~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Great part like always Waiting last part
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Six years later
‘Mony,’ I sighed and shook my head. ‘A third vase today,’ I said.
‘Sorry… Pa promised to teach me how to play better,’ Mony said quietly and looked at baseball bat. It was lying on the floor next to a broken vase.
‘I hope he will… Or else we will have to hide all breakable things,’ I smiled and kissed her cheek. ‘Now go play with Boney, ok? The weather is just amazing today,’ I added.
‘Ok ma…’ Mony said and was about to go out the room, but she suddenly turned around and looked at me with her greenish eyes. ‘Ma… Can I ask?’ she said quietly.
‘Sure, dear, what is it?’ I asked and sat on the sofa. She came nearer and looked straight into my eyes…
‘Why does mister Antonio look so weird at me sometimes?’ she said after few moments of silence.
‘Because he loves you like a real father,’ I smiled. ‘Don’t fear him, Monica. You can trust them both – Antonio and Miguel. And so can Boney do…’ I said and caressed her cheek.
‘Boney says her father is cooler,’ Mony pouted.
‘They both are very cool, honey. Never doubt that,’ I laughed.
‘No, I really love pa… But mister Antonio is so good to me too… I feel like I have two fathers… It’s so weird, because everybody else has one father at school,’ she said.
‘Well, then you should be feeling very special young lady. Like in a fairytale,’ I smiled. ‘Now go to play until it doesn’t rain,’ I said and pecked her cheek again. ‘And take care of Boney, she is too young for real baseball, deal?’ I laughed and stood up. Mony smiled.
‘Yes, mom,’ she said and went to the door again. ‘And if pa or mister Antonio comes, can they come to play with us?’
‘Of course… Of course they will come,’ I said.
When Mony left the room, I sat down again. Years passed… And years were to come… And we all went on with our lives. Just two little girls were our connection, which turned our love into a friendship with each passing day. The grudge and anger was fading away, but we all three were hurt too much in the past… But we tried to stay positive and see only the good things in each other and to remember only good events. We three wanted to make a better fairytale to our children.
Deep inside I still loved them both… And every day I saw a piece of them in Mony’s greenish eyes, which were like Mikel’s and in Boney’s smile, which was just like Ony’s…
Years passed… And years were to come… Who knows what the next day might bring us…
THE END of "trilogy"
Six years later
‘Mony,’ I sighed and shook my head. ‘A third vase today,’ I said.
‘Sorry… Pa promised to teach me how to play better,’ Mony said quietly and looked at baseball bat. It was lying on the floor next to a broken vase.
‘I hope he will… Or else we will have to hide all breakable things,’ I smiled and kissed her cheek. ‘Now go play with Boney, ok? The weather is just amazing today,’ I added.
‘Ok ma…’ Mony said and was about to go out the room, but she suddenly turned around and looked at me with her greenish eyes. ‘Ma… Can I ask?’ she said quietly.
‘Sure, dear, what is it?’ I asked and sat on the sofa. She came nearer and looked straight into my eyes…
‘Why does mister Antonio look so weird at me sometimes?’ she said after few moments of silence.
‘Because he loves you like a real father,’ I smiled. ‘Don’t fear him, Monica. You can trust them both – Antonio and Miguel. And so can Boney do…’ I said and caressed her cheek.
‘Boney says her father is cooler,’ Mony pouted.
‘They both are very cool, honey. Never doubt that,’ I laughed.
‘No, I really love pa… But mister Antonio is so good to me too… I feel like I have two fathers… It’s so weird, because everybody else has one father at school,’ she said.
‘Well, then you should be feeling very special young lady. Like in a fairytale,’ I smiled. ‘Now go to play until it doesn’t rain,’ I said and pecked her cheek again. ‘And take care of Boney, she is too young for real baseball, deal?’ I laughed and stood up. Mony smiled.
‘Yes, mom,’ she said and went to the door again. ‘And if pa or mister Antonio comes, can they come to play with us?’
‘Of course… Of course they will come,’ I said.
When Mony left the room, I sat down again. Years passed… And years were to come… And we all went on with our lives. Just two little girls were our connection, which turned our love into a friendship with each passing day. The grudge and anger was fading away, but we all three were hurt too much in the past… But we tried to stay positive and see only the good things in each other and to remember only good events. We three wanted to make a better fairytale to our children.
Deep inside I still loved them both… And every day I saw a piece of them in Mony’s greenish eyes, which were like Mikel’s and in Boney’s smile, which was just like Ony’s…
Years passed… And years were to come… Who knows what the next day might bring us…
THE END of "trilogy"
Last edited by Kyra on Tue Mar 18, 2008 8:56 pm; edited 1 time in total
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
I loved the ending
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Sergo wrote:I loved the ending
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad
Thanks I was having problems with it
And well... Life is so, the same thing can be both sad and happy
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Great part. She seems to be happy because of her kids, but sad coz of her love.
girl1035- Number of posts : 1479
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
girl1035 wrote:Great part. She seems to be happy because of her kids, but sad coz of her love.
Thanks
And yes, that is totally right
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Great ending!
Coz it wasn't sad but on the other hand it wasn't totally happy...
Glad she could still be friend of Ony and Mikel...
This troy was really great, loved it!
Coz it wasn't sad but on the other hand it wasn't totally happy...
Glad she could still be friend of Ony and Mikel...
This troy was really great, loved it!
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Yes so great ending of great story
This part was so sweet and cute
This part was so sweet and cute
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Woow Really great ending of wonderful story
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Thanks, Heli, Katja, Laura
You're amazing readers, girls
You're amazing readers, girls
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
oh, god! I just started crying! Dunno why, but something touched me in this end... Thanks, Angie, for writing this and sharing this with us. I loved this story really!
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Aw
It's so great and beautiful story Angie....
I want to say BID THANKS for that story and I hope that you will write more amazing stories like this one
Sekmes rasant nauja istorija
ir Aciu
It's so great and beautiful story Angie....
I want to say BID THANKS for that story and I hope that you will write more amazing stories like this one
Sekmes rasant nauja istorija
ir Aciu
Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Mindex wrote: oh, god! I just started crying! Dunno why, but something touched me in this end... Thanks, Angie, for writing this and sharing this with us. I loved this story really!
Awww, thanks, honey
Glad it touched you so much
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Monikute wrote:Aw
It's so great and beautiful story Angie....
I want to say BID THANKS for that story and I hope that you will write more amazing stories like this one
Sekmes rasant nauja istorija
ir Aciu
Aciukas, saulyt!!!!
Glad to have another reader from my own country Thanks for your support
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
really amazing story...
thanks God no one ded in this story end hahahhaha..
thanks God no one ded in this story end hahahhaha..
Tinute- Number of posts : 352
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Ne nada I really love this story..and of course I hold you ....
Waiting new story
Waiting new story
Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Tinute wrote:really amazing story...
thanks God no one ded in this story end hahahhaha..
Hahahahaha
Ya evil
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
I see... But it's still better than your other sad endingsKyra wrote:Sergo wrote:I loved the ending
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad
Thanks I was having problems with it
And well... Life is so, the same thing can be both sad and happy
Sergo- Number of posts : 10503
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Sergo wrote:I see... But it's still better than your other sad endingsKyra wrote:Sergo wrote:I loved the ending
But confused cause I dunno if it's happy or sad
Thanks I was having problems with it
And well... Life is so, the same thing can be both sad and happy
Hah, well, dunno, I like to have different endings
I had some happy ones too
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
i loved this enddd... because it reallyy seems real....
and i have to say i laughed a lot with Mony calling mister antonio
amazing work
and i have to say i laughed a lot with Mony calling mister antonio
amazing work
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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Pris aka PMad wrote:i loved this enddd... because it reallyy seems real....
and i have to say i laughed a lot with Mony calling mister antonio
amazing work
Thanks, Pris
And I am glad I wasn't the only one who was laughing at that
Couldn't type for a moment or two
Kyra - Angie- Number of posts : 1158
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
i was thinking maybe a kid calling him that and pushing is jacket to see if he listen him
Prisca- Number of posts : 12495
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I totally seriously really love the end!!!
thanks for writing the story!
thanks for writing the story!
Riikka- Number of posts : 384
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Re: ~Fairytale III~ part 15 (THE END)
Fantastic ending for a fantastic story by a fantastic writer
is there gonna be a new story? i waant one
is there gonna be a new story? i waant one
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