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~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)

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Post  Laura Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:23 pm

Great part like always Smile Wink Thumbs Up Waiting last part Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad Wink
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:39 pm

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Six years later

‘Mony,’ I sighed and shook my head. ‘A third vase today,’ I said.
‘Sorry… Pa promised to teach me how to play better,’ Mony said quietly and looked at baseball bat. It was lying on the floor next to a broken vase.
‘I hope he will… Or else we will have to hide all breakable things,’ I smiled and kissed her cheek. ‘Now go play with Boney, ok? The weather is just amazing today,’ I added.
‘Ok ma…’ Mony said and was about to go out the room, but she suddenly turned around and looked at me with her greenish eyes. ‘Ma… Can I ask?’ she said quietly.
‘Sure, dear, what is it?’ I asked and sat on the sofa. She came nearer and looked straight into my eyes…
‘Why does mister Antonio look so weird at me sometimes?’ she said after few moments of silence.
‘Because he loves you like a real father,’ I smiled. ‘Don’t fear him, Monica. You can trust them both – Antonio and Miguel. And so can Boney do…’ I said and caressed her cheek.
‘Boney says her father is cooler,’ Mony pouted.
‘They both are very cool, honey. Never doubt that,’ I laughed.
‘No, I really love pa… But mister Antonio is so good to me too… I feel like I have two fathers… It’s so weird, because everybody else has one father at school,’ she said.
‘Well, then you should be feeling very special young lady. Like in a fairytale,’ I smiled. ‘Now go to play until it doesn’t rain,’ I said and pecked her cheek again. ‘And take care of Boney, she is too young for real baseball, deal?’ I laughed and stood up. Mony smiled.
‘Yes, mom,’ she said and went to the door again. ‘And if pa or mister Antonio comes, can they come to play with us?’
‘Of course… Of course they will come,’ I said.
When Mony left the room, I sat down again. Years passed… And years were to come… And we all went on with our lives. Just two little girls were our connection, which turned our love into a friendship with each passing day. The grudge and anger was fading away, but we all three were hurt too much in the past… But we tried to stay positive and see only the good things in each other and to remember only good events. We three wanted to make a better fairytale to our children.
Deep inside I still loved them both… And every day I saw a piece of them in Mony’s greenish eyes, which were like Mikel’s and in Boney’s smile, which was just like Ony’s…
Years passed… And years were to come… Who knows what the next day might bring us…

THE END of "trilogy" Laughing


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Post  Sergo Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:47 pm

I loved the ending MrGreen
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad Laughing
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:51 pm

Sergo wrote:I loved the ending MrGreen
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad Laughing

Thanks Wink I was having problems with it Laughing
And well... Life is so, the same thing can be both sad and happy Wink Laughing
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Post  girl1035 Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:54 pm

Great part. She seems to be happy because of her kids, but sad coz of her love.
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:56 pm

girl1035 wrote:Great part. She seems to be happy because of her kids, but sad coz of her love.

Thanks Wink
And yes, that is totally right Smile
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Post  Heli Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:07 pm

Great ending! Wink
Coz it wasn't sad but on the other hand it wasn't totally happy...
Glad she could still be friend of Ony and Mikel...
This troy was really great, loved it! MrGreen
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Post  emilia Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:31 pm

Yes so great ending of great story Very Happy Very Happy
This part was so sweet and cute Very Happy Beating heart
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Post  Laura Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:41 pm

Woow Smile Smile Really great ending of wonderful story Thumbs Up Wink
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 9:53 pm

Thanks, Heli, Katja, Laura Wink
You're amazing readers, girls Wink Beating heart
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Post  Mindex Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:13 pm

Shocked oh, god! I just started crying! Surprised Dunno why, but something touched me in this end... Sad Thanks, Angie, for writing this and sharing this with us. I loved this story really! Thumbs Up
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Post  Monikute Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:14 pm

Aw Shocked Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
It's so great and beautiful story Angie....
I want to say BID THANKS for that story Wink and I hope that you will write more amazing stories like this one Wink
Sekmes rasant nauja istorija Very Happy
ir Aciu Rolling Eyes
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:17 pm

Mindex wrote:Shocked oh, god! I just started crying! Surprised Dunno why, but something touched me in this end... Sad Thanks, Angie, for writing this and sharing this with us. I loved this story really! Thumbs Up


Awww, thanks, honey Sad
Glad it touched you so much Wink
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:18 pm

Monikute wrote:Aw Shocked Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
It's so great and beautiful story Angie....
I want to say BID THANKS for that story Wink and I hope that you will write more amazing stories like this one Wink
Sekmes rasant nauja istorija Very Happy
ir Aciu Rolling Eyes


Aciukas, saulyt!!!! Wink
Glad to have another reader from my own country MrGreen Thanks for your support Wink
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Post  Tinute Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:19 pm

really amazing story...
thanks God no one ded in this story end hahahhaha..
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Post  Monikute Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:21 pm

Ne nada Rolling Eyes I really love this story..and of course I hold you Wink....
Waiting new story Razz Razz Laughing
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Post  Monikute Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:22 pm

Oh Tina..I agree with you Razz Laughing
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 10:28 pm

Tinute wrote:really amazing story...
thanks God no one ded in this story end hahahhaha..


Hahahahaha Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
Ya evil Laughing
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Post  Sergo Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:02 pm

Kyra wrote:
Sergo wrote:I loved the ending MrGreen
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad Laughing

Thanks Wink I was having problems with it Laughing
And well... Life is so, the same thing can be both sad and happy Wink Laughing
I see... But it's still better than your other sad endings Razz
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:05 pm

Sergo wrote:
Kyra wrote:
Sergo wrote:I loved the ending MrGreen
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad Laughing

Thanks Wink I was having problems with it Laughing
And well... Life is so, the same thing can be both sad and happy Wink Laughing
I see... But it's still better than your other sad endings Razz

Hah, well, dunno, I like to have different endings Razz
I had some happy ones too Razz
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Post  Prisca Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:29 pm

i loved this enddd... because it reallyy seems real.... Smile Smile

and i have to say i laughed a lot with Mony calling mister antonio Laughing Laughing

amazing work Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Post  Kyra - Angie Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:30 pm

Pris aka PMad wrote:i loved this enddd... because it reallyy seems real.... Smile Smile

and i have to say i laughed a lot with Mony calling mister antonio Laughing Laughing

amazing work Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

Thanks, Pris Wink Embarassed

And I am glad I wasn't the only one who was laughing at that Laughing Laughing Laughing Laughing
Couldn't type for a moment or two Laughing
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Post  Prisca Tue Mar 18, 2008 11:37 pm

i was thinking maybe a kid calling him that and pushing is jacket to see if he listen him Laughing Laughing Laughing
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Post  Riikka Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:09 am

I totally seriously really love the end!!!
thanks for writing the story!
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Post  **Unnur** Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:19 am

Fantastic ending for a fantastic story by a fantastic writer Smile
is there gonna be a new story? i waant one Very Happy
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