"Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
Oh Javi sounds so sweet!
And the house sounds soo cool
Great part!
Enemmän
And the house sounds soo cool
Great part!
Enemmän
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Wow. Lucky her! What is there on the note? I wanna knowww
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
You'll know maybe later today...
If I have time...
If I have time...
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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I hope you have some time then
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Part 8
Next morning I slept late. When I woke up I didn’t know where I was at first. But then I remembered that I was in Javi’s home. Then I noticed that little note on the table.
“Was it there when I came to sleep last night? Or is it appeared there during the night?” I thought.
It was from Javi. He wrote that he had to work today so I should spend my day alone. And I could be here as this was my own house.
So I ate breakfast and then I continue arranging my own things. Then I started to look what was everywhere. He had lots of books and CD’s in the living room. And those stereos and that TV. I loved them. And the kitchen included all what I have ever dreamed. This house was just like my dream house. So, I’m going to take all over of living here. But the best part was the swimming pool at the roof.
It was warm sunny day, so I decided to sunbathe a little and read some good book which I had found of Javi’s bookshelf. And so my day went on. I cooked myself a little food and then I went back to roof. I had my laptop computer also with me so I surfed on the net. I sent mail to my friend and told her that everything was fine. And I couldn’t keep it inside of me that I was living with Javi. But I trusted my friend that she wasn’t going to tell it anybody.
When the night came I returned back to in. I watched TV, surfed on the net and listened music. I was still so tired that when I watched TV I fall asleep on the couch.
Couple hours later Javi came back to home. He noticed that TV was on and she had fallen asleep on the couch.
“I must move her to her bed or otherwise she has backache tomorrow because of the couch.” he thought.
Javi lifted her carefully on his arms and carried her to her bed.
I woke at the morning and I was lively right away. I had slept enough so I wasn’t tired anymore. When I walked trough the living room I got some kind of memory flash. I remembered that I was really tired when I watched the TV last night. But I didn’t remember that I would have walk to my bed. But there I woke up.
“Weird.” I thought in my mind.
I started to make breakfast. Just coffee and sandwiches were enough. I was almost ready when Javi entered the kitchen. He looked quite sleepy.
“Good morning. Did you sleep well?” I asked.
“Urmh… Yes, when I finally fall asleep.” he said and yawned.
“I didn’t hear when you came back.” I said.
“Yeah, I noticed that. You were sleeping at the couch. And I have sometimes spent night on it and next day I had huge backache. And I didn’t want to you have it so I carried you to your own bed.” Javi explained.
“Ehm… Thanks.” I said little embarrassed.
“He carried me to my bed! Oh my god. Hope I didn’t do anything weird.” I thought.
“I’ll have one suggestion to you. About the rent of that room.” I said.
“I said already that you don’t need to pay me anything.” Javi replied.
“I know. But yesterday I noticed that here is quite dirty some places. And I don’t even want to know when you have cleaned those windows.” I said. “So my suggestion is that as long as I’m here, I clean this house.”
“You don’t need to do that.” Javi answered.
“But this would be as a payment for the room. And I’m going to clean here even you don’t give me a permission.” I said.
“Okay, I’ll give up. You can clean here.” Javi said finally. “But now I’m going to go to sleep for a while.”
“Okay, I’m going to help María today. So see you in the afternoon.” I said.
“Yeah, seeya!” Javi said and yawned again.
And like this went couple weeks. I made a huge cleaning process there which took couple days. I worked to María and Javi had his own work. After all we saw each others almost every day. So I haven’t needed to be so alone than it had sounded at first.
We became really good friends. We teased each others and were joking all the time. We played at the swimming pool like little kids. But we had fun and that was the main thing.
But of course there come something what changes everything.
Next morning I slept late. When I woke up I didn’t know where I was at first. But then I remembered that I was in Javi’s home. Then I noticed that little note on the table.
“Was it there when I came to sleep last night? Or is it appeared there during the night?” I thought.
It was from Javi. He wrote that he had to work today so I should spend my day alone. And I could be here as this was my own house.
So I ate breakfast and then I continue arranging my own things. Then I started to look what was everywhere. He had lots of books and CD’s in the living room. And those stereos and that TV. I loved them. And the kitchen included all what I have ever dreamed. This house was just like my dream house. So, I’m going to take all over of living here. But the best part was the swimming pool at the roof.
It was warm sunny day, so I decided to sunbathe a little and read some good book which I had found of Javi’s bookshelf. And so my day went on. I cooked myself a little food and then I went back to roof. I had my laptop computer also with me so I surfed on the net. I sent mail to my friend and told her that everything was fine. And I couldn’t keep it inside of me that I was living with Javi. But I trusted my friend that she wasn’t going to tell it anybody.
When the night came I returned back to in. I watched TV, surfed on the net and listened music. I was still so tired that when I watched TV I fall asleep on the couch.
Couple hours later Javi came back to home. He noticed that TV was on and she had fallen asleep on the couch.
“I must move her to her bed or otherwise she has backache tomorrow because of the couch.” he thought.
Javi lifted her carefully on his arms and carried her to her bed.
I woke at the morning and I was lively right away. I had slept enough so I wasn’t tired anymore. When I walked trough the living room I got some kind of memory flash. I remembered that I was really tired when I watched the TV last night. But I didn’t remember that I would have walk to my bed. But there I woke up.
“Weird.” I thought in my mind.
I started to make breakfast. Just coffee and sandwiches were enough. I was almost ready when Javi entered the kitchen. He looked quite sleepy.
“Good morning. Did you sleep well?” I asked.
“Urmh… Yes, when I finally fall asleep.” he said and yawned.
“I didn’t hear when you came back.” I said.
“Yeah, I noticed that. You were sleeping at the couch. And I have sometimes spent night on it and next day I had huge backache. And I didn’t want to you have it so I carried you to your own bed.” Javi explained.
“Ehm… Thanks.” I said little embarrassed.
“He carried me to my bed! Oh my god. Hope I didn’t do anything weird.” I thought.
“I’ll have one suggestion to you. About the rent of that room.” I said.
“I said already that you don’t need to pay me anything.” Javi replied.
“I know. But yesterday I noticed that here is quite dirty some places. And I don’t even want to know when you have cleaned those windows.” I said. “So my suggestion is that as long as I’m here, I clean this house.”
“You don’t need to do that.” Javi answered.
“But this would be as a payment for the room. And I’m going to clean here even you don’t give me a permission.” I said.
“Okay, I’ll give up. You can clean here.” Javi said finally. “But now I’m going to go to sleep for a while.”
“Okay, I’m going to help María today. So see you in the afternoon.” I said.
“Yeah, seeya!” Javi said and yawned again.
And like this went couple weeks. I made a huge cleaning process there which took couple days. I worked to María and Javi had his own work. After all we saw each others almost every day. So I haven’t needed to be so alone than it had sounded at first.
We became really good friends. We teased each others and were joking all the time. We played at the swimming pool like little kids. But we had fun and that was the main thing.
But of course there come something what changes everything.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
what it will be
great part...
great part...
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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This is so great story
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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This is awesome. What is coming?
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Wonderful part.... but what will change everything??
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Love is in the air. La la la.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Amazing part can't wait for more!
Hen «3 Javi- Number of posts : 140
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
What is coming?? I have so guesses.. but.. better you'll just post new part and tell me
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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I think you'll know after few parts.. Just raising your curious..Mindex wrote:Wonderful part.... but what will change everything??
yeah, maybe, maybe..girl1035 wrote:Love is in the air. La la la.
Thanks all those lovely comments..
This isn't so good than you say. I don't believe it..
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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It is, Heli, it's the truth! This is one of the stories that I just wanna read and read and if it is so, then it has to be a good one, cause I'll be easily bored.
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What will change?
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Part 9
One day I was alone at home. I listened to D’Nash’s music quite loud. But Javi’s stereos reproduced CD’s so well that I wanted to test how well it would repeat their CD. And the sound was amazing. I danced over the living room and sang along the tape.
I was singing along the song “Loco” when I suddenly heard that somebody started to sing along too. I turned around and saw Javi leaning to the doorway. I blushed and stopped the music.
“I have wondered when you’ll have notice that CD.” he said and walked to the CD-tower.
But then he realized something.
“If my CD is here then that what is your hand is…?” he asked.
“It’s mine.” I answered ashamed,
“But…But…Then you have know all the time who I’m.” he said finally.
“Yes, I have known all the time who you are.” I said quietly.
“But why you didn’t tell me?” Javi asked confused.
“Would it have change something if I had told you? I thought that I would never see you again, so I thought that there’s no point to tell you that I’m your huge fan.” I explained.
“I just thought that it’s weird that you have never asked me about my work. And now I know why. You already knew it.” he said and shook his head. “I can’t believe this.”
“What you can’t believe?” I asked little worried.
“That you lie to me.” he said angry.
“I didn’t lie to you. I just didn’t tell you everything. And I ask again would it have changed something if I had told it?” I started to feel angry.
Javi tried to answer but I didn’t let him to answer.
“Well, I guess, that if you have known it, you wouldn’t take me to your house. Who popular person would want to live with a fan.” I said. “But I can leave that you don’t need to stand this kind of liar of your eyes.” I continued angry and tried to leave the room.
But Javi didn’t let me to do that.
“Wait, you’re not going anywhere, you can still live here.” he said. “I’m just little confused that you didn’t tell me this.” he said quiet.
“I thought that you have seen enough fans and I really wanted to know that real Javi, not that who speaks with fans and smiles for the pics.” I tried to explain.
“I know what you mean. I’m sorry that I yelled at you. Can we be friends again?” he asked.
“Yes, of course.” I said and smiled.
“If we are friends give me a hug that I know that you aren’t mad about me anymore.” he asked.
“We’re friends now. Really.” I said and hugged him.
“I really got scared when you started to sing along also. I thought I was alone.” I said and laughed.
“Am I so scary when I sing?” Javi asked and winked.
“Yes you’re.” I grinned. “But let’s do something for eat. I’m starving.”
“Okay, what shall we do?” Javi asked.
“I dunno. Surprise me!” I said and smiled.
But something had changed between us. I just didn’t know what.
One day I was alone at home. I listened to D’Nash’s music quite loud. But Javi’s stereos reproduced CD’s so well that I wanted to test how well it would repeat their CD. And the sound was amazing. I danced over the living room and sang along the tape.
I was singing along the song “Loco” when I suddenly heard that somebody started to sing along too. I turned around and saw Javi leaning to the doorway. I blushed and stopped the music.
“I have wondered when you’ll have notice that CD.” he said and walked to the CD-tower.
But then he realized something.
“If my CD is here then that what is your hand is…?” he asked.
“It’s mine.” I answered ashamed,
“But…But…Then you have know all the time who I’m.” he said finally.
“Yes, I have known all the time who you are.” I said quietly.
“But why you didn’t tell me?” Javi asked confused.
“Would it have change something if I had told you? I thought that I would never see you again, so I thought that there’s no point to tell you that I’m your huge fan.” I explained.
“I just thought that it’s weird that you have never asked me about my work. And now I know why. You already knew it.” he said and shook his head. “I can’t believe this.”
“What you can’t believe?” I asked little worried.
“That you lie to me.” he said angry.
“I didn’t lie to you. I just didn’t tell you everything. And I ask again would it have changed something if I had told it?” I started to feel angry.
Javi tried to answer but I didn’t let him to answer.
“Well, I guess, that if you have known it, you wouldn’t take me to your house. Who popular person would want to live with a fan.” I said. “But I can leave that you don’t need to stand this kind of liar of your eyes.” I continued angry and tried to leave the room.
But Javi didn’t let me to do that.
“Wait, you’re not going anywhere, you can still live here.” he said. “I’m just little confused that you didn’t tell me this.” he said quiet.
“I thought that you have seen enough fans and I really wanted to know that real Javi, not that who speaks with fans and smiles for the pics.” I tried to explain.
“I know what you mean. I’m sorry that I yelled at you. Can we be friends again?” he asked.
“Yes, of course.” I said and smiled.
“If we are friends give me a hug that I know that you aren’t mad about me anymore.” he asked.
“We’re friends now. Really.” I said and hugged him.
“I really got scared when you started to sing along also. I thought I was alone.” I said and laughed.
“Am I so scary when I sing?” Javi asked and winked.
“Yes you’re.” I grinned. “But let’s do something for eat. I’m starving.”
“Okay, what shall we do?” Javi asked.
“I dunno. Surprise me!” I said and smiled.
But something had changed between us. I just didn’t know what.
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Re: "Wonderland" -Part 20 -Final part
great part... but I'm just wondering.... hmmm....
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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so great part
moreee
moreee
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Awesome. More please.
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