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A Romantic Story With Mikel! Part 15 - The End!

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Post  Sergo Fri Dec 28, 2007 9:20 pm

The other guys came? Shocked

Hahahha Onys cough Laughing
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Post  Onyone Sat Dec 29, 2007 12:52 am

I love this part!
gonna read the rest now
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:18 am

Part 14 - the last but one

After we had finished our moment of passion, the other three joined us for drinks.
“Mikel, we have some bery bad news.” said Ony.
“Yeah, we didn’t want to have to tell you, tonight of all nights.” Javi said as he patted Mikel on the back.
“It doesn’t matter, tell me, we can handle it.” He said as he held my hand on top of the table.
“We have to take you back.” Said Basty
“WHAT?”
“Its not that big of a surprise, you knew you would have to go eventually.” Said Ony
“I know, but we though I had at least a day.” Mikel said.
“Its ok babe. You have to go. You have your career and adoring fans to think of.” I said
“No, its not ok, I don’t want to leave.”
“I know, but you will have plenty of opportunities to come over here, and I will have a few to go over to Spain.”
“Who are we kidding? We have lives and commitments.” He said.
“Im sorry, you guys make such a beautiful couple.” Javi said.
“Mikel, we told to have you back at 3 o’clock and it’s already 2. We have to leave soon.” Ony said.
“Ok, fine.” He said. “I want you to have this.”
He gave me a watch, his watch.
“Everytime you look at this watch, I want you to think of the good bits of the time we spent together.” Mikel said.
“I will. I also promise I will wait for you.” I said.
“No I don’t, I want you to live your life, I have no idea when we will be able to see each other again.” He said.
“But…” he cut me off as he put his fingers on my lips.
“But nothing, remember, when the last of the roses dies, our love will die with it. Keep them safe.”
“I will guard them with my life.”
Each of the boys gave me a kiss on the cheek goodbye. Mikel kissed me, the most passionate kiss in the history of kisses.
“I love you.” He said.
“Te queiro, mi amor.” I said in return as I started to cry.
“You are the hardest thing I have ever had to give up.”
“I know, it is the same for me. I mean it. I really do love you. Adios.”
I turned my back as he walked out of the door.
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Post  Onyone Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:21 am

Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad
sooooooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet Very Happy
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Post  Prisca Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:23 am

ooohhh... he is gone Sad
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:27 am

yep... Crying or Very sad
im in the mood for writing, shall i write the next part and post it or wait till tomorrow?
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Post  Onyone Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:28 am

do it now Crying or Very sad
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Post  Prisca Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:29 am

now Sad
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:30 am

okies, off i go.
its so werid i wanna write, why cant it be like this when im in english lessons! Rolling Eyes Laughing
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:48 am

Part 15 - The End


1 year later.

Christmas Eve.

I sat bolt up right in bed. What was that? It was now silent. It wasn’t a second ago. There it was again. What was moving downstairs? Maybe mum, putting out our presents? No it couldn’t be, I can hear her snoring. There it was again. No way could I go back to sleep now. My ears filled with silence. It was broken. Someone was coughing.
I silently slipped out of bed. I tip toed across the landing. Desperate not to be heard. I had to be as quite as a mouse when going down the stairs. I had to tread on specific places or otherwise the stairs would creak. I stopped at the entrance to the living room. There was the coughing again. I could hear the faint sound of someone struggling with something. The bastard was trying to steal our presents!
Hang on. Hasn’t this happened before? I looked at my watch my beloved had given me. It was half eleven. This time 365 days ago, mikel was climbing down my chimney.
I went into the living room, and I nearly died of shock.
It was mikel sat there, on the windowsill. Where he first serenaded me. I sat down next to him and gave him the biggest hug ever! I was crying, tears coming thick and fast. I couldn’t let him see me like this.
“First ill get a tissue.” I went upstairs and came back down with something special.
“you still have it!” he said.
“of course I do, it was very smart of you!”
I was holding a plastic rose. It was identical to the other 11, but of course, would never die.
I kissed him.
“Thankyou for coming back!” I said “but how long is it for?”
“it is for ever.” He said. “Well, as long as you will have me! My days were grey without you, and I never want to leave you again. I’m back for good.”
“I don’t want to leave you either!”
We kissed again.
There was a shooting star. I wished that it would stay like this forever again. Hopefully second time lucky.
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Post  Prisca Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:49 am

ohh so sweet Sad Sad Sad
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Post  Onyone Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:50 am

sooooooo sweet end Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad

loved it!
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:54 am

thanks Very Happy
my first completed fanfic! Laughing
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Post  Prisca Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:55 am

yup... now you have another one to start Laughing
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Post  Onyone Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:57 am

agree with Priss Very Happy
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 1:58 am

yeah...i think ill close the poll tomorrow and start writing Wink
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Post  Prisca Sat Dec 29, 2007 2:00 am

yupyyyyy
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Post  Sergo Sat Dec 29, 2007 2:56 am

Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaw What a Face
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Post  Riikka Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:03 pm

That was so sweet! and clever. A plastic rose Very Happy
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:06 pm

glad you liked it Very Happy
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Post  Sergo Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:08 pm

So your love never dies Cool
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:12 pm

exactly MrGreen
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Post  Sergo Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:16 pm

Did Mikel give you a plastic one or did you change it? Laughing
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Post  Kath Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:17 pm

he gave me a plastic one! Laughing
11 real and 1 fake, he knew that our love would last forever like the rose Cool
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Post  Sergo Sat Dec 29, 2007 3:58 pm

How clever Cool
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