A Romantic Story With Mikel! Part 15 - The End!

yeah i could do that. actually im gunna put that in
actually ive just thought of a twist... it might go on for a bit longer after all!

good

YEEEEEEEEES

dnashrocks wrote:what, i cant take back that i said another part today?
i could just delete the post... and no one else would know except me and you

i dont think this story is gunna last much longer though

I know you said that too
And if you delete that post I'm gonna tell to everyone you said that cause they always believe me

yeah, i eint gunna delete anymore

Good Imke

ive kept my promise, im writing a new part now

Yeeeees

Yaaaaaayy!!

Part 11

“Are you ready?” he asked
“Yep.. come on!”
He leant in to kiss me.
“Woah – dude what ya doin?” I pulled away
“I thought that was what you wanted…”
“Nope.” I got up want went to my wardrobe. “Put this on!”
I chucked him a cowboy hat. I put on a feather boa.
“This is what I wanted, when I said a show I mean a show! Come on, im gunna teach you a dance!”
“Are you serious?”
“Yep!”
“I cant do this!”
“Don’t lie to me boy, you dance allll the time! And you can salsa!”
“yeah ok…damn it!”
“Right follow me...”
So I taught him the dance, and he didn’t hold back. However, I had a trick up my sleeve.
“And then we end like this.”
We stood close to each other, with my feather boa around him.
“Oh look where we are… what a coincidence!”
“What?”
I gestured up to the ceiling.
“Mistletoe!... clever.” He laughed.
“Well you know what we have to do know…”
“I sure do!”
We leant in, I could smell his breath…mmm minty…he was obviously serious when he said about brushing his teeth all the time. We kissed… slowly, passionately, all the waiting of the past day was let out. I pushed of his hat as I ran my hand over his head, I was really getting into this! Then my foot popped, like it does in the movies. Heaven. We slowly came to and end and hugged each other, it was so cute.
He suddenly pulled away.
“What?”
“That is going to make leaving so much harder!” he said. “I can’t do that to myself. I cannot do it to YOU.
“Then don’t leave.” I muttered.
“Wha?”
“Then don’t leave.” I said, louder this time.
“I have to, don’t you see. I have to leave at 12 midnight”
“No you don’t. Not if you don’t know what time it is.” I pulled out the plug to my radio alarm clock.
“That’s so clever hun!” he hugged me
“It wasn’t my idea ”
“Oh wait! Even if I stay past midnight I wont be able to stay long term, because eventually someone will be sent to get me!”
“Like who?”
“I dunno, I work for a company called “Rent-a-Prez!” and they will send someone.”
“Oh well, we will cross that bridge when we come to it, lets just focus on now.”
“Sounds like a plan!”

This is so sweet!!
Mikel sounds like a kind of spy working for a company and sneaking into others houses having camera's around

whoaa that was probably the longest english sentence I've ever said!!

Oh before I forget: more

haha

not sure where the next part is coming

mooOOOOooOoo0000000000o00000ooooOOOOOOOOOooo00o0o0o00o0o000o0000o0OO0OOOOO RE.... :afro:

He leant in to kiss me.
“Woah – dude what ya doin?” I pulled away
“I thought that was what you wanted…”
“Nope.”



Oh! I read more now... Hehehe

Wieeeeeee

okiiiies... ill start on the next part if you wish...

edit: actually i wont, my eyes are stinging and i have NO idea whats gunna happen next i need a dollop of inspiration, new part soon as, sorry

We wish!

I'll wait. this is so great story that it's worth to wait.

you took of the clock... good


i hope tomorrow have another part to read

yeah new part today, sorry peeps. i felt really ill last night, but a new part today

Part 12

“So what do you want to do?” he asked
“I dunno, what can we do? I mean, its 11 o’clock on Christmas day!”
“I’m hungry, are you hungry?” he asked
“A little.”
“Come with me…” he took my hand and went downstairs. His hands were large and really soft.
“What cream do you use on you hands?”
“Oh I don’t, it must be all the sea water.” He winked.
We got to the door to dining room.
“Right, now close your eyes.”
“Why?”
“Just do it! Why are you always so awkward?” he laughed.
“Ok…and I’m not awkward!”
“No peeping!”
I heard the door creak open, I could smell something… but I didn’t know what.
“Ok now stand their and wait a minute.”
I felt him let go of my hand. What was he doing?
“Now you can open them.”
He stood their with a bunch of 12 red roses. He gave them to me
“For you, when the last one dies, our love will die with it.”
“oh mannn, roses don’t last that long!”
“You will be surprised!” he laughed. “Now take a seat.”
I sat at the dining room table. It was decorated with a silk table cloth and there were two place mats. There was a candle as the centre piece, it was scented.
“Its beautiful.” I said “You did all this for me?”
“You better not spill anything on it! Anything for you…” he said with a smile. “Wine?”
“Oh yes please!”
He poured us both a glass of red.
“The dinner will be ready in a minute, we’re having spag bol.”
“Oh nice!” I said. OMG no, that’s not nice! He is going to watch me eat spaghetti! How revolting! Omg. I thought.
“So… has your Christmas turned around?” he asked.
“Totally, thank you so much!” I kissed him.
ting!
“Ok, dinners ready!” he got up, and got the meals out of the oven and dished it up.
“How did you do this, how did you know I would be talking to you?” I asked.
“Well, I did it when you were asleep and I just had a feeling we would be friends again.”
“Right…”
We started eating.
“Ive got a surprise for you.” He said.

Ooooo. Spaghetti
I'm looking forward

Part 13

I heard the most angelic singing, but I don’t know where it was coming from. It was getting closer. Voices blending in the most perfect harmony.
“Whos that?” I asked.
“You’ll see…”
The door opened, Ony walked in, followed by Basty then Javi.
“Oh my Lord!! I said in shock. I almost choked on my spaghetti!
They were singing, so beautifully. They were singing in Spanish, so I had virtually NO idea what they were singing but it was lovely. They finished. I applauded!
“Come join us!” I said
“No, we are here to sing!” smiled Basty.
“Yep, I asked them too.” Mikel said as he held my hand. “Now come on, eat up!”
I did as I was told. I know it sounds mean, but I soon forgot that the other guys were there, I was lost in Mikel’s green eyes.
We soon finished eating and Mikel cleared away the plates and went and had a huddled conversation with the other three. It was hushed… they were so talking about me.
“Hello, im still here!” I said with a smile and a wave.
“Yes, right!” Mikel said. “This one is for you…”
“5,6,7,8.” Javi said.
“Close you eyes, make a wish, and blow out the candle light, for tonight is just your night, we are going to celebrate all through the night….” They were singing I’ll Make Love To You, by Boyz II Men! My favourite song!
Then Mikel started to sing a solo…
“I submit to your demands, I’ll do anything girl, you need only ask. I’ll make love you, like you want me to, ill hold you tight, baby all through the night, ill make love to you, like you want me to and I will not let go until you tell me to.”
They finished the rest of the song together. By this time I was in floods of tears.
“And I mean every word.” Mikel said as he hugged me.
We started to kiss, long and passionate.
“Ahem.” Ony coughed.
“Get a room!” Basty muttered.
It didn’t matter, they could watch if they wanted. I had fallen for Mikel, hook, line and sinker.

but I soon forgot that the other guys were there

Forget Ony, Javi and Basty who are standing next to you...?? is that even possible??
Great part again

haha, i dunno!
thanks

that song is perfect.... perfect for the night and the boys singing it