~Wrong man~ ~Part 31 ~ FINAL PART!
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Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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Part 19; Naw, Javi is so sweet!
Part 20; That was very kind of Ony!
I loved both parts! I'm curious to what will happen next.
Moooore!
Part 20; That was very kind of Ony!
I loved both parts! I'm curious to what will happen next.
Moooore!
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Awwww Ony is so kind
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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Part 21
I think everybody noticed that I was better mood nowadays. Mikel was the first one who dared to ask about it. I told him that I had been unsure about some things but now everything was fine. And he was satisfied to my answer. I spent much more time with them than before. I wasn’t talking all the time, I was on the background usually writing their book.
I think nobody noticed that I wasn’t wearing my wedding ring anymore. Though I think the only ones who even knew about it were Ony and Javi. I had put it into my jewellery box after I had talked with Ony. I tried to spend as much time as I could with Javi without arousing any suspicions. That’s why I tried to talk with everybody fairly. And I noticed that I and Javi had the same kind of sense of humour. If I told a joke I could be sure that Javi laughed at it. Many times others gave weird looks to us. They couldn’t understand our jokes.
I think Ony had fun while following how I was trying to direct Javi’s attention to me. I usually asked Javi to do the groceries with me, if it was my turn to do them. Or then I helped him to make the dinner for us. Sometimes I was wondering how Mikel or Basty could be so blind that they didn’t notice that at all. That I was spending a lot of time with Javi.
One evening I was watching TV. My favourite TV-program was going. It was actually the only program which I watched from TV. Javi came to living room, sat next to me, took the remote control from the table and switched the channel to some sport one and started to watch football.
- Hey! I was watching that! I said annoyed.
- Well, this match is unique, you can watch that series every week, Javi explained staring at the TV closely.
- But you’re watching TV every day, I watch only once a week this series. So, I watch TV less, so I have the right to watch it.
Javi just shook his head and continued watching it.
- You can record that match and watch it when I’ve finished.
- You can do it also, Javi answered.
- No, because I was here first! I argued. – I’ve the right to watch it now. If you won’t give the remote control to me now I’ll disturb you the rest of the evening, I threatened him.
I waited for a while but nothing happened. I tried to take the remote from him but Javi didn’t give it to me.
- Blame yourself now, I muttered.
I knew that that Javi didn’t like tickling at all. So I started to poke his ribs. And he really didn’t like. First he asked me to stop but when it didn’t help he started to yell. I just laughed at him and that made him even angrier. Of course I knew that he wasn’t angry for real. He was just acting.
- If you won’t stop now I’ll tickle you soon! Javi shouted.
He knew that I hated it as much as he did. But I didn’t stop tickling. When I realized that Javi was really going to do it I escaped quickly to kitchen where other guys were. But Javi followed me there.
- Basty help me! Javi’s teasing me! I complained like a little child and I hid myself behind Basty’s back. Basty gave very angry look to Javi.
- Hey, I didn’t start this. It was Ana! Javi argued.
- It’s totally the same who started it. Don’t tease her.
Javi sighed frustrated and went watch TV. I followed him and went to stand in front of TV.
- You aren’t watching it if I can’t do it either, I said and crossed my arms.
Javi stood up and run out me. I was chicken and I hid myself again behind Basty’s back.
When this happened already third time Basty seemed really annoyed. When Javi went again to living room he realized that the match was already over. Again I got pretty good reason to hide behind Basty. Javi sat down on the chair.
- Ok, I’ll give up. You win, Javi sighed.
- YYYAAAYYY! Thanks a lot Basty for your help, I smiled and gave a kiss on his cheek.
- Hey! I want one too! Mikel argued.
- Well, okay. Even you did nothing, I said and gave a kiss to him too.
- Are you going to leave me without one? Ony asked next.
- Oh, you too…Alright, I said and gave a kiss to him.
- So, I can’t have a one too? Javi asked.
- Hhmm…You didn’t let me to watch TV. But it would be too mean to leave you with out it, I said and gave one kiss to his cheek too. But at the same time I messed up his hair.
I knew how carefully he took care of his hair. Then I ran quickly to my room and laughed while running.
Javi stood up fast and angry but one angrier look from Basty stopped Javi from running after Ana.
- Leave her alone now. You’re acting like kids.
Mikel and Ony just laughed. Basty was acting just like he would be their father.
- But…But…Didn’t you see it? Javi asked hopeless.
- Sure I did. But you deserved it. You should have let her to watch the TV, Basty said and winked.
All three guys were laughing at Javi’s surprised face.
That kind of time we had during many days. We were teasing each others a lot. We all got our parts of it, even me. But we all knew that it was just a game. And then it was more fun. Of course it was innocent teasing and we all laughed afterwards. I enjoyed a lot of being there. Guys were funny company, always fooling around. But the best thing was that they knew when the invisible line was crossed and stopped. That was the thing which I appreciated a lot.
I think everybody noticed that I was better mood nowadays. Mikel was the first one who dared to ask about it. I told him that I had been unsure about some things but now everything was fine. And he was satisfied to my answer. I spent much more time with them than before. I wasn’t talking all the time, I was on the background usually writing their book.
I think nobody noticed that I wasn’t wearing my wedding ring anymore. Though I think the only ones who even knew about it were Ony and Javi. I had put it into my jewellery box after I had talked with Ony. I tried to spend as much time as I could with Javi without arousing any suspicions. That’s why I tried to talk with everybody fairly. And I noticed that I and Javi had the same kind of sense of humour. If I told a joke I could be sure that Javi laughed at it. Many times others gave weird looks to us. They couldn’t understand our jokes.
I think Ony had fun while following how I was trying to direct Javi’s attention to me. I usually asked Javi to do the groceries with me, if it was my turn to do them. Or then I helped him to make the dinner for us. Sometimes I was wondering how Mikel or Basty could be so blind that they didn’t notice that at all. That I was spending a lot of time with Javi.
One evening I was watching TV. My favourite TV-program was going. It was actually the only program which I watched from TV. Javi came to living room, sat next to me, took the remote control from the table and switched the channel to some sport one and started to watch football.
- Hey! I was watching that! I said annoyed.
- Well, this match is unique, you can watch that series every week, Javi explained staring at the TV closely.
- But you’re watching TV every day, I watch only once a week this series. So, I watch TV less, so I have the right to watch it.
Javi just shook his head and continued watching it.
- You can record that match and watch it when I’ve finished.
- You can do it also, Javi answered.
- No, because I was here first! I argued. – I’ve the right to watch it now. If you won’t give the remote control to me now I’ll disturb you the rest of the evening, I threatened him.
I waited for a while but nothing happened. I tried to take the remote from him but Javi didn’t give it to me.
- Blame yourself now, I muttered.
I knew that that Javi didn’t like tickling at all. So I started to poke his ribs. And he really didn’t like. First he asked me to stop but when it didn’t help he started to yell. I just laughed at him and that made him even angrier. Of course I knew that he wasn’t angry for real. He was just acting.
- If you won’t stop now I’ll tickle you soon! Javi shouted.
He knew that I hated it as much as he did. But I didn’t stop tickling. When I realized that Javi was really going to do it I escaped quickly to kitchen where other guys were. But Javi followed me there.
- Basty help me! Javi’s teasing me! I complained like a little child and I hid myself behind Basty’s back. Basty gave very angry look to Javi.
- Hey, I didn’t start this. It was Ana! Javi argued.
- It’s totally the same who started it. Don’t tease her.
Javi sighed frustrated and went watch TV. I followed him and went to stand in front of TV.
- You aren’t watching it if I can’t do it either, I said and crossed my arms.
Javi stood up and run out me. I was chicken and I hid myself again behind Basty’s back.
When this happened already third time Basty seemed really annoyed. When Javi went again to living room he realized that the match was already over. Again I got pretty good reason to hide behind Basty. Javi sat down on the chair.
- Ok, I’ll give up. You win, Javi sighed.
- YYYAAAYYY! Thanks a lot Basty for your help, I smiled and gave a kiss on his cheek.
- Hey! I want one too! Mikel argued.
- Well, okay. Even you did nothing, I said and gave a kiss to him too.
- Are you going to leave me without one? Ony asked next.
- Oh, you too…Alright, I said and gave a kiss to him.
- So, I can’t have a one too? Javi asked.
- Hhmm…You didn’t let me to watch TV. But it would be too mean to leave you with out it, I said and gave one kiss to his cheek too. But at the same time I messed up his hair.
I knew how carefully he took care of his hair. Then I ran quickly to my room and laughed while running.
Javi stood up fast and angry but one angrier look from Basty stopped Javi from running after Ana.
- Leave her alone now. You’re acting like kids.
Mikel and Ony just laughed. Basty was acting just like he would be their father.
- But…But…Didn’t you see it? Javi asked hopeless.
- Sure I did. But you deserved it. You should have let her to watch the TV, Basty said and winked.
All three guys were laughing at Javi’s surprised face.
That kind of time we had during many days. We were teasing each others a lot. We all got our parts of it, even me. But we all knew that it was just a game. And then it was more fun. Of course it was innocent teasing and we all laughed afterwards. I enjoyed a lot of being there. Guys were funny company, always fooling around. But the best thing was that they knew when the invisible line was crossed and stopped. That was the thing which I appreciated a lot.
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Javi was mean! Ana didn't give up! Yay! Mmmmmoooorrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
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So cute and funny
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Aww so cute she won
Great part
Great part
Laura- Number of posts : 2572
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That was funny!!
Moreeeeeeeeeee??
Moreeeeeeeeeee??
NETTTE- Number of posts : 512
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Thanks a lot!
Part 22
Everything seemed to be okay those days. D’Nash was doing their album and I was writing their book. Things went forward all the time. Except one thing. Nothing happened between me and Javi. I had talked about that with Ony. He was nowadays my confidant friend. I told him many things about me. I had already confessed to him that this wasn’t a joke. I had really fallen in love with Javi. But Javi didn’t notice it at all. He treated me like a friend even I wanted more. But I was afraid to say anything to him. So I kept my mouth shut and suffered internally. I didn’t want to break our friendship only because of that I had deeper feelings against him. I was happy that we could be at least friends.
I think nobody can stand this kind of situation long. Well, I couldn’t either. The situation was like a hell after many days. It started to be really hard to be even in same room with Javi. I couldn’t show him how much I cared about him. I had to act like friends do. I tried to find time to talk with Ony because everything was going totally wrong right now. I needed to do something. Finally I asked Ony to go for a walk with me. I wanted to talk with him so badly.
- So, you wanted to talk, Ony said when we had left from the cottage.
- Yes. I think you’ve noticed that nothing has happened between me and Javi. We’re still friends, I started to explain.
- Yeah, I have. But there may be plenty of reasons for that, Ony answered.
- Why I can’t think any of them? I asked.
- First, we gave a job to you. So it would look a bit weird if you two had relationship. Or then there might be another reason too… It might be that Javi thinks that you aren’t his kind of type. His previous girlfriends have been very talkative and they have looked like models.
- So you’re trying to say that I should talk more and be more beautiful.
- No, you don’t have to change. You’re perfect just what kind of you are right now. I can’t say anything surely but it might be that Javi don’t think you as good girlfriend candidate because you’re totally different than his other girlfriends have been.
- But Javi is totally different person than my other boyfriends have been.
- But I’m just guessing what Javi could think. You should talk with Javi if you want to know why he doesn’t notice you, Ony said.
- I don’t want to take a risk that our friendship would break if I told that I’ve deeper feelings against him.
- Then you just have to stand this situation. I’m sorry that I can’t help you more, Ony was sorry.
- It’s ok. You’ve done enough while listening to my worries, I smiled. – And I thought I should probably leave at home.
- The situation is so bad? Ony asked.
- I think it’s. And maybe when I won’t see Javi for a while, my feelings may change, I explained quietly.
- Yeah, maybe. But tell me when you want to leave, so I’ll drive you home, Ony said.
- You’re staying here? I asked.
- Yes. I don’t have anything else to do now so I can be here helping guys to record the album, Ony answered.
- Thanks for being such a good friend, I smiled and hugged Ony.
- You’re welcome. Of course I want to help my friends as much as I can.
After that conversation I gave up with Javi. There wasn’t any point to waste my energy to him anymore. I couldn’t force him to like me more than he already did.
Part 22
Everything seemed to be okay those days. D’Nash was doing their album and I was writing their book. Things went forward all the time. Except one thing. Nothing happened between me and Javi. I had talked about that with Ony. He was nowadays my confidant friend. I told him many things about me. I had already confessed to him that this wasn’t a joke. I had really fallen in love with Javi. But Javi didn’t notice it at all. He treated me like a friend even I wanted more. But I was afraid to say anything to him. So I kept my mouth shut and suffered internally. I didn’t want to break our friendship only because of that I had deeper feelings against him. I was happy that we could be at least friends.
I think nobody can stand this kind of situation long. Well, I couldn’t either. The situation was like a hell after many days. It started to be really hard to be even in same room with Javi. I couldn’t show him how much I cared about him. I had to act like friends do. I tried to find time to talk with Ony because everything was going totally wrong right now. I needed to do something. Finally I asked Ony to go for a walk with me. I wanted to talk with him so badly.
- So, you wanted to talk, Ony said when we had left from the cottage.
- Yes. I think you’ve noticed that nothing has happened between me and Javi. We’re still friends, I started to explain.
- Yeah, I have. But there may be plenty of reasons for that, Ony answered.
- Why I can’t think any of them? I asked.
- First, we gave a job to you. So it would look a bit weird if you two had relationship. Or then there might be another reason too… It might be that Javi thinks that you aren’t his kind of type. His previous girlfriends have been very talkative and they have looked like models.
- So you’re trying to say that I should talk more and be more beautiful.
- No, you don’t have to change. You’re perfect just what kind of you are right now. I can’t say anything surely but it might be that Javi don’t think you as good girlfriend candidate because you’re totally different than his other girlfriends have been.
- But Javi is totally different person than my other boyfriends have been.
- But I’m just guessing what Javi could think. You should talk with Javi if you want to know why he doesn’t notice you, Ony said.
- I don’t want to take a risk that our friendship would break if I told that I’ve deeper feelings against him.
- Then you just have to stand this situation. I’m sorry that I can’t help you more, Ony was sorry.
- It’s ok. You’ve done enough while listening to my worries, I smiled. – And I thought I should probably leave at home.
- The situation is so bad? Ony asked.
- I think it’s. And maybe when I won’t see Javi for a while, my feelings may change, I explained quietly.
- Yeah, maybe. But tell me when you want to leave, so I’ll drive you home, Ony said.
- You’re staying here? I asked.
- Yes. I don’t have anything else to do now so I can be here helping guys to record the album, Ony answered.
- Thanks for being such a good friend, I smiled and hugged Ony.
- You’re welcome. Of course I want to help my friends as much as I can.
After that conversation I gave up with Javi. There wasn’t any point to waste my energy to him anymore. I couldn’t force him to like me more than he already did.
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Oooooo.... Well, that's bad, but I know something good will happen sooner or later...
Mindex- Number of posts : 1620
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You know? Well, that's good for you then.
Heli- Number of posts : 1137
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Poor she...
But great part anyway
But great part anyway
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Nawww poor both
Hope the same as Mar
Great part
Hope the same as Mar
Great part
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omg all these parts were amaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing
ohhh this relationship loooks like mine now
ohhh this relationship loooks like mine now
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Naw. Thanks girls!
Part 23
Few days later I told to guys that I had decided to go back home. They all were surprised for my decision except Ony who already knew about it.
- Why you won’t be here until the book is ready? Mikel asked.
- I know now how this book will continue and I’ve already all necessary information for the book. So I don’t need your help until the book is ready. And I’ve so many things to do at home already. So I can write your book and do the backed-up work at the same time.
- We’ll miss you here, Basty confessed.
- Aaw. I’ll miss you all too, I smiled.
- When you’ll leave then? Javi asked curious.
- Ony promised me to drive me home already today, I answered.
- So soon? And you didn’t tell anything to us, Javi complained.
- Well, I got a call from my manager this morning and she asked if I could come back home as soon as possible, I lied fluently.
Then we made that hugging, kissing thing as a goodbye. I promised to call sometimes how the book would go forward. And when the book would be finally ready I promised to deliver the first edition to them some way.
Then I was already sitting in the car with Ony, driving back home to Madrid.
- It wasn’t that hard what I thought, I said.
- I was just thinking that you didn’t mind about that when I said that Javi liked more different kind of woman than what you are? Ony asked finally.
- Of course I didn’t. I can’t change me that kind of woman who Javi obviously likes. So it’s better give up then, I answered.
- That’s great, Ony sighed for relief. – I was a bit afraid that you would be mad at me because I said something like that.
- No, you just told what you thought. I appreciate that a lot.
- I hope that Javi will understand some day what he’ll loose when he didn’t notice you, Ony said.
- I don’t even want to think about him now. It’s the best to try to forget him now, I said quietly. – Even that may be difficult.
The rest of the drive we both were sitting deep in our thoughts. But at last Ony stopped the car in front of my house.
- Thanks for driving me here, I said.
- No problem, Ony answered. – Call me if you want to talk. You know that I’ll always listen to you.
- Of course I know. Thanks, I said and got out from the car.
I followed with my eyes how Ony turned the car and drove away back to Barcelona, back to cottage where Javi was. I waved to Ony until the car vanished into the traffic. I sighed and took my bag and went inside of my house.
The first thing which I noticed in my flat was huge pile of post waiting for me. I decided to go the post trough right away. I would have something else to think than Javi. I put all bills to one pile, all magazines and newspapers to one. And all advertisements I put immediately away. I should have asked somebody to take care of my post, so I wouldn’t have needed to do everything during one day. To go trough the one month’s post in one day. But it was too late to complain anymore. So I went through my post, paid the bills, unpacked my bag, did the groceries and ate my dinner. Then I already noticed that it was evening. I had been moving the whole day and I haven’t had time to think Javi at all. This was good start.
Part 23
Few days later I told to guys that I had decided to go back home. They all were surprised for my decision except Ony who already knew about it.
- Why you won’t be here until the book is ready? Mikel asked.
- I know now how this book will continue and I’ve already all necessary information for the book. So I don’t need your help until the book is ready. And I’ve so many things to do at home already. So I can write your book and do the backed-up work at the same time.
- We’ll miss you here, Basty confessed.
- Aaw. I’ll miss you all too, I smiled.
- When you’ll leave then? Javi asked curious.
- Ony promised me to drive me home already today, I answered.
- So soon? And you didn’t tell anything to us, Javi complained.
- Well, I got a call from my manager this morning and she asked if I could come back home as soon as possible, I lied fluently.
Then we made that hugging, kissing thing as a goodbye. I promised to call sometimes how the book would go forward. And when the book would be finally ready I promised to deliver the first edition to them some way.
Then I was already sitting in the car with Ony, driving back home to Madrid.
- It wasn’t that hard what I thought, I said.
- I was just thinking that you didn’t mind about that when I said that Javi liked more different kind of woman than what you are? Ony asked finally.
- Of course I didn’t. I can’t change me that kind of woman who Javi obviously likes. So it’s better give up then, I answered.
- That’s great, Ony sighed for relief. – I was a bit afraid that you would be mad at me because I said something like that.
- No, you just told what you thought. I appreciate that a lot.
- I hope that Javi will understand some day what he’ll loose when he didn’t notice you, Ony said.
- I don’t even want to think about him now. It’s the best to try to forget him now, I said quietly. – Even that may be difficult.
The rest of the drive we both were sitting deep in our thoughts. But at last Ony stopped the car in front of my house.
- Thanks for driving me here, I said.
- No problem, Ony answered. – Call me if you want to talk. You know that I’ll always listen to you.
- Of course I know. Thanks, I said and got out from the car.
I followed with my eyes how Ony turned the car and drove away back to Barcelona, back to cottage where Javi was. I waved to Ony until the car vanished into the traffic. I sighed and took my bag and went inside of my house.
The first thing which I noticed in my flat was huge pile of post waiting for me. I decided to go the post trough right away. I would have something else to think than Javi. I put all bills to one pile, all magazines and newspapers to one. And all advertisements I put immediately away. I should have asked somebody to take care of my post, so I wouldn’t have needed to do everything during one day. To go trough the one month’s post in one day. But it was too late to complain anymore. So I went through my post, paid the bills, unpacked my bag, did the groceries and ate my dinner. Then I already noticed that it was evening. I had been moving the whole day and I haven’t had time to think Javi at all. This was good start.
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So great part part
emilia- Number of posts : 2012
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Hmm... suddenly I felt so lonely Well, Javi has to open his eyes in the end... right?
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You'll see it later~Mar~ wrote:She musn't try to forget him, she must talk with him
And Minna, you know that I can't say anything..
Se pilaa sun lukukomuksen muuten..
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