
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Thanks girls!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Kyllä meidän Heli osaa tän homman!!
Thank youuuuuuu, it was fantastic!!
Thank youuuuuuu, it was fantastic!!
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Wow that was very good story. Or can I say, it's was perfect!! And I have to say too that story end for a great part. I saw them always when I read that story, it means that I like it very much!!
Kyllä me suomalaiset osataan, eikö? :doublethumbsup
Kyllä me suomalaiset osataan, eikö? :doublethumbsup
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